New FF || Tere Bin Mar Jayian...|| Part-2B Pg-19 || [Dec-18] {ON HOLD}

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"Only love of a good woman will make a man question every choice, every action. Only love makes a warrior hesitate for fear that his lady will find him cruel. Only love makes a man both the best he will ever be, and the weakest. Sometimes all in the same moment. -Wicked

____Laurell K. Hamilton



Don't break your brain thinking too much after reading the quote 😆Still...think a little 😉 (Go back to read those who had missed. *Cheaters* 😈)

So this story would be all about change/love. I'd be focusing on the hero's POV as he needs some extra care ☺️ Not leaving the heroine but giving her a 'yeah I can see you' care 😉 (Someone told me of feminism in my stories with villaneous heroes 😛 Maybe that's true. This hero is no better 🤣 And I'm not gonna portray a weak woman in the heroine)

Nowadays...my readers are getting bored of my romantic comedies (with twists),so I'm thinking of writing something different. Before coming to the point. Let me show my gratitude 😳

My hearty thank you's to those who send me themes for stories. Though, I couldn't write all of them. Not because I don't find it interesting but because I feel lazy 😔 Still, I'd tried my best to add the scenes which you kutties have PMed me to read in my stories 😳 I hope you're happy reading my funny excuse...!🤣

Again...about this story. It was a midnight's insipiration. All thanks to Umera [Badtameez_Dil_1]. See I considers all your wishes. Let me fulfill it slowly 😳. This one/theme had made my heart jump out with excitement. I love the concept so so so much Umera. Love you for sharing it with me ❤️ I've made a little-bitty differences... for my own convenience. (Please don't mind *Puppy Face*) I hope I won't disappoint you...*Cold Legs* So let me pray...

Daivame kaatholane...!!!

After so much blah-blah. Here goes the Cast 🤗

CAST

No less than a thriller movie 🤣 (Kudos Umera 👏) A short introduction of the characters is needed without letting you find out about the story. Though, the story is something emotional and struck on to present (No past villians). Woohoo...here it goes 😃

Mr Viswanathan Iyer is a drug smuggler in Delhi who has a daughter of twenty five years, Ishita Iyer/Subramanian (Don't think too much about her surname. It can change any moment 😈). His wife Madhavi Iyer died while delivering her second child Mihika Iyer who is missing since she was five years old. Subramaninan Iyengar is the assistant and right hand of Mr Viswanathan who married Ishita just before three months and she is expecting his child.

The story begins where the Delhi Police started an encounter operation called Operation Snow in which Subramanian got killed/ encountered. (So no more Subbu-Dubbu *Happy Dance*)

You'll be thinking where the heck the hero went when I've told you about royally focusing on him. So...I'm planning a different entry for him. Albeit, I should disclose something really important about the hero. I don't want to store it for a twist 😉.So here goes it...; The hero's name is Raman Kumar Bhalla aka RKB 😛🤣
Don't beat me 🤔

That's it for a starter 😳

I didn't write a part but will start if I feel you/ readers are interested to read further. Less interest in fan-fictioning because of current track. So I'll obviously lose interest in writing if you people will show less interest 😔 #beingopen #nooffends.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

Chapter-1A

Chapter-1B

Chapter-2A
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yeh kya ho haha hai???
new story?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think this is the one! Yay! Something to look forward to on this dull FORUM!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Why is the forum awfully quiet today?
Gayu u write good stories, your eroticism is at a different level, tastefully written

Appa a drug smuggler Ok
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intresting... Appa is smuggler?? Subbu died and ishita is pregnant??? Dis is different continue d story soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ha ha introduction with Mafia family😆 And you said no Past Villian but that doesn't mean no Present Villian either. 😉And no PM delivery yet too. Will wait for your new inspiration.Coming soon.👏👏
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There's no doubt that I absolutely loved it! It's such a shame; I didn't understand the quote!

Honestly, I loved it and yes I've also lost interest in fan fics cos the ongoing track is all I really need!

Though I'm only interested in IshRa... I'm cool with the others!

Thank you Gaya! 😳
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I don't mind at all yaar! In fact, a big wala thank you to you! I'm so poor at expressing my feels but I love you for this! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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haha appa n smaglar...lolll...and ishu is pregnant with subbu's child-
waiting for our hero's entry...update soon...loved the concept
nd pm me if possible

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