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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: rev4eva
OMG... You made me cry...
This is so beautiful...MaNan is so beautiful and definitely a beautiful gift for Twinkle

Aww Revs 🤗 You know how much i love it when my readers cry 😆 seriously thou, so glad that you enjoyed the piece 😳

- Reya <3

Originally posted by: riddhima11
Res... Yay!!! So happy you have written a story..
I will read it first..then be back..❤️

so like patiently waiting for you to be back 😆😳 i joke...seriously thou, take your time. Real life be busy.

- Reya <3

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit
Reya 🤗 This is so beautiful. Every word, every scene just tugged at my heart strings! You have captured their essence perfectly. And all those memories of their togetherness! My feels just skyrocketed so high. Even when she is not his Nandini, she managed to shine for him and give the strength to hope. I loved how you concluded the story. Her giving him the jar of fireflies as a symbol of hope so that he can find his Hamesha, just the way he had handed her the jar of fireflies when they had started the journey of their Hamesha. MaNan, stars and fireflies... All three together are always ❤️ and this is an amazing gift for twinkle!

Moon🤗

.i always await your comment, like always cause you have a way of knowing why i did what i did as i wrote a piece and i freakin love that !

See Manik may think that Nandini is not his Nandini anymore but that isn't true. She still is, even without her memories, a part of her recognizes him and somehow she is still his light, his strength.

I quite like the end myself and it kinda just flowed after he sang the song and she promised him that his love would get its destination one day..and how their fireflies glowed as they both had their hands on the jar.

i wanted to give the same to the readers, a flicker of hope. As long as Manan have their stars and fireflies and each other..their love is the Hamesha types.

Thanks so much for your amazing comment

- Reya <3