SS - Mission Battle Supreme Part 5 on Pg 19

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Hello,

I have written this story based on the current track where Raman's attempts are going down the drain. I have tried to show that a man with a mission never gives up...or will he? Keep guessing.šŸ˜‰

I hope you enjoy the story. I will proof read and add english translations later. Please leave your comments if you like the story.


MISSION BATTLE SUPREME

Part 1

He was standing in the middle of the flower fields at Carlsbad, California and it was full of exotic flowers in vibrant colors. It was a breathtaking view and the fragrance from the flowers was intoxicating. The fragrances were teasing his senses and the sight was divine...it was the perfect place with absolutely no human being in view...except one! A smile curved his lips as his current view looked spectacular. He saw the woman he loved walking slowly towards him from the other side of the field. He could hear his heart beats getting louder now as she came closer. She was looking beautiful in a plain red chiffon saree and a matching red blouse. Her hair was left open just the way he liked it. The gentle breeze was blowing her hair and pallu to the side revealing her sexy figure and soft skin that the clothes did not manage to cover completely. He noticed that she was trying to hold her pallu in place with one hand while she looked down to avoid his gaze as she was just a few feet away now.She noticed that he looked handsome standing there in the middle of the flower fields in his light pink blazer and beige trousers. She could notice that his face turned more pink than his blazer from seeing her. He bit his lower lip as he smiled and took a few steps towards her. They stopped walking as they were standing very close to each other now...close enough to feel each other's breath and identify the familiar fragrance from their body. They looked into each other's eyes and it made them fall in love with each other all over again. He lifted his left hand and placed his palm on her right cheek. She closed her eyes and tilted her head pressing his palm on her shoulder but moved it back as he placed his other palm on her other cheek now. His hands felt warm; she felt that he was holding her face more firmly as he took one more step towards her to close the little distance that separated them. He bent down and was just about to place his lips on hers when...suddenly he heard loud clapping sounds!!! He heard his mom go balle balle.

He looked up and looked around in horror as their entire family stood around them clapping, cheering in punjabi, tamil and english. His family, her family and his relatives who had come for Simmi's wedding were standing just inches away from them. Wah puttar wah mubaraka, good good oye, bhai tussi chah gaye, ayyo ishu raman sooper, verrry romantickk, congratulations...they went on. She started blushing and smiling, while he looked as though he had seen ghosts.

What the hell...he said pulling up his body in one quick movement and looked around to see where he was. He was sitting on the sofa in the living room and it was the middle of the night. He wiped the sweat on his forehead with his hand and got up to get a glass of water from the kitchen. After having the glass of water he spoke out "Yeh log bahot khatarnaak hain. Sapnon mein bhi aajate hain bina ticket ke...ab din raat kya sapnon mein bhi kuch nahi kar sakta kya..hadd hai yaar...kya karoon main in haddiyon ke beech main...beta raman jaldi kuch kar warna roz andere main sirf antar aatma se hi baatein kar kar ke paagal ho jayega. Sher shikaar chod chooha ban jayega. Nahi nahi...Battle supreme hokar rahega."

(These people are very dangerous. They land in my dreams also without a ticket. Forget day and night, now I'm unable to do anything in my dreams also. This is the limit. What can I do with these disturbances around all the time. Raman, do something soon, else you will end up as a mad man at this rate of talking to yourself at night. No no..battle supreme will happen)

He walked to Ruhi's room and opened the door slowly. There, on the bed, he could see his Madrassan lying on one side and Adi on the other with Ruhi sleeping in the middle. He tiptoed slowly to her side of the bed and smiled looking at her. He slowly placed his hand on her head. She opened her eyes and said Raman..aap? He moved his hand to her mouth and said sshhh come out don't make any sound. He held her hand and started to pull her out of the bed. She went along with him taking a quick glance at the kids to make sure they didn't wake up. He pulled her to a corner in the living room and turned her to face him.

"Kya hua aapko achanak...time kya hai?"
(What happened to you suddenly...what'd the time?)

"Mera kharab time chal raha hai bas...ab khush ho jao"
(It's my bad time and nothing else...happy?)

"Kya kharab time..kya bol rahe ho...koi aake dekhega toh kaisa lagega?"
(What are you saying about bad time? If someone comes here and sees us how will it be?)

"Bas chup ho jao yaar. Tum paagal ho. (Enough..be quiet. You are mad). This morning I made sure that my uncle doesn't sleep in our room as I wanted some time alone with you. I wanted to make the night special so I brought flowers and candles for you and what did you do? You gave my cousin our bedroom so he can have a memorable night. Room ganda tha phir bhi tumne saaf kiya aur decorate bhi kiya lekin un donon ke liye?? (The room was dirty but you cleaned and decorated it...and that too for those two people?) Arey that guy is cribbing about not getting time alone with his wife on the 12th day of marriage...ab tum mera haal socho. Sapnon mein bhi haddiyon ke dukhaan khul jaata hai. Mujhe ab na din se na raat se kuch bhi umeed hai...kyun ki tum toh interested ho nahi"
(Now think of my situation. The disturbances land in my dream also. I have no hopes from days or nights because you are not interested)

"Maine aise kab kaha?"
(When did I say that?)

