swasan ts: happy ending (last part on page 4)

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Hii frnds i am thinking of writing a three shots on swasan. I hope you all like it.
PLOT
Swara loves Sanskar but she sacrifice her love for her sister, Ragini. Now after so many years, she is married to Sanskar to take care of Ragini and Sanskar's daughter.
will swara get her love back? will sanskar ever realises that swara loves him.


i will soon update the story. pls do comment😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Different concept yaar
But nice one
Continue soon
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Nice plot...😊
Do continue soon...😃
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Hii frnds! i have updated the first part of the story. this part mainly contains of how swara end up marrying sanskar. Second part contains how sanskar fall in love with swara. Hope you all like thispart.pls do comment

Part 1

Annapurna: lao swara pari ko hume dedo. Hum isse sula denge

Swara: nhi maa aap janti hai pari mere bina nhi soyegi.

Annapurna: par swara aaj tumhari aur sanskar ki suhagraat hai.

Swara:maa aap bhi janti hai ye shadi sirf pari k liye ki hai hum dono ne. laiye pari ko mein sula dungi (and she takes pari from her nad heads towards her and sanskar room.)

In the room

Sanskar is standing near the window holding ragini's photo. Swara entered the room and sanskar try to hide the photo but swara saw it. She put pari on the bed and come towards sanskar.

Swara: sanskar tumhe mujhse kuch chupane ki jarurat nhi hai.mein janti hu tum aaj bhi ragini ko bhoth pyar karte ho. Who bhoth lucky thi jo usse tumhare jitna pyar karne wala pati mila tha. Hum dono ne shadi pari ke liye ki hai and I promise ki mein humesha pari ka pura dhyan rakhungi

Sanskar: swara I am sorry mein shayad kabhi tumhe ek patni ke adhikar na de pau par tum humesha pari ki maa rahogi. Mein janta hu ki pari ko ragini ke baad koi ache se sambhal skta hai to wo sirf tum ho. Chalo raat bhoth ho gyi hai ab hume so jana chaiye.

Sanskar and swara lie on the bed with pari in between the. But sleep was far away from swara eyes.

Flashback

There is preparation going on in gadodia family because maheshwari family is coming to see there elder daughter swara for there son sanskar. As the boy family arrives everyone welcomes them.

Dida: maheshwari ji aapka beta kaha hai

Durgaprasad: ji bs wo car park kar ke aa rha hai... lijiye wo aa gya

Sanskar: ji namaste

Dadi: aaye hum abhi swara ko bulate hai.

Meanwhile ragini and swara comes downstairs. Swara has kept her eyes down as per instructions given by her dadi but ragini was shocked to see sanskar. Even sanskar was equally shocked to see her.

Sanskar: ragini tum yaha.. mujhe nhi pata tha jis ladki ko mein dekhne aa rha hu wo tumhari behen hai

Annapurna: tum ragini ko jante ho sanskar

Sanskar: ha maa aapko yaad hai last month mein ek singing competition me chief guest ban ke gya tha bs wahi mila tha ragini se.

Annapurna: oh accha

Both the families like swara and sanskar and there marriage was fixed. While everyone was congratulating each other swara's eyes were fixed on ragini. She felt something is wrong with her.

Later at night in swaragini's room

Swara: kya hua ragini...tum kuch pareshan lag rhi ho? Tum khush nhi ho kya is rishte is?

Ragini: nhi swara aisa kuch bhi nhi hai...wo bs ab tum humse door ho jaugi isliye dukhi ho gyi thi

Swara: hum dono ko kbhi koi alag nhi kr skta...kya hua agr meri shadi ho jayegi to fir bhi mein humesha tumhare sath hougi

Soon wedding preparations started. During all this swara and sanskar come close to each other. Swara felt that sanskar is the perfect guy for her. With each day passing she fell more and more in love with him. But on the other side sanskar was attracted to swara but he doesn't love her. Ragini tried her best to stay away from sanskar and ragini and kept herself busy in wedding preparations.

On the wedding day swara was getting ready but ragini was missing.

Swara: maa ragini kaha hai hai aaj meri shadi hai aur meri behen ka hi kuch pata nhi hai

Sharmistha: shona tu pareshan mat ho ... ragini yahi kahi hogi shadi ki tyarimein busy hogi

Swara(to herself): pata nhi mujhe aisa kyu lag rha hai ki jabse mera aur sanskar ka rishta hua hai wo ragini kuch pareshan hai

Swara: maa mein mandir ho kr au

Sharmishtha: shona bhi kaise

Swara: maa pls I promise ki mein jaldi aa jaungi

Sharmishtha: acha thik hai par jaldi aana

In the mandir< ragini was already there and swara heard her crying

Ragini: kyu bhagwanji aapne humare sath hi aisa kyu kiya? Aap to jante the na hum sanskar jI se itna pyar karte hai fir bhi aapne unka rishta swara ke sath kr diya.jis din se humne unko dekha hai us din se le kar aaj tak ek bhi din aisa nhi gya jab humne unse pyar na kiya ho fir bhi aapne humare sath aisa kiya.hum chah kar bhi swara ko kuch nhi bata sakte kyunki wo bhi humari tarah pyar krti hai sanskar ji aur hum apni behen khushiyan nhi chhen skte. Par aap hi bataye hume kaise dekhe un dono ko shadi hote huye. Pls bhagwanji hume himmat dijiye

After hearing all this swara was shattered. Then she remember the night when ragini wants to tell her something but in her excitement she told her that how much she is in love with sanskar. She felt guilty that in her excitement she forget that her sister is in pain. She left from there before ragini noticed her.

