Heal Me : Swara Sanskaar OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Swara,tum kidhar jaa rahi ho"Sanskaar asked to his wife.
"Sanskaar,kidhar jaungi mein ab ? maa baba ek ho rahe hain,isliye ghar jaa rahi hun right ?"It was too casual for Swara,she had never felt any attachment towards him till date,but it hadn't been a long time as well,so it was obvious she was still a heartbroken girl.

But what about Sanskaar ? He had developed feeling for her in this short time,though he knew everything about her past,and her love and everything meant everything.

"but...aise jaana accha nahi hoga swara you know"
"kyun sanskaar,you know na,the more I stay in this house,the more it will hurt everyone,and we dunno Ragini's intentions most of all,am I even safe here ?"
"tum sahi ho,par..."How could Sanskaar actually stop her,they never had any relation between each other.
"par kya ? yahan mera koi nahi hai,koi nahi ...mein aisi jagah mein kaise reh sakti hun hun ?"
"of course reh sakti ho,tum meri biwi ho.you are my wife na"

Sanskaar tried to show that she was his wife,though she wasn't,he was lost in his own feelings that he did not know how to react,but it wasn't his fault,it was nobody's fault,that this cute guy had fallen in love with another angel,with whom he had to share a room too.

Swara giggled a little and then said "biwi ? what has happened to you sanskaar,tumhe kya hua hai ? yeh sab sirf ek plan tha na...maa aur dad ko ek karne ke liye remember ?" She still never noticed, his feelings and left Sanskaar in a deep shock,by saying this-"tum itne cheesy kab se ho gaye ho vaise ?"She laughed innocently again,teasing Sanskaar,leaving him heartbroken this time.

He was seeing her,NO,he was lost in her innocence,and in the pain behind everything.He had never felt something like this,but the magical love behind Swara made Sanskaar feel even the smallest things,that had never happened with him.She healed him.

"Sanskaar" Swara tried Sanskaar return from his day-dream."SANSKAAR" She exclaimed,exerting force on his shoulders.
"haan,kya hua tumhe"
"mujhe kya hona tha,mein toh idhar hi hun"Finally replying after,day-dreaming about his wife.(🤣)
"haan toh remember mein kya keh rahi thi ? yeh sab mera plan tha mum and dad ko ek karne ke liye"
Sanskaar tried recollecting everything,what she said.
"haan...swara tumhara plan bilkul accha nahi hai you know,ek baar tum bhaag jaati ho fir tumhare liye yeh ghar kabhi nahi khulega,you don't know how biased opinions my family has had,and still maintains those things"He tried explaining to Swara about how immature her plan was.
"so what ?"She kept her hand on his shoulders,and Sanskaar saw both her hand on his shoulders,his heart beats were getting a little faster,but then he controlled them.
"mujhe iss ghar mein firse kabhi nahi aana hai,"
"but ragini ka kya hoga ?"
"maine tumhe pehle bhi bataya tha,ki mujhe usse koi taaluq nahi hai ab,agar laksh aur ragini ek saath khush hain toh theek hai,I am still having a little humanity,may Ragini be the one killing me and may Laksh be my ex-fiancee,ragini is still my sister,and i need to maintain a decorum towards all my limits"

Swara was still an innocent lamb,not knowing anything about the world,and a down to earth,peaceful person,which was adored by Sanskaar the most,and though he always knew that she was wrong in what she thought,he did not want to ruin her simplicity.

"you know Swara" He said showing his dreamy eyes to her.
"kya hua ?"She said in a whisper.
"i love this..."
Swara was shocked for a span of a few seconds,and replied "what do you love ?"
"you.."He made Swara shocked and remove her hands from his shoulders,all of a sudden.She was stunned,and even her face looked like that.
But then Sanskaar sensibly,said "i mean ,your simplicity,your laugh and your smile...i love the way you smile,its not filled with any bad intentions"
"what..?"She blushed,and anyone would have.
"yes"
"oh,thank you then..."She became a little uncomfortable.
"can't you be here for me Swara...for ME ?"His dreamy eyes,looked hot now.
"tumhe kya ho gaya hai Sanskaar aaj..tum theek toh ho...i hope you are okay,aur tum pure hosho-aawaz mein ho"
"mein hun"It was his turn for keeping his hands on Swara's shoulders and bending down a little.
"sanskaar,i an sorry but..."
"don't say anything,i know you don't love me,just don't say it,but just stay with me,you may not love me,you may not sleep with me,you don't need to marry me and you don't need to show everyone you are my wife,just stay here with me...and you said that you even had a big debt on me right ? so can't you complete that debt today ?"

"sans"He stopped her and did "sshh" keeping one of his fingers on her lips.

Swara did not love him yet,but hugged him instead,in some part of her heart she liked Sanskaar,and had started loving him,because of his care towards her.She knew that she could trust him,blindly.It wasn't their fate,but their destinies,that wanted everything to happen.Love happens,and only a few get another chance.

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Its hell crappy,and i know it.
Criticism allowed :)
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Falaq.


Edited by someonelikeyou- - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb 👏 It is awesome dear
Very well written ⭐️ Loved it 😳 Do write more 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preet_12

Superb 👏 It is awesome dear
Very well written ⭐️ Loved it 😳 Do write more 😊

thank you dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dpm15

Simple, beautiful & realistic!!!

REALLY NICE YAAR😊 Loved it... do write more..


thanks a ton 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Swasan's Heart to heart talk...😃 a very sweet OS. 😊 do write more. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TRPS

Swasan's Heart to heart talk...😃 a very sweet OS. 😊 do write more. 😊

i am glad you liked,tried making it look a little realistic and a shot on the current story line 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its just awesome yar...👏
Loved it...😳
Do write more...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice...enjoyed reading it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome.

Loved it...
Thanks for pm...
Edited by Asha_25 - 9 years ago

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