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dinazz

@dinazz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

CH 1

Awesome !!

Haha ! what a first meeting ! and he even has an impression about her as the girl who was demanding extra chocolate at the counter ! 😆😆 Too soon to make impressions about others , right ? 😉😆

Ooo .. they both are snappy .. Takkar barabar ki hai ! 😆

ohkay.. Seems that Kabir is about to trust her .. And wrong signal .😆 Looks can be deceptive .. Kabir surely got confused when Ananya came to him when maybe he was expecting someone else !😆

Someone is falling in love !😆😆 Sure she herself is going to be a big challenge for him 😆

Pakki dosti hai ! Ananya aur Ronnie ki ofcourse 😆 Sarcasm .. really !.. (I like sarcasm alot !😳)

Haha ! Ananya , the confident girl is fumbling ! 😳😆

Hahahaha! kabir can be .. fun !😆 he teased her so much .. i can imagine her face ! 😆

Wow ! and she got the job !! Sure he couldnt leave a girl as talented as her !

Thanks for the pm !!

👏 Great job Karma !

Loved the update !

Sorry for the late comment ..

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dinazz

@dinazz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

CH 2

Amazing !

Ananya lost ! Kya ho gaya !😲

Oh wow ! Her story is going to be covered ! Lovely ! Things are going so fast ! 👏

Aww! maska lagana chal raha hai doston ke beech ..😆

Heated convo .. oh whats going on ? Thank god here comes Kabir to the rescue !😃

Haha ! kabir ke samne aake kaun apne shabd nahi bhoolta !😆

Ah ! expectations hurt .. and also leads to disappointment .. yaa, poor Ananya .. But Ronnie hai na ! woh ghar drop kar dega !!😃

Superb update ! 😃

Great going Karma !! 👏

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

'Splendid'.The chapters have been crafted out with extreme fluidity.The cases are intriguing.:)eagerly awaiting for the twists and snide sarcasm updates .
Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.:)

Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 9 years ago

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Swara85

@Swara85

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

It was an awesome update..👍🏼I liked it.!
Ah..I love reading cases..very glad that you have brought a case in here too..And well, it was good..
How did Ananya manage to bring Ri to the office..? and Zaara..her inputs will be lot helpful, i guess. But who was at her door..? Sheena?
Amidst all this Ananya and Kabir's scenes were too good..😉from flirting-shirting to seedha angry young man..to being jealous..wah..wah.! I liked reading the transformations.
Ananya..her banters were cute and her reactions seeing a different Kabir was worth watching (reading I mean).😆
Continue soon..thanks for pm.. waiting to know more.

@Shree: I know you are busy but still..Just to remind you I'm waiting for RI update.

Edited by Swara85 - 9 years ago

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Suzaina

@Manyata5

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

This was every bit of what i call awesome!

Thanks for the pm or else i would have missed such happening update!

I owe you one for that..

Amazing yaar..

I cannot stop thinking who that 'aap' might be!

So cont soon and dont forget me this time...

Love you

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aaliya9872

@aaliya9872

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

I really loved it I can only imagine how the whole scene turns upto be I just loved it a gush of excitement rushed through my nerve while reading ur update eagerly waiting for the next one

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aaliya9872

@aaliya9872

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

pls update it asap i hav been waiting like mad dogs for the next part pls update it fast!!!!1😃

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: 0913155
Just one word FAB😃😛 amazing where do u get such good ideas n concept😃 loved ithank specially for pm😳😃

THanks a ton dear! Means a lot!

Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen
Amazing update

Thank u <3

Originally posted by: dinazz
CH 1
Awesome !!
Haha ! what a first meeting ! and he even has an impression about her as the girl who was demanding extra chocolate at the counter ! 😆😆 Too soon to make impressions about others , right ? 😉😆
Ooo .. they both are snappy .. Takkar barabar ki hai ! 😆
ohkay.. Seems that Kabir is about to trust her .. And wrong signal .😆 Looks can be deceptive .. Kabir surely got confused when Ananya came to him when maybe he was expecting someone else !😆
Someone is falling in love !😆😆 Sure she herself is going to be a big challenge for him 😆
Pakki dosti hai ! Ananya aur Ronnie ki ofcourse 😆 Sarcasm .. really !.. (I like sarcasm alot !😳)
Haha ! Ananya , the confident girl is fumbling ! 😳😆
Hahahaha! kabir can be .. fun !😆 he teased her so much .. i can imagine her face ! 😆
Wow ! and she got the job !! Sure he couldnt leave a girl as talented as her !
Thanks for the pm !!
👏 Great job Karma !
Loved the update !
Sorry for the late comment ..

WOah! Thanks for the huge comment! Haha as you rightly mentioned, you exactly caught a hang of what all's going on <3

I am so glad you loved the work so so so much!

Originally posted by: dinazz
CH 2
Amazing !
Ananya lost ! Kya ho gaya !😲
Oh wow ! Her story is going to be covered ! Lovely ! Things are going so fast ! 👏
Aww! maska lagana chal raha hai doston ke beech ..😆
Heated convo .. oh whats going on ? Thank god here comes Kabir to the rescue !😃
Haha ! kabir ke samne aake kaun apne shabd nahi bhoolta !😆
Ah ! expectations hurt .. and also leads to disappointment .. yaa, poor Ananya .. But Ronnie hai na ! woh ghar drop kar dega !!😃
Superb update ! 😃
Great going Karma !! 👏

Your comments mean a lot to me dear! I am so glad you loved both the chapters! Yeah... Kabbie isn't exactly going to spend his whole day in pampering someone now... maybe later ;)

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
'Splendid'.The chapters have been crafted out with extreme fluidity.The cases are intriguing.:)eagerly awaiting for the twists and snide sarcasm updates .
Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.:)

Oh I am glad that you loved this! Yes, I do have a soft spot for cases 😆

Originally posted by: Swara85
It was an awesome update..👍🏼I liked it.!
Ah..I love reading cases..very glad that you have brought a case in here too..And well, it was good..
How did Ananya manage to bring Ri to the office..? and Zaara..her inputs will be lot helpful, i guess. But who was at her door..? Sheena?
Amidst all this Ananya and Kabir's scenes were too good..😉from flirting-shirting to seedha angry young man..to being jealous..wah..wah.! I liked reading the transformations.
Ananya..her banters were cute and her reactions seeing a different Kabir was worth watching (reading I mean).😆
Continue soon..thanks for pm.. waiting to know more.

@Shree: I know you are busy but still..Just to remind you I'm waiting for RI update.

I am glad that you loved it so much! It means a bucket lot to me...

Oh don't worry, everything will be explained later <3

Glad you loved KaYa's scenes...

I am so happy that you loved everything :D

P.S: Yeah, am working on RI and shall wind that up as soon as possible!

Originally posted by: Manyata5
This was every bit of what i call awesome!
Thanks for the pm or else i would have missed such happening update!
I owe you one for that..
Amazing yaar..
I cannot stop thinking who that 'aap' might be!
So cont soon and dont forget me this time...
Love you

Thank you so much dear! This means so so so so so much for me! It's cool and nice that we've managed to catch u at the cliffhanger... be surprised!

Originally posted by: aaliya9872
I really loved it I can only imagine how the whole scene turns upto be I just loved it a gush of excitement rushed through my nerve while reading ur update eagerly waiting for the next one

Aww, thanks a ton dear! Yes, stay tuned!

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#150

ANNOUNCEMENT

Well dears, there's still a teeny weeny bit of time for the next update...

And understanding that we are getting a bit late in posting the next chapter;

We have a beautiful surprise in store for you!

Well this is more from my end though!

Here's the official trailer for flames!

I really hope you like the trailer and please don't forget to like/comment! This one has taken eons to make and I really hope you will like my effort!

With love,

Armageddon

Flames

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DtMaoRvm5Xk[/YOUTUBE]

*click here to watch video*

Edited by IArmageddonI - 9 years ago