OS: Hasta Manana - Page 4

This is so beautiful and the chronological sequence is so well thought out. In this OS, the house and the rose is a representation of their journeys and unconditional love for one another which through every storm and weather, despite being beaten and separated had survived. I love how fate would always bring her back to that house, to that doorstep which she left a long time ago. Be it Nishi's picnic, Aarav's relentless questions, the breakdown of her transportation, or the simple desire of her heart, its a necessity for her to see that house just as the master of it is also her necessity. I loved how you used the word "master' to describe Natcheket, it gives the OS a more royal feel, that he is the one who not only owns that house but her heart as well. Its possessiveness with grace at is finest. In all aspects, this OS explores the concepts of everlasting love and Ragini's inner emotions. Ragini's condition with the house seemed to batter down as well, as the garden grew untidy with neglect, Ragini too was seen to care less for her self as every day sleep would come in the form of a sleeping pill. As well, I must say the song choice was quite fitting for this OS. You are very talented and this is a great product of your creativity.😊

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb.

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Tiana,

Loved this and how poignantly you described that she was unable to move on from him all those years, feeling compelled to make excuses and check on the house - though sad about her sleeping pills :(

The house and garden were beautiful metaphors for the state of their love - and the ending with Nachiket was a beautiful ray of sunshine.

Thanks for this :)

Originally posted by: JB-US

This is so beautiful and the chronological sequence is so well thought out. In this OS, the house and the rose is a representation of their journeys and unconditional love for one another which through every storm and weather, despite being beaten and separated had survived. I love how fate would always bring her back to that house, to that doorstep which she left a long time ago. Be it Nishi's picnic, Aarav's relentless questions, the breakdown of her transportation, or the simple desire of her heart, its a necessity for her to see that house just as the master of it is also her necessity. I loved how you used the word "master' to describe Natcheket, it gives the OS a more royal feel, that he is the one who not only owns that house but her heart as well. Its possessiveness with grace at is finest. In all aspects, this OS explores the concepts of everlasting love and Ragini's inner emotions. Ragini's condition with the house seemed to batter down as well, as the garden grew untidy with neglect, Ragini too was seen to care less for her self as every day sleep would come in the form of a sleeping pill. As well, I must say the song choice was quite fitting for this OS. You are very talented and this is a great product of your creativity.😊

Again a very beautiful OS.👏👏👏

Originally posted by: neiralove

Congratulations on becoming a Goldie, Tiana! 🥳 😊

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Thank You😃

Congrats to you too Shika🥳