"Toh sirf ready ready bolne se kuch nahi hota madam...I have made so many attempts..tum ne kuch kiya?"
(Just by saying I'm ready nothing is going to happen madam. Have you done anything about it?)

"Ofcourse kiya...saj dhaj ke khadi thi door ke paas...aap ke intezaar mein woh kya tha?"
(Ofcourse I have. I dressed up for you and waited near the door. Why do you think I did that?)

"Toh thoda dimaag bhi use karti..bata deti mujhe ke log hain humaare room mein...you knew why I was calling you to the room...agar bolti toh main kuch aur plan karta. Aur hum log hi kyun apna room daan karen...humaare room ko dharamshaala banadiya hai tum sab ne milke."
(So, you could have used your brains by telling me that there are people in our room. If you did I would come up with another plan. And why are we donating our room to people? You guys gave made our bedroom into a free lodge)

"Shaant ho jao..pls koi aajayega. What can I do? Shaadi ka ghar hai aur kuch hi dinon ki baat hai na (Relax someone might come. A wedding's coming up so there will be guests in the house. It's just a matter of few more days)
...by the way...thank you for the flowers and candles. They were beautiful. But it was so funny to see your face when they thought you brought it for them. I was enjoying the fun."

"I am getting irritated here. Aur tumhe mazaa aa raha hai. Baat mat karo mujhse"
(I'm getting irritated here. And you are having fun mocking me. Don't speak to me)

"Awww itna gussa karega mera raavan kumar? (Awww my raaavan kumar's temper is rising)
When you're angry you look more hot" she said as she leaned forward and kissed him on his cheek.

He held her face and pulled it towards him to kiss her when they heard someone coughing inside one of the bedrooms.

"Koi aajayega. Main chal ti hoon" she said and started moving.
(Someone might come. I'll go now)

"Ek minute ek minute. I will make some plan tomorrow morning to take you in the afternoon for a day or two. Chup chaap cooperate karna. Kuch gadbad ki toh Madrassan I will be really mad and nothing will make me cool down"
(One minute. I'm making plans for tomorrow. Just cooperate without fussing. If you cause any trouble, I will be very angry)

"But Raman the Roka is happening in a few days...how can we go now?"

"All the preparations are done already. We will go in the afternoon and be back after a day. How much work will you do yaar. Learn to relax and go with the flow. Bas tum mooh mat kholna mummy ke saamne. Just do what I ask you to..please...humaare liye" he said kissing her hand.
(Do not open your mouth in front of my mom. Please do this, for us)

"Aap nahi manoge. Teek hai. Listen I'll go now ok before someone comes. Aap bhi so jao."
(You won't agree. Ok. I'll go now and you also go and sleep)

"Hey...I love you my madrassan" he said smiling.

"I love you too" she said blushing.


-----To be continued-----
Part 2

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Ann ... The start was epic and they were at california amidst flowers. Ufff Pinky Puttar and Shy ā˜ŗļø .. Haiyee mein marjawaan and then as always you had to blow my bubble with haddi and it happened to be his dream ... ROFL 🤣🤣.. Lage Raho Ann 🤣.. Sher nahi chuha 🤣.. I cracked up 🤣

Waking her up mid night and sharing his battle supreme plans.. Iss liye puttar is special and Biwi was so cute teasing him all the way . The first part was a stealer and my , I need to wait for your next update.

Jaldi update karliyo 😳.. Thanks a lot for this one šŸ¤—
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Ann battle supreme is on.
started with such a nice scene but then it turned out to be dream šŸ˜†. poor puttar 😭
the line which cracked me up yeh sapne main bhi aa jaate hain bina ticket ke🤣

lets see what he has planned for 'BATTLE SUPREME' to be a success 😃
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So they went to California ?? Hmm, how did this happen. I was just thinking when, thud, it all turned into a dream and there were haddis even in the dream. Classic Ann, so now even dreams are not free of disruption.



Bechaara poor darling Puttar. Loving this Ann, please continue soon.


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Let me rea bedre every one frm our gang starts to... šŸ˜‰

Haila sapno main bhi haadiyan...lmao..suoeeb start ann... maza aa gaya... continue soon.
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Hey ...Thanks for the PM!! I am glad you decided to write something on Battle Supreme ..bcoz on the show they are gonna have more of sloppy comedy..loved the first part ...now waiting for the next part is the hardest.
And the below lines cracked me up:
Ishu saying "kiya toh tha..saj daj ke door ke pass khadi thi" hahahahaha!
And Raman saying " humare room ko dharamshala bana diya hai"🤣
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Awesome 😊
Poor puttar sapne me bhi haddis 🤣
Please pm me the next part😃
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Puttar n Biwi in California ki vaadiyan Romancing ā¤ļø ā¤ļø
Then POP this was only a dream..
N dream main bhi haddis 🤣 🤣

Then puttar waking her in d night

Continue soon Ann. šŸ¤—
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please update soon its amazing
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loved it
hope they show something like this in the show as well 😳
waiting for the next part update soon

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