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Posted: 10 years ago
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this just amazing wow👏
update next part soon
waiting how sanskar fall in love with swaara
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry frnds for late update. Got busy with work. So here is the update I hope you all like it. Advance sorry for any mistake and thank you so much for liking this story. last part of the story will be update soon. so now enjoy the story and pls do like and comment

Part 2

Next morning swara wake up and saw the two most important person of her life sleeping peacefully. she kissed on pari forehead and want to the same with sanskar but stop herself and left to take the bath.After coming from the bathroom she saw pari crying and sanskar was trying to stop her from crying. Swara take pari from his hands and pari stop crying. Seeing this sanskar frowned.

Sanskar: meri beti hoti huye bhi ye meri pass rone lag jati hai.lagta hai isse mein pasand nhi.

Swara:aisa kuch nhi hai sanskar bas pari apni maa ko miss krti hai aur isliye abhi wo sab ke pass jane se roti hai. Tum dekhna kuch dino me tumahre sath bhi comfortable ho jayegi. Afterall you are his father.

Sanskar:hmm mene ye nhi socha jab mein ragini ko itna miss kr rha hu to pari bhi to usko miss kr rhi hogi. Akhir maa hai wo uski. Thank you swara meri beti ki jindagi mein uski maa ki kami puri krne ke liye.

Swara(in her mind):kash mein tumhari jindagi mein bhiragini ki kami puri kr pati.

Sanskar kept himself busy with office work to forget ragini and swara spent her day by taking care of pari and household. They never spent time with each other except when they are with pari. Infact they never talk anything else about pari.

Its 11'o clock in the night and sanskar has not returned from office. Swara was tensed and walking in the hall. She was continuously looking at the clock and then at door.

Sujata: kya hua swara abhi tak soyi nhi?

Swara: nhi maa wo sanskar abhi tak nhi aaye hai

Sujata:kya par wo to 7 bje taka a jata hai...tune phone kiya?

Swara: haa maa par wo phone nhi utha rhe hai

Sujata: acha tu preshan mat ho...kisi kaam mein fas gya hoga aa jayega

Saying this sujata left but swara was not convinced. Suddenly she heard sound of car and saw its sanskar car.

Swara: tum kaha reh gye the sanskar...itni raat ho gyi thi aur tum phone bhi nhi utha rhe the..pata hai mein kitna pareshan ho gyi thi.

Sanskar: ha mein ek meeting mein busy tha...pr tum so kyu nhi gyi...tumhe itni der tak jagne ki koi jarurat nhi thi.

Swara: agr meeting mein fas gye the to phone kar dete ...kum se kum mein yaha pareshan to nhi hoti na

Sanskar(shouting):mene to nhi kaha tha na mere wait krne k liye ya fir mere liye pareshan hone ke liye...biwi ki tarah kyu behave kr rhi ho tum...koi jarurat nhi hai meri fikar karne ki.

Swara:shi kaha tumne biwi nhi hu mein tumhari...mujhe tumhare liye pareshan nhi hona chaiye tha...mujhe maaf krna

Saying this she left from there and only then sanskar realized his mistake

Sanskar: dammit...office ki sari tension mene swara par nikal di...

Servant: shaab aapka aur swara memsaab ka khan lga du kya?

Sanskar:kya swara ne khana nhi khaya hai abhi tak?

Servant: nhi shaab unhone kaha thaw o aapke sath kha lengi

Sanskar:acha tum hum dono khana laga kar room mein le ao

In the room,when sanskar entered with food he saw swara sleeping. He knew she was not sleeping instead she is pretending to sleep to avoid him. He didn't tried to wake her because he do not have the courage to face her after shouting at her and also she slept hungry because of him. He changed his clothes and also lay down on the bed without eating food.

Next morning when sanskar woke up, he saw that neither swara nor pari was there. He then went downstairs in search of them. He thought swara has left with pari because of last night incident.

Sanskar: maa aapne swara ya pari ko dekha kya?

Annapurna: ha dono garden mein hein...par hua kya?

Sanskar just heard that they both are in the garden. He did not listen the next sentence. He hurriedly went into garden and heard laughing sound. He saw swara playing with pari. A smile automatically came on his face.

