first os.... aakhir sachha pyaar mil hi gya

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aakhir sachha pyaar mil hi gya
Prologue - scroll down
Chapter 1-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4464891&PID=126737061&#p126737061
Chapter 2- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4464891&TPN=5&#p128963885
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys it's my first os... I have been thinking on it for a long time but now I m fully prepared to write this os... Kind of mere andar ka writer jaag gya hai ab... Hehe... 😛
Jokes apart...
Here's the prologue...
Hope u enjoy it..
Raman: shagun , oh I luv u so much...
Shagun: rammy, I luv u too...
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Raman:ishi it was a mistake... But u know What I luv u from bottom of my heart n has always loved u only...
Ishita: but RKB(emphasising each letter ) I hate u...
N she turned and ran away with tears in her eyes...


Baaki ki baat baad main... It has to be a prologue na so it is... If want pm plz buddy me n tell me...
Do comment if u like it... I know abhi like krne ke liye hai hi kya isme... But fir bhi... I m Lil selfish u know... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice but too short.
Reading prologue it seems Raman betrayed Ishita.
Think of a title and change to ss from os.
Update part 1 soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A long update needed
Continue yaar..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haven't thought of a long story can make up to a two or three shot but still will think for an ss...
Will post the first part by this weekend...
Thanks for all ur luv...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please update soon - sounds emotional and I see Ishita has been hurt again!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please pm me I cannot wait for the update!!🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys... Gear up for the first part... Will post it by tomorrow...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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writer
I m Tanuja n m writing this story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys... I m really in a very bad mood n stuck in an emergency so can't give a long update but will surely try for a chottu sa update... Sorry... 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry frndz for being so late but now I m here with the first part of my os...
Aakhir sachha pyaar mil hi gya
Chapter 1
Boy: hey what's ur problem haan...
Girl: (cut him in between) I should ask u this question... Haan kya hai tumhari problem har baar mera kaam began dete ho...
Boy: oh look who's talking. Tum hamesha main jo krta hu usme apni taang aane aa jaati ho...
Girl: you stupid... Meri kya glti hai... Vo tum ho jiski vajah se meri profile bigad gyi..
Boy: main stupid hun... To.. To tum idiot tumne jaise bad subh kaam kaha hai... President khudh aa kr tumhe prize dene na wale ho aise baat kr rhi hai... Meri profile pr bhi to take pani pher diya... Huh..
Girl: haww... Tumne mujhe idiot bola... U r pathetic...
Boy: tum musibat ho..
Girl:u r insane
Boy: crazy girl
Girl:gadha
Boy: ghodi
At the same time when these two were immersed in their fighting two ladies were seeing them with a inka kuch nhi ho skta expression... N shout together...
Ishi... Happy... N smile cunningly
Ishita: toshi aunty happy sirf bulati hu fir aap kyu bola rhe ho
Raman: aur Madhuri aunty aap bhi ishi ko ishi nhi bola skti... Yeh sirf humara copy ri8 hai..
Toshi n madhvi: are!!!
Raman n ishita: bas... Age ek bhi shabd nhi... N laugh doing hi fi
Toshi:rehne do Madhu tera Yeh happy.. Oh Sry Teri beti ka happy kisi ki nhi sunne wala..
Madhvi: to tumhari ishi... Oh sorry tumhare bete ki ishi kaunsi kam hai... Dono ek hi thali ke chatte batte hai...
Ishita: (suddenly remembering something) main is happy ki tarah nhi hu... Don't compare me with him... Dekho na kya kiya isne... Showing them her student profile file which had all kind of paint colours put on it...
Raman:oh mujhe bhi koi shauk nhi hai tumhare jaise banne ka.. Dekho na mumma aunty isne meri profile le sath kya kiya... Showing a fully wet file...
Madhu: ishu tumne raman ki file kyu bhiga di...
Ishita: amma... N raman showing him his thumbs down...
Toshi: rehne do Madhvi is raman ka karaya bhi to dekho puri ishu beta ki profile bigad di...
Madhvi : par Toshiba is pange ki shuruat jaroor is Shafton ne hi ki hogi...
Toshi :are Madhu tum ishita ko kyu kaus rhi ho yeh sb kiya karaya raman ka hi hai main janti hu na is...
Madhu: Toshi tum to aise bol rhi ho jaise me n apne bacho ko jaati hi nhi hu...
Toshi:oh madrasan ab Yeh tere bache ho gye... Mere kuch nhi haan... N with that the daily bickering between bhalla n idea ladies started with the raman n ishu saying to stop to their respective mothers...
At that time ishu's phone rings n she sighs n checks who's call it is...
It was mihika's call, (are aap log miku ko nhi jaante ishu ki cousin sister cum bestie.. Dono ek hi school, ek hi class mai namur ab ek hi clg main hai...)
Mihika ( on phone) : hi ishu
Ishita:hi miku, thanks for calling yaar
Mihika: not understanding anything says what
Ishita:u know the daily war
Mihika: tab to mujhe treat chahiye maine tuje world war main fast se aur clg late hone se bacha liya... Chal maine phone is liye kiya ki tu mere sath aane wali hai ya rammy ke sath...
Ishita: nhi nhi main tere stay hi aaungi chal rakhti hu... Milte hai fir...
Mihika:ha OK.. Par jldi krna don't be late aaj first day of clg hai I don't wanna put a bad impression on our professors... Aur Haan apni profile rehta mat bhulna...
Ishita:
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