Manan OS- Love me like you do,hamesha! A new beginning. Ky2 s1 ending.

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Hey guys. This is my first post on this forum but I have always been a silent reader. I know Manan didn't get a satisfactory closure and Parth's exit has left most of us shattered..but nevertheless, we can still fantasize and mark an ending our way. 'Ending' would be an understatement..so yeah! Perhaps 'a forever happy ever after' thing.
This is my attempt on writing an OS for I have always loved writing. Something I would have loved to see b/w Manan.

'It is true that happiness doesn't last forever..neither does sadness. Manik and Nandini were about to come across a turning point in their lives. They have come a long way. Knowing about each other's sadness, dilemmas, bothering's .. everything! '

'Manik, I don't know if ever I'd be able to thank Aiyappa enough for bringing you in my life! Trust me.. I was no less than a broken someone until you came and gave my mom's theory of Fireflies an official validity.. a true meaning", said Nandini with immense love in her voice while she entwined her fingers with his.


'Nandini, you know I was truly a monster prior to your entry in my life. I used to smile, laugh , mock ..but then! these acts were devoid of any emotions. You came and made me realize how empty and lonely I was. Thank you for never leaving me and helping me deal with my inner turmoils', said Manik cupping her face while a lump was formed in his throat. 'Shhh! I ll never let you down my monster..I'll never let you deal with your turmoils alone', said Nandini. They both were looking deep in their eyes..as if nothing else existed.

Nanidni moved a little closer to him in order to minimize the distance with them. She trailed her fingers down from his face to his neck and then his chest with an intention to open his shirt's buttons. 'Nandini..Stop! You don't need to do this for me.I would never ever do anything against your will. So, please...', Manik was shushed by Nandini by now. She placed her lips gently only his in order to drop a wet kiss. 'Manik.. I won't thank you this time for respecting me this much. M blessed. But this time.. m not doing this for you or me... but for us! Yes,we need this Manik', said Nandini while he looked at her dumbstruck. 'So Mr. Manik Malhotra, let the monster inside you get unveiled', Nandini winked and hid her face in the crook of his neck whereas for Manik it came as a shocker! 'WOW. MONSTER. UNVIEL.WAIT.OKAY', thought Manik to himself.

'Whoa Ms.Murthy, I loved the way you took the lead this time. And get ready to witness what you wouldn't have imagined even in your wildest dreams', quoted Manik with a naughty smirk on his lips. Nandini couldn't help but just shy away turning her face to the other side. Her heart was literally thumping hard. Manik slowly moved closer and kept his hand on her shoulders. She felt like a shudder went across her entire body. She closed her eyes as she knew where his soft hands were leading. Manik unzipped her floral cotton kurta and gently placed a soft peck on her back. She tightly clutched her thighs as her desires were growing out of control. Her lips were trembling. 'Manik!', It was no less than prayer escaped from her mouth. Manik smirked and then slid her thin strap off her shoulders. Manik placed a soft kiss on her shoulders with two loves bites, each on either side. Nandini moaned taking his name. Manik wanted more and more now! He licked where he had bitten her in order to sooth the pain. Manik made her turn to his side. Her eyes were closed. 'Nandini, you are creating a havoc inside me.. look at me! (Nandini nodded her head in a no) Nandini.. see you should be happy no! The monster inside me is awakening', said Manik with mockery in his voice.
Nandini hastily opened her eyes! Wide open! Manik laughed hysterically while she was crimson red by now! Nandini hugged him tightly while his fingers were busy playing wild games on her back. 'Nandini. c'mon! He is your Manik.. don't be a spoilt sport. GIVE IN. Yes!', thought Nandini to herself.

Nandini harshly clutched his hair in her fist. Manik was stunned for a moment. She caressed his cheeks and blew air all over his face. Manik's intentions were growing wilder. He didn't let her torture last for long and locked his lips with hers. The kiss was passionate. They were kissing as if there was no tomorrow. Nandini clutched his hair while a moan escaped his mouth and she..not missing on the opportunity entered his mouth. They licked.,bit and explored.

Manan both broke apart gasping for oxygen. Nandini started to open his buttons. 'Wow Nandini, main monster banu na banun.. tum zarur mujhe apni monster side dikha rahi ho! Impressive haan.', said Manik who was literally spellbound. Nandini didnt pay any heed to his comments and left soft trails of kisses all over his chest. Manik was sighing and he was completely turned on. Nandini bit on his chest and that was it for him. He clutched her hands and tore her Kurta in one go, like ripped off her clothes. He let her get rid off her Jhumkas after biting her earlobes. Nandini's eyes were closed as if she was living and enjoying this moment to the fullest. She was letting out low moans. Manik pushed her on the bed and she laid straight with a thud. Manik came over her. Their legs entwined. He kissed her neck softly as he was feeling her essence. Nandini's hands were on his back..playing their own games. They were loving this moment to the core. Manik lifted Nandini a little and unhooked her bra. Nandini clutched his shoulders almost digging her nails in his skin. Manik groaned,'Nandiniii'.

He helped her remove the remaining clothes that covered her tiny body while she did the same for him. Manik covered themselves with a red satin duvet. Both of them were hyperventilating.The room was filled with moans and cries for the rest 30-45 minutes. Finally Manik entered her body while she felt a thud. She was taken aback by his sweet tortures. Tears of happiness rolled down her cheeks and she took him in a bone crashing hug. Manik realized what she was going through and shushed her politely by giving in. They remained in the same position for almost 10 minutes till Manik's phone disturbed their hot moment. Manik let out a sigh of irritation and received the call while Nandini adored him.

'Manik, bhai I know tu kahan busy h but don't forget we have a party to attend. Pause your D moment and come fast. M waiting for you guys at the gate. ', Concluded Cabir.