Sanskar: (to himself)mere aur pari ke liye ne swara ne apni sari khushiya sacrifice kar di. Wo chathi thi to wo kisi aise insane se shadi kr sakti thi jo use pyar krta par usne mujh jaise idiot se shadi kri jo us pr bina vjh chilla pada kal raat ko. Mujhe swara se maafi magni hogi.(to swara) good morning swara

Hearing his voice,swara immediately stop laughing adding more to his guilt that he is reason for her not smiling. Last night events were coming in her mind, that why she came in garden with pari to divert her mind but hearing his voice again that event start playing his mind.

Sanskar: swara tum yaha kya kr rhi ho?

Swara: kuch nhi bs wo pari ke sath thodi der k liye garden mein aa gyi thi...tum batao tum yaha kyu aaye ho?kuch chaiye tumhe?

Sanskar: ha wo ...wo coffee chaiye mujhe?

Swara: thik hai me kaka ko bol deti hu wo tumhare liye le aayenge?

Sanskar:kyu tum nhi laogi?

Swara:nhi (sanskar know that why she was not bringing the coffee she was hurt by his words last night)

Sanskar: swara I am sorry. Mujhe pata hai mujhe tum par kl raat ko chillana nhi chaiye tha aur wo sab nhi kehna chaiye tha. Pls mujhe maaf kr do

Swara:its ok sanskar and vaise bhi tumne kuch galat nhi kaha tha...mujhe tumhare liye pareshan hone ki jarurat nhi thi...mein tumhari patni thodi nah u

Sanskar:swara patni na shi par tum mere dost to ho na...aurtumhe pura haq hai mere liye pareshan hone ka...aur meri ye responsibility hai ki me us ladki ko humesha khush rakhu jisne mere aur meri beti k liye sorry humari beti ke liye apni khushio ko side rakh diya.

Swara:sanskar mein khush hu... sachi menen koi khushiya sacrifice nhi ki hai

Sanskar:acha to tum khush ho na to tumhe mere aur pari ke sath bahar chalna hoga aaj

Swara:kya...suddenly ye bahar jane ka plan.

Sanskar: ha kyu nhi ja skte vaise bhi jabse pari born hui hai ya to wo humare ghr me rhi ya tumhare...kahi bahra gyi nhi hai wo ...aur mein nhi chatha meri beti mujhe ek boring insane samjhe

Swara:wo tum ho sanskar...boring

Sanskar:acha tum chalo aaj mere sath ghumne fir batata hu ki me kya hu...chalo jao tyar ho jao

Swara:ok

Later swara came downstairs where sanskar was waiting for her,getting dressed in blue colour suit. When sanskar look he could not take his eyes away from her. When swara asked him ki how she is looking then he came back to his sense.

Sanskar:achi lag rhi ho

Swara:thank you

Sujata:kahi ja rhe ho kya tum dono

Sanskar:haa maa mein swara aur pari ko bahar ghumane le ja rha hu

Sujata:ye bhoth achi baat hai

In the car

Swara:pata hai pari aaj aapke papa hum dono ko bahar ghumane le kr ja rhe hai...chalo aapko bhi pata chal jayega ki aapke papa kitne boring hai

Sanskar:tum to aise baaten kr rhi ho jaise isse tumhare sari baat smjh aati hai

Swara:aur nhi to kya meri beti meri saari baat smjhti hai...hai na pari(for which pari nodded her hed in yes seeing this swara starts laughing) dekha sanskar sab smjhti hai pari

Sanskar:ya whatever(sanskar was happy that swara is smiling and indirectly he is the reason.)

Then they went to mall and do some shopping for pari. Swara was behaving like child when she all those baby stuff. She tried all the dresses in the shop to select the best for pari. sanskar and the shopkeeper was looking at her shocked and pari was smiling at her mother antics. She purchased lots of dresses and toys for pari. And then they went buy some gifts for other family members. When they were shopping swara looked at earrings and sanskar noticed from her look that she like those earrings a lot. Then they pay there bill and left from there for having lunch.

Sanskar: swara tum chalo mein apna mobile bhul gya shop mein wo le kr aata hu. Saying this he went into the shop and buy those earrings.

Then they went to the restaurant for lunch and there they talk about swara life in Australia. He was impressed knowing that swara has opened a music school there. He realized that she is a chatter box. And he was sitting there listening to her talks. After that they went to beach. There also swara was in her full energy mood and sanskar was sitting on the rock with pari who was sleeping. Then swara came and sit with sanskar.

