IshRa : Amor Fati OS [Pregnancy, Future, Angst, Fluff]

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: RomComFan
What am I supposed to to say to this? You tell me.

This is so beautiful hon. Love the retrospection and the short power packed sentences. Love her sympathizing with his wife, that's who she is... love the mention of stars (KY2 reference baby... wherther you realize it or not😉). Love their appreciation of her, and their familial moment, Adhi (you have no idea what a compliment that is these days) and my beautiful Ru are perfection ...and the last line is simply sublime.

PS: Twins? Really?😃 You're amazing!

Ok, now gooo!
PS: Stop it with the pessimism... you're so going to come out on top , just watch!XX🤗

Babe.

You need to come on WA. LIKE SERIOUSLY.

I MISSED YOU TODAY.

And I lost my texts. Like all my lab manuals. I swear to god they were here and now I can't find them. So majorly screwed.

What KY2 reference?

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Babe.

You need to come on WA. LIKE SERIOUSLY.
I was... you weren't. Kept missing you by a couple of minutes. PM me and we'll make it happen.😉

I MISSED YOU TODAY. Yes, I am quite adorable, very easily missed I know.🤣

And I lost my texts. Like all my lab manuals. I swear to god they were here and now I can't find them. So majorly screwed. Calm down. And look. They didn't fly away... or did they?😲

What KY2 reference? Stars - she is his star...

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wow! That was really well written! Sometimes fate helps us in ways that we never understand. If you lost something you value the most at one point in life, maybe it was never meant to be yours, maybe there is something better for you out there, something that will make you happier, and make you feel more complete. Fate works in mysterious ways. I also loved Adi's bit, wish he would mature in the show too, but the chances of that in the show are slim to none! 😆

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-Srishty-

@-Srishty-

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Read something for the first time (don't ask me why) and I'm in awe with your writing! It's so mind- f******- blowing. No kidding girl, I read and re-read it too many times to remember exactly how many were they.

Will try to catch up on your other works too.

All the best for your exams🤗

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

When you said that this piece was vaguely written, it was true. I found it quite vague. But one thing you should know is, that its vagueness was the ultimate beauty of this piece! The incoherence at certain points and the mysterious aura it had, was the highlight of this story.

Though at few points, I did not understand it, but till the end, it made complete sense.

All in all, I'd say, an amazing and crisply versed piece. And that your writing style in commendable.

Write more, soon, and do keep me in the loop.

Love

NIV

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Simply Awesome..Beautiful One-Shot...👏

Pri 😳

First comment.

Mind blown.

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AraMusesID

@AraMusesID

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sparikh
Beautiful OS

-Sona

Thank you :)

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
Read something for the first time (don't ask me why) and I'm in awe with your writing! It's so mind- f******- blowing. No kidding girl, I read and re-read it too many times to remember exactly how many were they.

Will try to catch up on your other works too.

All the best for your exams🤗

I shall ask you why! Exactly, why?

Haha, thank you. Not one of my better pieces but yes. I like it. :)