MaNan FF 'THE GREEK GOD' by Alohomora Chap 62 Pg 144 - Page 63

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Posted: 9 years ago
Good update...
Hope Manik comes to know about the truth that Nandini was not the one who complained against him...
Update soon...Please...
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Posted: 9 years ago

~ CHAPTER FORTY-FOUR ~

Mercury... Venus... Mars... Jupiter... that's what Manik could see right now, besides feeling the burning pain in his guts and the desperate need for air. He coughed, sputtered and gasped on his knees as Cabir furiously rubbed his bruised knuckles. Manik's belly was harder than he had expected. And so was his punch.

"I didn't really mean to," Cabir mimicked Manik's earlier statement. "It just happened."

Manik never saw this coming. He couldn't believe that he just got punched. And that too by Cabir. Yet, there was nothing he could do or say. He couldn't even breathe, forget about talking!

"You know what Manik?" spat Cabir furiously. "If I was as impulsive as you were, I'd be in jail now. And you... six feet under."

Manik was in such agony that he just wanted to lie down on the dust and pass out. Whatever he did to feel better, physically and emotionally... nothing worked. By now, something had started to churn in the pit of his stomach. He felt like he would throw up any time.

"Do you have any idea? I must have slaughtered you at least a hundred times in my imagination!" Cabir paced up and down as he raged on. He'd probably never been as frustrated as he was now. "Like a chicken! And probably... beat you black and blue every day with a meat mallet. Coming to think of it, I should have acted on my impulses too! It might have been just what you needed."

Manik gagged and choked with all his might. But to his disappointment, nothing came out. He was looking forward to some much needed relief from the discomfort but it seemed like it wasn't going to happen any time sooner!

That caught Cabir's attention. Though he still needed to let off a hell lot of steam, Manik's plight doused his fired up temper to a certain extent. The guy was indeed in a lot of pain which was much required but still not as harsh. Without another word, he stomped up to Manik and forced him onto his feet. "Get up!" he ordered but Manik's knees buckled. He couldn't straighten up.

Cabir was really beginning to get worried now. I think that punch was a bit too hard. Hope he's alright.

"Get up. You can do it!" He opened up the front door of his car and helped Manik in. "I thought that you were a tough guy. So what happened now?"

Manik sat hunched up with his long legs sticking out of the car whilst he held onto his tortured midsection. Cabir moved to the back seat, fetched his ration of water and held it out for Manik. "Drink this," he said sternly. Manik's hesitation was discouraged with one more stern yap from Cabir. "I said drink it! Or I'll knock your block off!"

Orders followed without question. Probably a first for Manik. He had never taken orders from Cabir before until now. Right now, the ball wasn't in his court. It was in Cabir's. As he began to gulp down the water, he was surprised at how easily it went down his throat. It felt like that's what he really needed now. Though the water did work its wonders, he was still breathless and groggy. That blow had probably flattened out some very important components in his system.

"Are you okay?" asked Cabir. He was less harsh now. That's how Cabir was. Slow to anger. But when it did happen, he just exploded like a nuclear bomb which of course, happened only once in a blue moon. And just as quickly as it came, his temper always receded as quickly as a rogue wave.

"Bro," Cabir shook Manik gently by the shoulder. "Look at me. Are you alright?"

"Yeah," he groaned.

Cabir leaned onto his car, closed his eyes and took deep breaths whilst he soothingly ran his fingers through his hair. When he opened his eyes, he felt much relaxed. Like his normal, casual self. "Sorry man," he said with a deep sigh, "I just lost it. Pretty frustrating day. Damn hot too. Plus... I wanted to give you this... memento... since a very a long time. Like say... five years. So you know... all that grudge just kept on getting added to the fixed deposit till you... ordered for a withdrawal. With interest. But I feel good now. How about you?"

Manik remained quiet. Of course, he wasn't feeling good. He was still hurting inside. And he felt weak. Not to mention, miserable! That's when he remembered... Nandini.