Manik cut the call and cursed Cabir for spoiling their moment. Nandini was blushing and blushing and blushing. Manik couldn't help but again took her for a kiss, a gentle one this time..full of love and care. 'Thank you for completing me Manik, I love you!', said Nandini while caressing his cheeks. Manik kissed her temple and said, 'Nandini, I have never ever felt this good and complete anytime before. Main tumse bohot pyaar karta hun Nandini. And trust me when I say this'. Nandini nodded her face in a yes and smiled at him.

Manik conveyed Cabir's message to her. "Waise I won't mind dressing you up. Ab jab undress kiya toh yeh bhi kar skta hun!', said Manik while Nandini was all red by now. She hit his chest and chuckled. 'Acha baba! FYI, for your kind information hum late h.. toh tum jaldi se taiyaar hojao and we are waiting for you downstairs', said Manik while placing a soft peck on her lips and kissing her eyes.
Manik left after getting dressed up and asked Nandini to be there asap.

On the other hand, Nyonika had plotted an evil plan for Nandini who was completely unaware about a sudden change in the events. She didn't know that Manik was with Nandini at her place. She had fixed a bomb in Manik's car and the driver was supposed to take Nandini to the venue in the same car. Manik reached at the gate where Cabir was waiting for him in Manik's car. Manik asked the driver to leave as they would drive alone. The driver immediately called up Nyonika and elaborated the whole scenario before her. She was baffled. She tried calling Manik and Cabir but all in vein. Manbir sat in the car and they could hear an eerie sound..of a timer maybe!

On the other hand, Nandini got ready and was about to reach Manbir all smiling when she witness her worst sight. She got numb as the car blasted! She was silent. Her voice chocked. She fell down as silent tears rolled down her cheeks. Nandini remained in the same position for almost 10 mins when she felt a pat on her shoulder. She didn't respond. And then she was shaken badly which brought her out of the trance. She turned around with an expressionless face. 'Manik', it was more like a whisper. Yes. It was Manik.

'Manik, I think there is something fishy.', said Cabir. 'haan Cabir, I second you', said Manik as both of them were panicking. As they could sense danger they both decided to jump out of the car. It was in time that they jumped out for as soon as they got out, the bomb blasted.

Manik sensed Nandini's fear and took her in a bone crashing hug. Nandini gave in and burst into tears. 'Manik.. woh..caaarr..bla..ast..I thought..I..lo..sstt youu!', Manik shushed her by constantly rubbing her back. 'Nandini.. meri ankhon mein dekho.. m not leaving you. Never ever. You hear me?Never ever",said Manik. It took some time for Nandini to regain her senses but she was fine with the passage of time. 'I love you manik, I can't afford to lose you, ever', quoted Nandini while she was still dealing with the fear of losing him. 'Nandini, m here.. see and I am fine. I love you baba! Hamesha and forever. I ll always be there to enlighten your world like a well wisher', said Manik cupping her face.. stars were twinkling and fireflies were glowing witnessing the purest form of love!

This lovey dovey moment was being witnessed by Cabir and the remaining Fab 3 along with Navya and Aryamann. Nyonika had informed them as she was afraid of Manik getting hurt, not because she cared but for her own stupid and selfish intentions. She was worried for herself. She informed Fab 3 so they could reach Manik in time.

The whole plan was told to Manan and they were shocked. Manik promised to punish Nyonika so she could never ever think of separating Manan or playing any of her evil tricks in future.

All the misundertsandings were sorted out between Fab 5 and they guys had a group hug. It was a moment full of ecstasy.
Manik looked at Nandini who was still a lil tensed. 'Nandini, I can't wait to marry you! Please, please come in my life as my life partner so I could cherish our relationship forever. I love you, hmesha', said Manik with tears in his eyes. Nandini was startled, Nandini hugged him tightly and kissed his temple. 'Manik, thank you for fulfilling my dream. Yes, please make me yours. I love you..hamesha and forever',said Nandini as she was going all gagagaga over this life changing event. They both broke the hug and looked at their gang holding each other's hands. Everyone was very happy for Manan. Even after facing all the hardships and jeopardized situations, they were together. This marked a new beginning for everyone. They were ready to face everything together.

So this was it. Whoa! I wrote this in one go. Hope you'll will like it. This is how I wanted a closure to season 1. But.. anyhow.. cope with it! :) Kindly ignore the mistakes as I haven't proof read.
Thank you!
Love.
Arpan.





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-Appsy- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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And please do drop in your comments! I would love to know how you guys liked it. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww happy ending with a new beginning...!!!!
i just love it
its awesome...
keep smiling nd writing... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelyyuvi10

awww happy ending with a new beginning...!!!!

i just love it
its awesome...
keep smiling nd writing... :)

Hey! Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!
Minblowing os
loved it to the core
the first part was hot!
Thank God nothing happened
I wish the same could've happened in kyy
their new journey was beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was seriously WOW..!
I loved it yaar.!
The dialogues an all sab kuch.!
Romance was hawt yaar..! I loved it..!
Moreover kaaassshhh..! kassshh aise he ending hoti..!
But you are an awesome..!
Please do write more..
Love Mawara
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this would have been a perfect closure of season 1
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: suraiya77

Wow!
Minblowing os
loved it to the core
the first part was hot!
Thank God nothing happened
I wish the same could've happened in kyy
their new journey was beautiful



Thank you soo much! And yes I wish the same. Anyway! Thank u for likinggg! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow
Awesome
I wish your story come true but its okay atleast niti is there to entertain us
Well your story is awesome i realy love it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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its is an lovelt ending..
jst love
the way u end Manan's part..
bt the unite part is damn hott yaarr..

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