Manan ff --TWO PASSIONATE LOVERS ...THREAD 2 LINK PG-1 12TH JAN

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Nandini- Niti Taylor
Manik- Parth samthan
Cabir- Ayaz
Abhimanyu- zain imam



Nandini's house- Murthy Palace- 6.a.m.

Nandini's pov

It is seven in the morning and from past half an hour, I am standing here in my balcony, enjoying the morning cool breeze. Mumbai is at its best during the monsoons and I just love my city during this beautiful weather. I have everything in my life but these small little things gives a different kind of inner satisfaction. We are one of the richest family in Mumbai but my father every time keeps reminding me that we shouldn't flaunt our money otherwise we'll lose best moment and best persons in our life. He is one of a kind. Why wouldn't I want to show off my money after all? But due to his daily preaching, I live a very simple life. Nobody can see and judge me that what is my family background. But once or twice a month, I ignore all these moralistic thoughts and spend my money like a rich crazy bitch. And today I in a kind of mood to do that, because from tomorrow my college will start and before that I want to enjoy one day to the fullest. And in this whole world there is only one person with whom I enjoy most and that is none other than my Bro- Abhimanyu Murthy, Abhi.

In an hour, I was completely ready. I went downstairs and asked about Abhi but our caretaker, Nina aunty, informed me that he already left.

I picked my phone and dialled his number. As soon as call was picked up, I started rambling even before hearing the voice from the other side - "Bhai, we are going out in the evening right? You promised me, remember?"

- " ya I remember but listen sweety dad has called me to office and I am stuck with some important work, so I will be late".

I should have already anticipated that. Well nothing new I thought. I heaved a sigh and replied - "no problem Bhai, I will directly meet you in the club Cabana."

"- ok but don't drink till I come, you know na why?"

And here comes the protective brother!! "ok baba but don't be too late.bye!". I say and hung up in an instant. I didn't wanted a preaching lesson on drinking alcohol.


Malhotra mansion- 12.p.m

Manik's PoV

My sleep broke due to the constant banging on the door. I was damn irritated and shouted- "who the bloody hell is there?"

- " your's f**king friend!!, cabir, chal ab gate khol"

- " coming dude", I got up and opened the door. He barged in, making himself comfortable in my bed.

"I have been standing outside since so long and you don't even care for your best friend .. Shame on you!!"

I took a heavy sigh as he began his drama. I was in no mood to listen it just after having a peaceful slumber. - " stop overreacting and tell me why you are here?

"Manik we are going to club today so get ready."

"but why, what's the occasion?"

"- aree tomorrow fab 3 will come so we will not get alone bro time that's why, and tomorrow it's our first day of second year in college and we all will be busy in ragging juniors so let's go and party today, samjha."

"ok fine yar..tu bhi na "



Club cabana-6.p.m.

Nandini's PoV

I was waiting for Bhai. I wore a red coloured knee length dress, having halter neck and made the hairs little wavey. My red colour diamond studs and red stilettos, were perfectly complementing mine looks.

After waiting for 40 minutes, I went to the bar counter and asked for the vodka. I drank three shots of vodka and went straight to the manager and ordered him to dim the lights and play the song"bebo main bebo dil mera le lo...
The manager has to listen to me because he had known me well for the past two years and doesn't wanted to become the today's target of me.


Club cabana- 7.pm.

Manik's PoV

We reached the club around 7 p.m. We were busy in drinking and chatting with each other, near the bar counter. The girls in the club were ogling at me and I, like always, reciprocated with my famous smirk to all, ignoring each and every girl around me.

"Manik see over there, some girl is dancing on the stage, bro she is looking too sexy yar" , Cabir said.

I turned to see the girl but her back was facing him, I was only able to see the short red dress and the movements of her sexy hips. I was eagerly waiting for her to turn this side.

The girl finished her dance and came down from the stage. I kept on staring her face. Her wide eyes and broad smile with red lipstick brought a slight smile in my face too. I kept on analysing her expressions as she was coming near to the bar counter where I was seated. She asked for a drink from the waiter.

"that was some really sexy moves girl", cabir tried flirting with her. I was hearing their conversation while sitting straight towards the bar.

"so are you a regular bar dancer in this club?" cabir teasingly asked her. Well, if she is then she is way too sexy for a bar dancer.

And the next moment my thoughts were broken with a loud sound. I turned beside and saw cabir left hand on his cheeks.
And the girl was shouting on him- "how dare you? I am not a bar dancer, do you get that?. Cabir was scared of her and immediately replied- "sorry ... I was just kidding."

My blood started boiling seeing all this. I held her wrist and pulled her towards me and gave her a piece of my mind -" how dare you to slap my friend ha..who the bloody hell you are? You cannot slap anyone like this. " . But she was not replying anything.

"Are you getting what I am saying, you need to apologise to my friend right now. Do you get that?". She was calmly listening to my all the loud accusations. I stopped as there was no response from her side. May be she is too drunk I thought.

