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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: nikii11

its a cycle😲

muje laga bike tha🤣
issliye maine apni comment main bike wow bola🤣

It's ok sab ko yahi laga k bike hai but it's a cycle...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: NnonaA

Oh thats the story..
I don't know why big brothers interfere too much..
I am blessed that my brother is not like that he is more like fun loving and most of all he cares about his business only...

mere brother attitude ek numbri hain
baath baath main attitude dikatha hain
🥱
and jab deko muje bewaja ladtha rehtha hain
🥱
anyway no comments🥱 on him
Edited by nikii11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: nikii11

mere brother attitude ek numbri hain

baath baath main attitude dikatha hain
🥱
and jab deko muje bewaja ladtha rehtha hain
🥱
anyway no comments🥱 on him

Ok no comment from my side too on ur brother...I tu love my brothers like anything and they love me back same...
But tera gussa...🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Chapter:1 .
Zoya went in the garden and sat under a tree, she started to read the stories of witches and all. Suddenly she heard a faint voice, it was a voice calling her name only and saying "it's time for u to know yourself ", and then she started to have headache. She tried to hard to control herself but her headache was too much to control. Then she saw a light and she followed it while her headache calmed. She saw a young girl fighting with a ugly looking man who was after her stick type looking thing. Zoya hid behind the bushes and was watching all that. The pretty girl got hit and fainted. The ugly fat man came and tried to attack her with some magical power when zoya stepped in.

Zoya(loudly): stop... Fight someone of ur strength.

Then the man looked at her. Zoya then realised the important of her words.

Zoya (to herself): wait..what did I just said?

The man started to walk toward zoya, and zoya stepped backward.

Zoya: hey..hey uncle...pl..plz...dont mind my word...I...I was practicing my dialogues.

The man caught zoya by her neck and lifted her up, while zoya started to choke. Again zoya heard the faint sound "just be yourself ". And then zoya held man's hand and shouted.

Zoya: leave me alone...

With this a magical aura appeared surrounding zoya and the man fell far. he gets frightened and runs away. The girl saw all this and stood up while zoya ran toward her to inquire about her health.

Zoya: hey r u ok.?

Girl: i think I am alive...and u were awesome.

Zoya: ya right...who r u?

Girl: me...oh I am princess faiqa.

Zoya: princess?

Faiqa: ya...and u.

Zoya: I am zoya.. Why were they behind u.

Faiqa: well this is my wand, for which they came.

Faiqa did some magic and the wand rested in her finger like a ring.

Zoya: cool...how did u do this...

Faiqa: I...

Faiqa was out of energy so she fainted again. While zoya was shocked to see her faint like this. Zoya took her home and she rested there.
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The man who attacked faiqa came to the witches who send him.

Man: I am sorry mistresses.. I failed again.

Witches: u fool ...I knew u would fail again.

Man: no I would have brought u her wand but there was a girl.

Witches: a girl?

Man: yes she had extraordinary powers, I have never seen such power since very long.

Witches: oho..now we have two birds to fetch... Bring us that girl.

Man : as u say so...

Man bowed in front of them and left.

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Zoya tried to tell her parents what she did and what she saw.

Anwar: so u mean to say that this young girl, who u call is a princess...

Zoya: princess faiqa..

Anwar: ya this princess faiqa has some magical powers and some man was behind her and above all u have some magical powers and u saved her.

Zoya: yes...

Anwar: oh boy...zeenath get me my phone I need to call the doctor now... Two ladies in my house have gone mad.

Zeenath was sitting besides unconscious faiqa and looked at anwar.

Zeenath: anwar please... Wait for this young lady to get conscious.

Anwar stood and walked toward the phone saying.

Anwar: I can't wait... Zoya I was really not in favour of giving u a bike.

Zoya: a beginner's bike...

Anwar: ya a beginner's bike...I don't know how hard u fell from it and got an effect on ur brain.

Then faiqa got conscious and took the phone from anwars hand and made it to herself.

Anwar: what...what r u doing.

Faiqa dialled a number and talked.

Other side: hello how may I help u.

Faiqa: is this the hospital I am calling.

Anwar panicked: what is she doing.

Other side: yes.

Faiqa: I want u to come at my place.

Faiqa asked zoya: where is this place.

Zoya: the left society in sector 4. House#26.

Faiqa: ya come to this place, there is a father who has lost his mind.
Thank u.

Anwar: what do u mean by I have lost my mind.

Faiqa to zoya: what do u people call a person who is not ready to listen to u and is bound on his statement.

Zoya after thinking: I Don't know

Faiqa: ya so Mr. I don't know ur daughter is trying to tell u something and why aren't u listening to her.

Anwar: excuse me ... She has lost it.

Faiqa: no she is right and I gave u a demo too what else u want.

Anwar: I just know that a young pretty lady is unconsciously lying in my house since three days and my daughter is making stories.

Zeanath placed a hand on anwars shoulder signalling him that its enough.