At the badi she went into her room and write a letter and left from there with her things. When the panditji asks for the bride, sharmishtha went to take swara but found her missing. Later everyone starts searching for her and shekhar found the letter.

Shekhar:mishti ye dekho swara ka letter

Dida: kya likha hai isme

Shekhar read the letter for everyone.

Maa-baba mein nhi janti jo mein karne ja rhi hu wo sahi hai ya galat par mein ye jaroor janti hu ki mera aisa karne se meri behen ko uski khushiyan mil jayengi. Mein ye shadi nhi kr skti kyunki mein janti hu ki ragini, sanskar se pyar krti hai aur sach jan kr meina pni behen ki khushiyon ke bich nhi aa skti. Mein humesha k liye aap sabse door australia ja rhi hu. Par maa baba agr aap log mujhse pyar karte hai to pls ragini ki shadi sanskar se karwa dijiye. Aur haa sanskar ko boliyegi ki ho ske to mujhe maaf krde pr ragini uske liye mujhse jyada achi life partner sabit hogi.

Mujhe maaf kr dijiye

Aapki swara

After listening to the letter everyone went into the shock, especially ragini. She could not believe that her sister can make such a big sacrifice for her.

Sharmishta: durga prasad ji kya aap meri ragini ko apni bahu banayege

Shekhar: mishti tum ye kya kr rhi ho

Sharmishta: mein wahi kr rhi hu jaisa meri shona chathi thi, ragini ko uska pyar de rhi hu aur meri shona ko uski khushi

Sanskar: mein humesha se jantha tha ki swara bhoth achi ladki hai.. par aaj apni behen ki khushi k liye usne jo kia hai usse uski izzat aur badh gyi hai meri nazro mein...sharishtha maa mein krung aragini se shadi

After that ragini and sanskar got married. Life take some time but everything comes to normal. As swara said ragini is a perfect bahu and perfect wife. Sanskar has also fallen in love with her. Everyone tried to contact swara many times but hse never answered there calls. But now after 3 years she was forced to come back to India after reading a message about ragini's death. She can not believe that her had did while giving birth to pari. When first swara hold pari in her hand,pari immediately hold swara fingers and from there was not a second when pari left her,neither swara left her because she felt more close to ragini this way. After ragini death ceremony when swara decided to leave, everyone stop her and ask her to marry sanskar for pari.

Swara: maa ye aap kya keh rhi hai...mein sanskar se shadi kaise kr skti hu

Sharmishta: shona pari ka to socho.. ragini ke jane ke baad sirf tum hi jiske pass pari chup hoti hai.. hum sabke pass ate hai hi wo rone lagti hai

Annapurna: ha swara us choti si bachi ko tum mein apni maa dikhti hai..uske liye hi sanskar se shadi kr lo

Sanskar: nhi maa ye nhi ho sakta...mein ragini ke alava aur kisi ko apni patni nhi bana skta...mein aur meri beti seekh jayenge ragini ke bina jeena

After saying this he tried to take pari in his hand from swara but as sanskar hold her, pari starts crying. He tried all the ways to stop her from crying but nothing work. Then swara come an dtake pari fromhim and she immediately stop crying.

Swara:maa mujhe sanskar se akele mein kuch baat krni hai(she said looking into sanskar eyes and everyone left from there)

Sanskar: swara kya tum bhi ye shadi chathi ho...tum janti ho mein ragini se kitna pyar krta hu kisi aur ko mein pyar nhi kr skta..nhi bana skta mein tumhe apni patni

Swara:apni patni nhi par pari ki maa to bna skte ho na

Sanskar: matlab?

Swara:sanskar hum ye shadi sirf pari ke liye karenge...is shadi se hum pati patni nhi pari ke maa baap banege.

Sanskar: ye jante huye bhi ki mein tumhe kbhi wo haq nhi de paunga jo ek biwi ke hote hai

Swara: ha sanskar ye jante huye bhi mein tumse shadi krna chathi hu kyunki meri liye meri behen ki aakhiri nishani-pari ab sab kuch hai aur uske liye mein tumse shadi krungi.

Flashback ends

Swara(to herself looking at sanskar who was in deep sleep):kash sanskar tum mujhe pari ki maa ke sath sath apni biwi hone ka haq bhi de do

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow yar its amazing...😳👏
Waiting to see hw Sanskaar ll fall 4 Swara...
Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Different story and its amazing 👏 I hope sanskar will start loving swara soon 😳 waiting for the next part 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Diifferent story. How he ll accept her nw. Eagerly waiting to know. Please update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yar super concept keep continue i loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing...
Loved it..
👏.
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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diff and nice pls do give the next part soon😊 waiting eagerly

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