" oh god! Please save Manik, he doesn't know what he is doing.. He is definitely going to get more than two slaps, please make him dumb or this girl deaf for this hour"- I heard Cabir murmuring. What the hell?? He is mad or what??. I turned back and gave him a glare.

I turned back to her to say but before I could utter even a word, my lips were stopped due to the forceful sucking by her lips. I wasn't understanding anything that was happening at the current moment. The only thing which I was able to sense was the mint flavour of her lipstick. She was holding my collar tightly and was biting and sucking my lips with all the force. After a minute she broke the kiss. We both were breathing heavily.

" what is this god? I get a slap and he gets a sexy smooch! In what stars did this jerk was born?" I heard Cabir complaining. I gave him unbelievable look!!!.

I was admiring her, analysing her each and every expression. My trance was broken with her sweet voice - "so are you happy now?."

I was damn confused and said-" what was all this. And what do you mean by am I happy or not? I never asked for a kiss.

She innocently replied- "you were only telling na that I shouldn't slap like this anyone and you were angry as I slapped your friend so I thought when a slap on your friend's face can make you so much angry then a kiss on your lips will make you triple happy...hai na...".

"what??, are you mad or what," i shouted, rubbing my lips with hands. I saw that the girl's expressions immediately changed after that.

Cabir immediately came to me and whispered- "let's run Manik please chalte hai yaha se".

And just before cabir could take me away, the girl came and started pouring chilled water on top of my head. -"Now this will help you to cool down and as well as your lips will also be cleaned...ok, now are you happy?". - telling this the girl tried to go away from there, but I held her hand to stop her but the girl turned and gave a tight slap on my face-"- stupid morons" and goes away,leaving both cabir and me dumbstruck.

I was holding my cheeks through the palms. Cabir started laughing loudly and said-" bola tha na lets run, bahg chalte hai, dekh ab.."

"just shut up cabir, ye sab teri wajah se hua hai"


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INDEX

CHAP 1 A - PAGE 1
CHAP 1 B - PAGE 2
CHAP 1 C - PAGE 5
CHAP 2 A - PAGE 8
CHAP 2 B - PAGE 12
CHAP 2 C - PAGE 17
CHAP 3 A - PAGE 23
CHAP 3 B - PAGE 28
CHAP 3 C - PAGE 36
CHAP 4 A - PAGE 42
CHAP 4 B - PAGE 51
CHAP 4 C - PAGE 64
CHAP 5 A - PAGE 75
CHAP 5 B - PAGE 84
CHAP 5 C - PAGE 92
CHAP 6 A - PAGE 103
CHAP 6 B - PAGE 119
CHAP 6 C - PAGE 132


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Hey its fantastic a bold nandini murthy
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thank uuu I will...
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I will definitely
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Originally posted by: Hudah18

Hey its fantastic a bold nandini murthy

Bold + shy u will get to know
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Awesome
And bold nandini murthy is superb
Plz update the next part soon
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Chapter 1-B


Manik's PoV

Cabir's continuous sound of giggles was getting on my nerves . Ignoring him, I turned around to look about the whereabouts of that girl but she was no where to be found.

"Manik have you gone mad or what?"

"what??" I scrunched my nose being perplexed. I didn't get what he was implying.

"what? Like seriously??You are searching for that girl so that she can come and slap us one more time. " He gave me are you like dumb look. Sometimes I wonder to what extent he can think. Please someone just make him shut so that I can look where that crazy girl went after all.

"Manik...manik ...where are you lost??...thinking about her bro??" He waved his hands in front of my eyes, earthing me down.

"enough Cabir ...I will show her whom she has messed with and you just wait and watch." I feigned anger with utter confidence. I don't want him to make any assumptions right now , for the time being.

"ya definitely why not...first let her finish her different types of shows with you then if you will get free from her slap or kisss then you can show her... But the question is that Manik you will show her slap or kiss..?? I wonder"

"shut up Cabir...lets go home...". I snapped immediately. He was irritating me now to the core. I knew if I will try to find her again, then definitely I will end up embarrassing myself, in front of this smarty pants.

We reached the parking lot and I went ahead towards my car. Before I could open the door, I heard Cabir shouting ""O God please just save me ...save me somehow!!!". I turned back to see what drama is he doing now.

As I turned my face, I saw the same girl struggling hard to open the door of her car. It's easy to guess that she is too tipsy. I smirked and started moving towards her, only to be pulled by Cabir in between.

"don't go you will get one more slap I am telling you." He gave me a scared and warning look. I got a sudden urge to make his eyes blue and black in the moment but I controlled somehow.

"leave me Cabir enough of your dramas." Finally I shouted and went ahead. I confidently patted on her shoulder.

She turned around and scanned me from head to toe. She was rolling her eyeballs again and again, Definitely she was too much drunk. She scrunched her eyes and the moment she recognised me, a smirk appeared on her face. She looks more sexy with her smirk.

"look who is here ...Mr.A2", she exclaimed.

