Arshi and Taarey SS Kidnap!! Part 14 COMPLETED! - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting but confused
Hope they will not hurt taani
And arnav will find her
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg don't know what to say
Just Pls update ASAP
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
What's going on?
Kuch samajh nahi aa raha hei..
Y rey won't come back?
Urgh...that bloody rishi is going to kill taani.
Waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys here's the next part!! You all wanted to know why Rey would not be coming back, after they kill Rahul Arora the boys agreed to go seprate ways, Sammy and Rey together and Rishi on his own...

Zoya

I have checked and double checked everything!! Where are Khushi and Arjun... Zoya asked herself as she paced the entrance... Guests were starting to pile in... Zoya watched every one of them, checking to see if they are the masked men...

Zoya sighed as she saw Khushi and Arjun making their way towards her...

"WOW... You look amazing" Arjun said complementing her...

"And you guys look like party crashers... did you not change?" She whispered angrily...

"Sorry my work suit is not a gown and stilettos..." Khushi said...

"Well you better change cause it is now!" Zoya pointed to the toilets...

Arjun and Khushi went off to change...

Taani

A car pulled up next to hers across the road, a girl in shiny gold stilettos and long golden gown came out... Taani recognised the girl as Sandra... Taani started frantically hitting the window of the car to get Sandra's attention... but Sandra was babbling to herself...

Taani looked around, she saw metal rod under the seat she stretched for it, her hands felt like it was about to be pulled off finally she got it... she looked away from the window and smashed the window with metal rod... glass flew everywhere, Taani kept her eyes closed...

She then opened them and looked for Sandra... she saw her walking down the road...

"SANDRA!!!!SANDRA!!!!! She yelled twice... Sandra looked around to see who had called her, When she recognised Taani she ran over...

"Oh my gosh!!!! Taani its really you!" She said very excited. ..

"Yeh it is help me out of here please..."Taani begged... Sandra saw the handcuffs. ..

"I don't have the keys" she said... Taani could not help but roll her eyes... of course you don't have the keys.. she thought. ..

"Have you got a pin?" Taani asked

"Yeh, here..." she said handing Taani a safety pin...

"Thanks Sandra you are literally a life saver..." Taani said as she played around with the pin in the handcuffs she soon heard a small click and the cuffs opened...

Rey

Rey, Sammy and Rishi was walking towards he hotel... Rey was still in deep thought about Taani..., after everything she did... she didn't deserve to be killed... maybe I can help...

"How are you going to kill her?" Rey asked Rishi...Sammy looked from Rey to Rishi...Rishi smirked...

"I already have...!" He said... Rey and Sammy stopped walking. ..

"What do you mean you already have?" Sammy questioned. ..

"Why are you guys getting so hyped up... I left a time bomb in the car... it a perfect distraction to get us in...killing her is an added bonus..." Rishi smirked...

"That's crazy!!" Rey said...

"You wanted her dead and she will be in about a minute. .." Rishi started... " it will take you five min to walk back to save her an one minute to get to the front so that when the bomb goes off we go inside... killing two birds with one stone...let's get this over with..." Rishi said walking towards the entrance everyone was crowding around now...

"Rey! Go back save her... this guys a psycho. .. ill handle things here... go now!" Sammy said...

Rey shook his head and began running towards the car he just left... but just then there was BOOM!!! Rey felt like he was about to faint he saw the fire in the next street... he fell to his knees...

Suddenly there was people everywhere running, screaming and shouting, some trampled over Rey as he watched the fire in the distance...

Sorry I wont post the next part today!!

Edited by Delena4Eva - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yipee me first
I am sure taani escaped frm there
Rey may get scared thinking taani wil be in the car
Story is getting so interesting
Waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg this such a climax
Ioved it
Pretty sure taani escaped
But rey thinks differently
Omg i just want to know so bad why rey is doing all this
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

I hope taani fight back. ... don't give up

and escape


Aww you're soo sweet!!
I can see you were really worried but dont worry Taani is. A cop she can totally handle herself and i think she is a very strong character!!:)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deepasubhash

Yipee me first
I am sure taani escaped frm there
Rey may get scared thinking taani wil be in the car
Story is getting so interesting
Waiting 4 nxt part


Aww Congrats!!:))
Yh let hope so she was very close to getting out when we last saw her!!
In fact i think he def thought she was in the car...😕
Lets see what he will do now!!
Update coming up tomorrow!! :))
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelysweet

Omg this such a climax

Ioved it
Pretty sure taani escaped
But rey thinks differently
Omg i just want to know so bad why rey is doing all this
Update soon


Aww im soo happy you like it... This kind of popped into my head when i was writing... First i thought let Rey save her but then i was like na Taani is such a strong charater and i wanted the audience kmto know tht she is not some damsel in distress lol
Thanks
Lets hope so
Yes serves him right for everything he did to her!
Update coming up tomorrow!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deepasubhash

Awsm updt
Story is bcming so interesting
OMG taarey kissed each other
Rey is hurt... He trusted taani. Bt why rey is not understanding her situation?
Uff...that bloody rishi. I jst want to smack his head wth a hammer
He is so irritating
Bt rey handed taani to that Monkey? Unbelievable... Y Rey is doing lyk this?
Waitng 4 nxt part
thnx 4 pm


Hey Thank you!!
Yh when they kissed was one of my fave bits in the story!!
Rey dosent understand her situation because he kiddnapped her making it his responsability to look after her... Rey dosent want Taani to get hurt but everytime Taani does try to run away something bad happens... Rey wants Taani to trust him... And i think after they kissed Rey def believed she would not run away but she still did... If she hadnt Rey would give his.life for her but she broke his trust... The main thing is trust and how much trust did they have on each other!!
Sorry for the long reply lol
I agree i want to kill Rishi to

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