Faiqa: woh woohh... Mr. Please calm down first.

Zoya: dad plea...

Zoya didnt even completed her sentence when she heard her house roof falling and the man from the other day appearing again. He smiled and faiqa and zoya recognised him.

Zoya: it's him again...

Faiqa: yes he is...

Anwar: whats happening... And u mister u will repair all this.

Man: I wont fail this time.

Some magic escaped his hands and hit the table and floor but Faiqa with her magic transported everybody out. The man was throwing blind shots on the house and the house was no house anymore.
Anwar was like shocked and near to cry.

Anwar: my house.

Faiqa: sorry for the house.

The man noticed them all out and tried to attack them, zoya and faiqa were standing in front of anwar and zeenath protecting them but faiqa was too late to use magic and the attack was about to hit them when two young man diverted the magic with their swords.

Asad: prince asad at ur service princess.

Ayaan: I am here too.

Faiqa was happy to see him and said excitedly.

Faiqa: its pleasure to meet to prince asad.

Zoya looking at ayaan: ya me too.

The two young men fought the wizard and he ran away again.

Asad and ayaan bowed in front of faiqa and Asad took faiqa's hand and kissed it.

Asad: more then just beautiful that I heard about u princess.

Faiqa: more then brave that I heard about u prince.

Ayaan: mind if I ask... Who is this beautiful lady princess

Faiqa: oh...my apologies...she is my new friend and a powerful witch indeed... And also a princess...

Zoya: a witch?...and a princess?

Faiqa took zoya aside and told her to be quite .

Faiqa: "if u want to learn magic u have to be a princess and the witch is what u r."

Zoya:"Oh ok"

Asad: so princesses, r we allowed to accompany u to the college.

Faiqa: ya ...absolutely...we just want to pack and will be right back...I hope u don't mind.

Ayaan: absolutely not take ur time.

Zoya was only looking at charming tough man standing before her and he was staring at her only.

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Zoya packed her bags and said farewell to her parents.

Zeenath: r u sure sweeti u want to do it.

Anwar: if u like, I can give u a car too.

Zoya: mom!dad! I really want to do it, if not I will always think about this, and I won't be able to move forward, plz don't stop me.

Zeenath: as u wish, go live ur life.

Faiqa came and asked zoya.

Faiqa: hey zoya if ur family goodbye is done then we can go now, if u remember two boys are waiting for us.

Zoya: oh ya...I am just done.

Zoya hugged her parents and leaves with faiqa.

Outside asad forwards his hand to Faiqa and she gave her hand to him to hold, Asad made faiqa sat on his magical bike. Same did ayaan with zoya. Zoya was almost lost in his generosity when Ayaan calls her.

Ayaan: princess...may I?

Zoya gave her hand to ayaan and she sat behind ayaan on his magical bike.

Then both the young men rode off .

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The bikes appeared from a magical opening and landed smoothly on lush green garden. Zoya and faiqa got down by ayaan and asad's help. Zoya looked up and her mouth was left open, In front of her was a beautiful palace like institute.

Zoya: wow...

Faiqa noticed it and came to her.

Faiqa: much is yet to reveal.

Zoya: I just can't wait.

Asad: princesses now accept our leave.

They turned to leave when faiqa called

Faiqa: prince asad!

Ayaan and Asad said together: yes princess!

Faiqa looked at them. While they both looked at each other.

Faiqa: I just want to say that ... Nice meeting u.

Ayaan and asad said again together: yes same here.

Zoya comes and notices that they both are replying at the same time, what's wrong with them. While faiqa is also suspicious.

They both left in hurry leaving both of them confused.

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Edited by NnonaA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
I am the first still i cant believed it 😆
Edited by Sathya77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
RES

unres
its totally different story line 👍🏼
i personally didn't read it any supernatural stories on AsYa
so Im really excited for the upcoming chapters 🥳


Edited by Sathya77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Unres
wowie ka zowie nona!
Ur going great indeed
i can see lots of adaptation in ur writing style ...ofcourse its better 8-)
cartoon ka pta nahi bt i did feel like m watching a barbie series :-P
the scenes were fictional and nice
mr. Idk 🤣
nd he was like my house 😆
enjoyed it bt zoya ayan se attract nd u again left us at cliffy
meri hasi ki dukaan tune ye cliffy ending mujhi se seekha kya?
Bilkul acha ni kiya
anyways mast update
fairly imaginable
update soon
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Wow nona awesome update yaar🤗
Wow zoya has powers n the fight is super
Bechare Anwar his house🤣
Aur last main mei bhi confused hoon kya hua un dono ko😕
Continue soon na n still i don't get it what cartoon is this koi barbi wala story hai kya😳
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Wow! Me to update mangne ayi thi nd upar update hazir 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Wow! Me to update mangne ayi thi nd upar update hazir 😆

Dekh le maanti hai na k mujhay telepathy aati hai...😆

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