Manan ff --TWO PASSIONATE LOVERS ...THREAD 2 LINK PG-1 12TH JAN - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is really very very good...

Plzzz...update soon🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
This super funny update
Seriously they slapped by nandu back to back hahahaha
Now drivers leave her to her home
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
wow..ur story is really very nice..nd all those slaps!!! oh god i couldnt stop laughing..great job..update soon..plz pm.me if possible... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Too good ...no words to say.

I am laughing like crazy ...😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Hahahahaaahaha!!! its damm fnny nd horrible...nandu is really a slap queen... :p post sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Seroiusly its just awsmm...
Damm Good yrrr. ...
Like seroiusly manik and cabir got slap from nandini ... Hahha ...
Too Good yrr..
Continue sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter- 1 C


Manik's PoV

I wasn't able to understand the reason behind my concern for her. But ignoring all these minor feelings in my heart, I first wanted to get rid of this crazy girl, who was giving me a tough time right now.

I hurriedly told to cabir- "cabir chal lets go and drop her first, I will tell the driver to bring my car over there,ok".

"" ha ha chal lets go fast before she starts her slapping sessions again with us". He mocked up in horror.

Seeing our conversation, she shouted towards us"" what you morons are murmuring, I asked you na something now tell me fast whether you will drop me home or not".

- " as if we have any other option." I mumbled, hoping her not to hear.

Cabir bowed his head down and replied- " yes yes princess, your drivers are at your service".

She ordered us by keeping her hand around her waist - " common lets go then, take these keys Mr. A2 and drive me home safely,understood".

-"yes mam". I gritted my teeth.

I sat in the driver's seat, being cabir in front with me while she was laying comfortably at the back seat.

-"tell me where is your home?" I asked her, before starting the car.

"and what made you think that i will tell you, ha?" This girl was just testing my patience. I have had enough for today.

"mam your driver should know na where to drop you, after all this is our only important work". I replied her in an irritated tone.

- " oh yes!! You are right...North Bandra Mr. A2,ok".

I plastered a fake smile on my face to reply - " thank you so much mam."

Cabir started giggling after hearing our conversation.

She took out one of her red stilettos and threw it on the head of cabir.

Cabir- "ouch!!!, what is this ?", and turned his face back.

She shouted on top of her voice- " I told you na ID not to speak in between."

Cabir looking upward murmured - " thank you god just thank you so much for having pity on me, this is just so much better than her slap".

I was trying to hide my smile after seeing the scene between them. I repeated in my head -" control Manik, control..don't smile otherwise next sandal will be on your head".

Cabir inquisitively asked- " hey, why you called me ID?"

-" aree, interferer and disturber, that's why"

A smile was there in Cabir's face after seeing her antics. I shook my head in disbelief. A very eventful night it is and this crazy girl is trying her best to make me crazy. I smiled inwardly, continuing the drive.

I stopped the car and turned back-" now tell me, where is your house in this area."

- " ok take left and go straight." I drove the car as she was directing.

I irritatedly asked- " mam, we are going straight from past 5 minutes, how much far more is your home?".

She innocently replied- " my home to just crossed before 2 minutes".

We shouted- " what??"

I stopped the car with a sudden jerk and turned back and shouted on her- " why didn't then you told us to stop, you crazy girl".

She picked her another sandal and threw on me and shouted too - " because you didn't asked me moron".

I caught the sandal in right time and felt relief.

Cabir in order to control the situation said- " ok, so princess now we are turning back so when you will pass by your home then inform us."

She innocently replied- " ok ID"

Cabir- " oh god, her nicknames, please save us, Manik chalo lets turn back"

I took a U turn and started driving again.

After 3 minutes:-

She shouted- " Hey, Mr. A2"

I stopped the car and turned back- " what happened?"

She sheepishly replied- " wo... we just passed by my house."

- " to why didn't you tell us that time,crazy girl". I was beyond angry right now.

She shouted on top of her voice- " ID only told na to tell you when I pass by my house, to that's what I did, you didn't tell me to tell u when the house comes so I waited till we passed my house".

Cabir slapped his forehead hearing this.

I passed a deathly glare to Cabir- " tujhe to main bad me bataonga."

I turned towards her and in a very calm tone told her- " now, I am telling you to tell us to stop the car immediately, means right at the moment as soon as you will see your house, ok mam, you understood na."

She innocently replied - " ya I am to doing that only na which you all are telling from that time."

I irritatedly but calmly replied-" yes mam, we understand".

I murmured - " great!! She has already succeeded in making me 50 percent crazy in a few hours, unbelievable!!"

I again turned the car and started driving.

after one minute she started shouting again- " stop the Car morons, I saw my house".

I applied a sudden jerk on hearing this.

She excitedly showed us - " see that is my house, Murthy palace"

It was a complete White House giving a marble look, at the centre having a broad garden around its all sides. We were amazed seeing the beauty of her house.

I sighed a relief- " finally!!"

We all got down from the car and She told the watchman to open the door. I handed over the car keys to him and was about to leave when She called back - " hey A2 and ID, wait there"

We gave a confused look to her.

She came towards me and raised her hand. I closed my eyes on anticipating the thing that will be happening in next 2 seconds.

But she held my collar tightly with one of her hands and started kissing me. I opened his eyes and mouth due to shock and at that moment she started biting my lower lips first and then upper lips. I was not in a state to response anything. Her scent was getting on my nerves. And she was passionately kissing me to the core.

Cabir eyes popped out seeing this and a smile appeared on his face.

She left my collar and seductively said- " this was for being a good driver".

She turned towards Cabir and Cabir face palmed himself and murmured "jab bhi is sale ok kiss milti hai to mujhe thappad khana padta hai, please help me god..no no!!"

She went up to him and kissed him in cheeks over his hand- " now this was for not interfering and disturbing for once."

Cabir smiled hearing this. She winked him and ran inside the house.

I was still not able to digest anything which was happening . I just kept looking towards inside the house, where she went.

Cabir shrugged his shoulders and said- " Ab kya teesre kiss ka wait kar raha hai tu, chal let's go."

I lost in my thoughts replied"" what,?? Ha ...ha chal."

We went home and were so tired that immediately slept on his bed without uttering a single word."

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Edited by ishy12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Superb yrrr..
Amazing

Awsmm...


Fantastic

Hillarious

Amazing writer yrrr . .

Continue sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
fabulous update yar!!!
i never laughed dis much...
still my stomach is paining due 2 cont laughing...
cont soon yar...
wating 4r d nxt part...
nd thanks 4r d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
I read all in one goo tht was really funny bechara cabir kitne tapad pade n manik tapad ke saath saath passionate kiss bi hahahhahaha mein imagine ki mank ki face kiss ke baad mein haas haas k pagal hogai u r best update nxt soonn😊😊

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