I narrowed my eyes. I thought that she recognised me but may be she is way too drunk for that.

"A2? Hey who is A2?", I asked her. I hope he is not her boyfriend at least.

" You . You are A2. Mr. Arrogant and Angry...so A2...short form you see". She stated it as if it was the most obvious thing to do and I was a dumb person to not understand it.

She has some real guts to mess with me. "Listen you.." I tried to warn her but was cut in between.

"ya listening only tell what you have to say." O god drunk enough girls are so irritating. Someone just save me.

Cabir giggles made both of us turn towards him. Before I could ask him to shut up, the girl marched to him and gave a tight slap.

His palm were on his cheeks and he was looking like a scared puppy. He whined - "now what did I do?"

"when two people are talking over important matter than you should not laugh in between. Don't you have any manners?". Her voice and anger both were rising. Thank god she stopped at one slap only.

Where the night is going? I face palmed in disbelief. oh god this crazy girl is driving me crazy!!!. If things will go like this whole night, definitely I will end up being in mental asylum. I ran my hand through my hairs, being frustrated.

"so where were we Mr. A2?" Her loud voice pulled me out of my reverie.

Oh god now what.. it's my turn after Cabir. No no... I should do something to distract her mind but what?? What the hell Manik Malhotra you are getting scared from a drunk girl..no not at all, get a grip of yourself Manik.

I folded my arms across my chest and feigned confidence. I calmly spoke - "it been quite late I think you should call someone and go home since you are not in a state to.."

Before I could complete my sentence, I felt a sting of pain in my cheek, along with a sound echoing in the parking lot. Ok great she slapped me again, great ...seriously great.

I gave a furious look to her "- what the hell ..why did you slapped me... Is there something itching in your hand that you are just slapping me again and again". My voice echoed in the parking lot. Frustration, irritation and anger was clearly visible in my voice.

"not only you me also!". Cabir whined from back. Bloody hell!! At Least he deserved the slap but not me. After showing so much calmness, I get this...like great ..no too great.

Before we could even anticipate, she had slapped Cabir on the other side - "I told you na not to interfere when two people are talking". This time Cabir chose to remain quiet. Only his palms were shifted from left to right side of his cheeks.

She turned around. She walked towards me. She was too close to me by now. Either she was going to kiss or slap. But the former is what I prefer. "you moron A2 can't you see that I have been waiting and calling him but he hasn't come till yet..what do you think I was doing from that time" Her high pitch voice made me rub my ears. Now I know for sure that either I will go mental or deaf by the end of all this drama.

The sound of her ringtone stopped her from shouting further. I literally thanked the person who saved me in nick of time. She was trying to locate her phone but couldn't. I saw her phone on the top of her car. I took it and read the caller Id - "Bro". His brother must be worried for her. I gave her the phone but she was not lifting the call after looking at the caller Id. I snatched the mobile from her hand and answered the call putting it on speaker.

"sweety I am coming only in five minutes ok." A sweet male voice said from the other line.

"no need of coming now I am going home..samjhe aap."

"sweety you are drunk??" I could sense the uneasiness in his voice. He was really worried for her sister.

"yes I am drunk so what ha what you will you do ha?". She was looking like a hungry lioness. Thank god!! I am not her brother...what am I even thinking. O god !!!!

"wait there don't drive I am coming to pick you up."

"no need I have drivers with me."

We started looking here and there to find her driver so that we can get rid of this trouble from our life as soon as possible, but there was no one around in the parking.

As soon as she ended her call, I asked her - "where is your driver? Call him, I think he has gone out somewhere.". I was serious, it was midnight and she was here all alone. It was not safe for her to roam like this in a drunk state.

Shaking her head, she answered me - "no he is here only."

"where??", we both asked her and tried to look for anyone near by.

" you both are only my drivers you morons!!", her statement made us look at her.

"what??", we shouted in unison. My eyes dilated with amusement. She is one masterpiece in the whole world. Like, who does that? Who makes some stranger a driver, that too right at the midnight.

We were numb and stood there in silence, wondering what to do now.

"will you drive me home or not, you moron drivers?" Her loud pitch will definitely make me partial deaf today, I thought. I observed her she was flaring with so much anger in her eyes but I found it to be cute. Her angry expressions are rather cute than scary.

Cabir yanked me to whisper - "Manik yar please say yes please I don't want one more slap from her."

I was worried but not for getting slap rather of the safety of this unknown girl so I immediately agreed with Cabir without any further discussion.


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Edited by ishy12 - 9 years ago
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Like seriously cabir and manik got many slaps from nandini
First club manik and cabir got one and manik got kiss also
And parking cabir got 2 slaps
And manik got one slap
And nandini called Manik A2 arrogant and angry
And then she made manik and cabir her driver
Superb update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
Edited by mairaallauddin - 9 years ago
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Hahahahaha!
Omg!
What a funny chapter
Manik 1st got a kiss, and then chilled water over himself, and then a slap! Haha!
The girl's actions were really bold
she seems to be a tigress
update soon

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