He slowly hobbled to his feet and prepared to return to the hospital. It was obvious that he still had to recover from the blow.

"Where are you going?" asked Cabir.

"Back," he replied in a very low groan. "Nandini's in there."

"See listen," Cabir held him back. "No hard feelings bro. But I hope that whatever happened is an eye-opener for you. Punch included. Man... you really need to get a grip on yourself. Whatever happened to your censor board?"

Manik sighed and tried to walk away but Cabir held him back again. "See I know you won't like it. But I'm being quite plain with you. Control yourself. Do you have any clue what could have happened back there? I mean... what did you do and say to scare her so badly?"

Trapping her for an aggressive kiss... in a deserted and dimly lit stairwell... forcing himself onto her... teasing her... cornering her... grappling her... that's what happened. But he can't share this with Cabir or anyone else. The fact that sharing something this vile and disgusting is one thing. The high risk of getting punched by Cabir was another thing. And if that did happen, he didn't think he could stand up to it. Cabir did pack in a deadly blow. Manik's mind was racing now.

"You know. When I first got my questions answered I wanted to just march up to Mukherjee and get your ass screwed. I mean like BIG time!"

Manik looked up at Cabir with horror in his eyes. At this point of time, he felt that the punch was a lot better than escalating the issue for a second time to the higher authorities. This could mess up his entire career for life.

"But I didn't," Cabir went on. "Now I'm thinking that I should have. In fact... I should do it now. And that's exactly what I'm going to do. Now."

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Note: Alright guys. Hope you enjoyed all the updates. I'm going to take a nice and long break from writing for now. Will return at night ;)

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wo Wo Wo what just happened today ??? Can it get more worse ...
I dnt knw what to feel hahaha bad for MM or good that he just deserved it ...
Poor guy just dnt knw where to draw the line but he is also the one who is broken ... That's what happens in our daily life.. Above all the catch is no one wants to talk or understand the person in front hehehe we just eager to pass the judgement ... Philosophical thy name is Tishy today :D
Back to the story ... MM was best at being the monster but he dsnt want to hurt Nandu or Infact anyone ...this is my take but can be wrong.
i so wish things were simple the way that it was for those two kids ... Give a chocolate and bear hug and boom everything is allright ...
Wow gal u made me think tod heheh
As always a brilliant piece or should I say pieces there ... Completely hooked ... The emotions be guilt, anger, fear, love , teasing captured very nicely.
Eagerly looking forward to the next update ... Want to see how mm patao our Nandu and others ... Cabir was at its best .. Hope it's just his anger and he dsnt go to big boss ... Btw my request to u is pending hehe want to see the healthy flirting btw cabir and Nandu ;)))
kafi Bada comment ho Gaya lol ... I knw asking for another update is too much but since u r in mood then let me try my luck hahah

Always urs, greedy reader
Edited by Tishyy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Damn I just love cabiraa...
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's getting really veryyy muchhh intresting...
Can't wait for the next update...
Please please please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superhappy. .
back to back updates...loved it
cabira got successful to get him blurt out d truth..
poor manik ...sooo many things in jst one day

btw
u r amazing writer ...
"answer d call n hear d epic shit
dnt answer d call n eat shit" 😆
cabira shud get winning trophy for being sarcastically funny...
"five years...grudge added to ur deposit ...with interest...till u ordered for withdrawl..." 😆 😆

update soon...
waiting fr nxt part...
plz do pm me when u update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cabir Cabir cabir u r the hero of the update.
Very nice update.
Girl I was scared reading ur last few lines.
Then he last few words lit up a smile, break til night.
That's completely fine with me.
Have a break.
Rest well
Come back with back to back bang updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cabir cabir cabir u r the hero of the update.
Very nice update.
Girl it last few lines scared me.
But the last few words brought the smile back on my face.
Break til night is completely fine.
Have a break
Rest well
Come with back to back bang updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read it in one go!
Superb!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates
Loved it
Update the next part soon

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