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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely story line, Vicky and looks are married and impatient maan bent rude with geet. Ab what will maan do with geet S she will staying with them In KM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet is immature bcoz of the accident. geet and her sister are really close to each other and vicky is gonna take care of her treatment. Geet calling maan as bad man was quite funny and I loved it. So maan gonna fall in love with geet and geet gonna forget maan after her recovery this is what I come up with the update and prologue. U always come up with different and unique concept. UR one of the fav writer. Keep going. Love your work.

Just saw your updating status. I am waiting for your update😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 1
Nice...
OMG poor Geet...
Maan so rude...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
congrats dear for the new story
it is unique ..loving to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats for new story
Lovely update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super ... Geet is unstable... Is it connected wt maan..?enjoyed the update.. Intresting ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrets sweety
Now story ... Thanx

Beautiful start ...

Poor geet ... Par hapy sab pyaar kartey jai us se

Chacha chacjo pooja n vicky too gud

Bad mam bana diya sade mundey ko geet ne starting mai hi

Come soon

Eagerly waitimg
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Posted: 9 years ago
ohh
qn unastable geet and arogant maann nice attempt
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Posted: 9 years ago



Maan is 28 years old, Vicky 26, Geet is 23 and Pooja 24 years old.

Di.. Di...

What the he... you.. Geet cuddled her bunny bear closer in fear. What the hell are you doing in here?

I no like you bad man. Maan closed his eyes. He had enough of her words "Bad Man" and now seeing her right in front of him, all he could think was drag her and throw her out of the Mansion but then one thought about the darkness outside, brought some sense into him. I.. go Di..Geet Baby..no sleep.

Really. He smirked coz right now all he could think of a superb plan where he would keep this Geet Handa away for few hours and she would be in no position to disturb his brother and his new wife on their wedding night. How about I take you to your Di?

Geet no like bad man..you no good. She frowned seeing him staring at her. I go to Di...you go away.

Geet. He softened his tone. Just coz of this girl the people around his family laughed at him and now he had the perfect chance to teach her a lesson. I know you don't like me, bad man but see its so dark na. Geet glared at him with her nave innocent eyes. Pata hain yaha bada monster hain.

Monter.. wat monter. She asked cutely. I no monter ok.. I go to Di... I sleep Di.

Shut up. And he instantly shut his own mouth seeing her lips tremble even in dim light. Oh.. sorry.. don't cry please..Please don't cry please. He stepped closer but she stepped behind in fear. Dekho if you don't stop now I will.. haan I will take your bunny bear.

No bad man touch my bunny bear. She held her bunny bear tighter. You no touch.. you very bad.. you go..

I take you to your Di. God he wanted to slap himself for banging into this weird piece tat Pooja brought along. See.. its all dark and you fear na.. so I take you to your Di ok... I no bad man.. I your friend Geet.

Friend. Geet smiled seeing him smile at her. You really my friend.

Yes..really your friend and now come on lets go to your Di. He grabbed her hand before she would say no. He smiled wickedly as he dragged her towards the unused side of the Mansion, the dark store room. Now, I will make sure you don't stay a day longer here Ms. Handa.

And where are you taking her Maan? He stopped dead hearing the dangerous voice behind him and the lights going on. Aren't you supposed to be in bed by now?

Dadima. He slowly turned and tried his best to smile. Anyone who would dare cross him was this Lady. Woh Main.. I mean..

Dadima. Geet jumped seeing her. You know... this my new friend. She smiled and patted Maan's left cheek as if proving her words. He no bad man...he take me to my Di.. you know he my new friend.

New Friend. There as sarcasm in her voice but it mean for Maan. M I hearing the right word Maan?

I.. was.. ok sorry. She smirked. I just don't want her here. She's not meant to be staying here Dadima.. pagal hain woh and such people have special homes for them and ..

And right now you go back to your bed. She did not let her grandson say another word. Go..

I want her out the first thing in morning Dadima. He almost hissed and keeping his anger in control in front of Dadima was very tough. Get this shit out before I kick her out... Pooja ko shaadi karke laaye hain ishe nahi.

And she's Pooja's sister and there should be some respect from you. The words weren't just mere words but a lethal warning too. And I'll make sure she gets some from a hard nut like you.

This is my home. He roared scaring the poor Geet who jumped away and ran to Dadima. And I'll make sure..

You might be the MD to KC, Maan Singh Khuranna but don't you ever forget tat I head the family. He growled. He was helpless when his own Dadima was against him and right now she was fighting and warning him for a mere girl. And now back to your bed.

I'll make sure Dadima..its my promise to you. Dadima just gave a small smile to him as he passed through her. I'll make sure.


Geet baby..no like new friend. Dadima cupped Geet's face as she cursed Maan in her own sweet way. He only bad man and Geet baby no friend of bad man..ok Dadima.

Ok.. She brushed her hair. Now tell me why are you out in Dark?

Geet baby no sleep.. Geet baby want Di. Dadima closed her eyes. She had known about Geet from the Handa's and she always felt bad for her and now hearing her ask for Pooja she was made aware tat Pooja was just not like a sister but a mother too. Geet baby... only sleep Di.