Sanskar:tum kya kha kar paida hui thi jo itni energy hai tum mein

Swara: wo kya hai na sanskar mera abhi budhapa nhi aya tumahri tarah

Sanskar: mein budha ho rha hu...ruko tum batata hu tumhe. And after putting pari in cradle he start running behind swara.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update...👏👏
Waiting to see Sanskaar falling for Swara...
Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superbbb update yar next put asap :-))))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Super update loved it. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Omg
Awesome update
Please update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Aww...
Loved it...

Swara and Sanskar bonding
wow loved it..


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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
aww this is so adorable!! 😳
Plz do PM me when u update. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So frnds i am back with last part of this story. thank you so much all of for such a response to my first story. well this part is not that good because i am not good at writing romantic scenes. but still i want to know your views so pls do comment.

Part 3

Sanskar: swara...swara

Sanskar was shouting swara name at the high pitch of his voice. Swara who was feeding pari came into the room and saw everything lying here and there. The room was a complete mess.

Swara: sanskar kya hai ye sab? kya halat ban di hai kamre ki?

Sanskar: tumhe kamre ki padi hai...yaha mujhe apni koi bhi cheez nhi mil rahi. Pata nhi kaha chali gyi sari cheeze.

Swara shakes her head at sanskar and then went towards the almirah and bring all the things which sanskar required.

Swara: ye lo tumhari watch, mobile charger,laptop charger,wallet and handkerchief...aur ha tumhari aaj ki meeting ki file.

Sanskar: par ye sab to mene.. (he looked at the couch in there room)

Swara: ha ye sab tumne kal raat ko couch par hi rakha chor diya tha aur mene almirah me rakha tha. Seriously sanskar tum to pari se bhi chote bache ho...pura kamra kitna ganda kar ke rakhte ho...koi bhi cheez jagahpar nhi rakhte...ab ye towel(she said while picking the towel from the bed) ye koi jagah hai isko rakhne ki...sachi jitna time mujhe pura ghar saaf karne me nhi lagta use kahi jyada time iss room ko clean karne me lagta hai.

Swara was continuously scolding him without looking in his direction. And here sanskar was just staring at her. He remembered how ragini always used to keep the room clean but she never scold him for not keeping the room clean. And here swara is scolding him for all this. He thought that both the sisters are same but yet different in their own way. He was lost in his thoughts andwas staring at swara. When swara shook him and brought him back.

Swara: mein kabse boli ja rhi hu aur tum ho ki meri baton par dhyan hi nhi de rahe.

Sanskar: aisa kuch nhi hai mein sab sun raha hu

Swara:acha to batana zara mene abhi abhi kya kaha

Sanskar:kya kaha... tum mujh pr chilla rhi thi saman thik se rakhne ke liye

Swara:seriously sanskar tumne kuch nhi suna...ye baat to mene kab ki khatam kar di thi...mein tumse pari ko doctor ke pass le jane ke rhi thi vaccination ke liye...tumhara dhyan kaha hai

Sanskar: kahi nhi...tum ready rehna sham ko hum dono sath me doctor ke pass challenge(and he left from there leaving a bewildered swara)

In the evening both swara and sanskar went to the doctor for pari vaccination. Swara was scared that it will hurt pari and for this she is eating doctor's mind for being careful.on the other hand sanskar was calm because that it might hurt his daughter but it will protect her. So he is trying to calm both his wife and his daughter.

Swara: doctor aisa nhi ho sakta pari ko injectinki jagah hum koi medicine de de.

Doctor:nhi mrs. Maheshwari... aap tension mat lijiye pari ko bilkul bhi dard nhi hoga

Swara:sanskar hum pari ko kal le aayenge dekho na aaj wo kitna ro rahi hai

Sanskar: nhi swara pari ko injection aaj hi lagega

Sanskar signalled the doctor to do his work. When doctor was injecting the injection swara closed her eyes and hold sanskar which made him look at her. Tears were brimming from her eyes. Though pari was the one getting the injection but swara was the one who was feeling the pain. After doctor done his work sanskar asked swara to open her eyes and wipe off her tear. Seeing pari swara immediately rush towards her and hug her. Here sanskar was thanking the heaven for sending swara into their lives.

