SS - Mission Battle Supreme Part 5 on Pg 19 - Page 17

Originally posted by: avni_19

Beautiful update! Loved it! Esp he u showed that when one is ready the othr is not and such things don't happen when planned... I liked that concept...

And then thr much awaiting thing came up.. beautifully written!

Burn the couch already ☺️ ☺️... He was really sweet getting her ready and then that ice cream kiss was just hotwa and blushy ☺️ ☺️. Ufff ... !!! Puttar can be a tease and this version of puttar is just 😳😳.

Then the way he proceeded thinking about her fears but then liked her step towards him after his small fear or insecurity or whatever 😉. Seeing both bold in action is just something we have been waiting for days. But really Ann, it is so beautifully written. Thanks for this lovely one. Loved the incorporation of song and the lyrics were so apt from his perspective.

Thanks again Ann.. Will wait for your next story now 😳

Originally posted by: Aru.Divan

Burn the couch already ☺️ ☺️... He was really sweet getting her ready and then that ice cream kiss was just hotwa and blushy ☺️ ☺️. Ufff ... !!! Puttar can be a tease and this version of puttar is just 😳😳.

Then the way he proceeded thinking about her fears but then liked her step towards him after his small fear or insecurity or whatever 😉. Seeing both bold in action is just something we have been waiting for days. But really Ann, it is so beautifully written. Thanks for this lovely one. Loved the incorporation of song and the lyrics were so apt from his perspective.

Thanks again Ann.. Will wait for your next story now 😳

Awesome story...
Loved Raman's planning plotting ;)
His devotion to each and everything's perfection.
N finally the main show ;)
Amazing

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Awesome story...
Loved Raman's planning plotting ;)
His devotion to each and everything's perfection.
N finally the main show ;)
Amazing