Will you sleep with Dadima? Dadima prayed to god for yes. She could not disturb Pooja whom she had assured tat Geet would be fine with her. Dadima will tell you Princess story.. you see a very good story.

You give Geet baby toffee? Geet asked with a twinkle in her eyes. Geet baby love toffee.. you give.

I give. Dadima promised pinching her neck and instantly she was rewarded with a cheek kiss from Geet. Her heart swelled for the girl who had just not lost her father but also herself. Dadima will give you many but now you and Dadima go to sleep ok.

Ok... Geet smiled and kissed Dadima's cheek again. I love Dadima.. Dadima Geet baby new friend.. no bad man ok. Dadima shook her head as she walked towards her room. She hadn't meant to spy on Maan but lucky she saw him drag Geet when she was about to enter the kitchen to fetch water and she was thankful to almighty tat she reached on time or else how could she face Pooja.

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Good morning Geet. Geet beamed with happiness seeing her sister and ignored the greetings from Vicky as she ran towards Pooja and hugged her tight.

Geet...

I miss Di. Pooja felt emotional. This wasn't wat she wanted but even after repeated requests to her parents they did not post-pond the wedding and now she was feeling miserable when she had to care for her sister. I na Geet parted and gave her biggest smile to Pooja Geet baby sleep Dadima.. Dadima tell so nice story.. Princess story.

Really. Vicky jumped into the conversation but Geet ignored him and forced turned Pooja so tat she could not see Vicky and everyone laughed at her antics. Now this is not good Geet... you are my friend na.. you say no Hi to me..

Geet baby no friend of you. She pouted glaring at him. You take my Di.. so no friend ok.

Aaw. Vicky made a sad face. How can you say Geet baby no friend? Pooja wanted to smile but seeing Geet look at her she controlled. You see.. Vicky friend bring so many toys and games for you...in your new room.

New room. She blinked her eyes in happiness. New toys.. new games. She could not trust him and continued repeating his words. New room.. new toys.. you give Geet baby.

Yes.. Vicky friend...

So now the baby Geet will be playing with toys. Vicky turned hearing the sarcastic tone of his brother. Seriously Vicky, think about your own baby rather than his big baby.. you are..

I'm sorry Bhai but please if you don't like my sister staying here I'll ask Papa to take her away. Pooja wasn't a nave girl who could not understand his meaning. Its just tat.. She's not really settled.

Then why don't you get her hospitalized in a mental asylum. I would use my contacts.. why contacts my very own friend runs the top mental asylum so it would not be difficult to get her admitted. He was so cool in his attitude tat he did not see the hurt in Pooja's eyes. You must not keep such mental people around you.. they just spoil your life.

Maan..

Nahi Mom not now. He had seen how Geet was acting when he stepped down the stairs and the mere sight of her was making him furious and tats when he decided he had enough of her in his home. You might welcome her but trust me, I go if she stays.

And where would you go Maan? Dadima asked as she sipped her tea. She had seen Maan descending down the stairs and seeing the angry red eyes she knew he was up to something. Tell me where do you think you can stay after leaving your Home? She stressed on the word home and smirked at him.

So this girl he eyed Geet who was frowning at him is more important to you then me?

Did I say tat.. oh if so then I'm extremely not sorry. Maan almost snarled but he had never ever done tat to his Dadima.

I want her out right now Dadima and for god sake this is my home not some orphanage where any orphan comes and stays.

Bro. Vicky almost lost his temper. Both the brothers had same temper but Vicky knew how to control it unlike Maan. You are crossing limits and Geet isn't an orphan. She has her own family.

A child is orphan when he or she does not have a living mother or father and as far as I know this mentally unstable Geet Handa's parents are dead. He hissed at his last words.

I no stay here Di. Suddenly Geet cried forcing everyone's attention on her. Bad man shout.. Geet baby fear.. I no stay here.. Geet baby go

Then get out. He yelled and in a swift move grabbed Geet and dragged her out of his home while the rest just stared at his back.

Geet...

No Pooja. Dadima stopped Pooja before she could run after Geet. Don't even step ahead.

Par Dadima tears rolled down her cheeks meri Geet.. woh Bhai ushe..

He, himself will get Geet back. Dadima was angry and right now it was time tat she teaches Maan tat not only family is important but people who are bonded to his family in one way or the other are very much important and he needs to learn them to respect. Maan Singh Khuranna will be the one to get Geet back into the mansion.


Precap: Will Maan get Geet back?


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NEXT : PART 3

Edited by sdlife19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates...

Part 1

So geet is mentally unstable due to the accident...
She seemed soo innocent and the way she expected her di to take her with her was soo adorable...

Maan seems to be too much arrogant...
Let's see how will he fall for geet...

Part 2

I just don't understand that why us maan being soo mean towards geet...
If he doesn't like her then he should avoid her rather than being soo rude to her...
He very well knows geet's condition still he is being soo insensitive...

Am glad that dadima came on time took geet with her otherwise maan would have definitely left her in the store room...
Am sure it's only dadima who can bring maan on the right track and make him realise his mistake...

Geet is soo innocent and cute...
The way she was avoiding vicky was soo funny...
I just hope she gets well soon...

updateee sooonnn
Edited by ankyyy - 9 years ago

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