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Kaay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Beautifully written!! Just loved it! <3

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

wonderful os. u have poignantly described the feeling of lost chances..something which probably all of us have experienced at some point in our lives..i wonder why khushi did that..maybe she was insecure n did not trust arnav completely..pls do give us a 2nd part..one more part maybe..

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Sara

@SaraV5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Thank you for sharing your wirting with us I feel so glad to read a beautifull story well done 👏
I love the concept is sad and it make me feel hurt like I'm in there positions you wirte it soo perfectley you have draft their feelings and give us this connection between writer and reader that gives affection and liasion to each word and this is the true cause of my attachment to this story and I'm soo excited to read more cause it touches me to the bottom of my heart.
I think khushi was afraid to live in happiness with the man she loved, she was affraid from his reaction if she told him her true feeling sometimes we do little things that cost us too much though she have regretted her move I think it is like a refuse to love for fear of suffering is like refusing to live in fear of dying, but after the separation it starts to reconsidered in her worng gesture , well yes she's have discovered that it is too late to regret because the other person I mean Arnav has gone and he also gone through a lots, and it does not help for this error recovered but I hope they can workout together or should I say "YOU the writer 😉 "
Well in generally Allah always give us second chances and I wish khushi be smart enough on her acts to win the love of her men again sooo " well he still love her for sur but I'm talking about the hurt she give it to him when she stop being clair with him "
I hope you can continue with this great story from my side I will wait for your next chapter inshaa'Allah ⭐️
Note : I adore your story so well done beautifull 👍🏼
wish you a happy and lovely evening take care .