After some times swara has to go badi because her dida is not well. She has left with pari one week ago and here sanskar life has completely become a mess. In these days which he spent with swara he had become completely dependent on her for everything.from his morning coffee to his file,for everything he need swara

Sanskar(on phone): swara meri files kaha rakhi hai tumne?

Swara:sanskar ye kya hai...pichle 10 min me tumne mujhe 6 baar call kiya hai...swara ye kaha rakha hai swara wok ah rakha hai

Sanskar: ha to tumne hi meri cheese rakhi hai to tum hi bataogi kaha hai wo...aur vaise bhi agar itni phone calls problem to vapas kyu nhi aa jati

Swara: oh ab samjhi to tum mujhe miss kar rahe ho tabhi to ghar vapis aane ke liye keh rahe ho...

Sanskar:mein kyu tumhe miss karunga...vaise bhi mein akela bhoth khush hu...atleast ab mein apna AC 16 degree pr chala sakta hu

Swara: acha to thik hai..fir raho apne AC ke sath ab mein aur kuch din yaha rukugi aura b tumhe kuch bhi chaiye ho to apne AC se hi maang lena.

At night sanskar was lying on his bed but sleep was far away from him eyes. Same was the situation with swara. Both were missing each other. Sanskar was becoming restless so he came outside in the garden.

Sanskar: ye kya ho raha hai mujhe...mein swara kyu itna miss kyu kar raha hu...mera mann aisa kyu ho rha hai jaise mein abhi swara ko milna chatha hu usse dekhna chatha hu...kya ho raha hai mere sath..kahi mujhe swara se pyar to nhi ho gaya par aisa kaise ho sakta hai...mein to ragini se pyar karta hu...to kya iska matlab ragini ke liye mera pyar jhutha hai...

ragini: sanskar

sanskar: ragini tum yaha...par tum toh

ragini: ha sanskar hum mar gaye the par aapke pyar ne hume roka hua hai...

sanskar:mere pyar ne

ragini: haa sanskar aapke pyar ne...aap ke pyar ne mujhe jane se roka hua...pls hume apne pyar se aazad kar dijiye

sanskar: par kaise...mein tumse bhoth pyar karta hu ragini

ragini: mein bhi aap se bhoth pyar krti hu sanskar...isliye mein aap ko khush dekhna chathi hu

sanskar:par tumhare bina me khush kaise reh sakta hu

ragini: swara ke sath...ha sanskar aap swara se pyar lag gaye hai aur usi ke sath aapki khushi hai

sanskar: nahi ragini me tumhe dhoka nhi de sakta

ragini: sanskar aap hume koi dhokha nhi de rhe...mera aur aapka sath shayad yahi tak ka tha...mene apne hisse ka pyar paa liya hai par ab swara ki bari hai...usne humesha apni khushiyo se phele humare bare me socha apni shadi tod di humare liye aura b humari beti ke liye bina kise pyar ki umeed ke usne aapse shadi kar li...par ab waqt aa gya hai sansakr usko wo mile jo wo deserve krti hai aapka pyar..aur sanskar mein janti hu aapki khushi swara ke sath hai...aur jab aap aur swara sath khush honge tab hi hum khush ho payenge...jaiye sanskar aur bata dijiye swara ko aap usse kitna pyar karte hai...jaiye sanskar jaiye

sanskar:ragini

sanskar got up with a jerk and he found that he was lying his bed. Hearing his voice sujata came into the room.

Sujata:kya hua chore? Itni jor se kyu chillaya?

Sanskar:maa mein yaha kamre mein kaise aaya?

Sujata:kal pata nhi kaise tu bahar behosh ho gya tha...to thare papa aur adarsh tujhe kamre mein le aaye ..tu thik to hai na

Sanskar: haa mom mein thik hu...

Sujata: acha thik hai sun sharmishtha ji ka phone aaya tha ki swara aaj vapis aa rahi hai to tu usse lene chala jaio

Sanskar: thik hai maa

Sujata left from there and sanskar recall last night talks with ragini. He take swara photo from bedside table.

Sanskar: mujhe swara ko batana hona ki me usse pyar karne laga gya hu wo bhi aaj hi...swara bs aaj sham tak ka wait kar lo... I promise mein tumhe wo sari khushiya jot um deserve karti ho...aj tum is ghar mein vapas pari ki maa ban kar nhi meri patni ban kr aaogi..mrs swara sanskar maheshwari ban kar aaogi(and he messaged swara).

Swara(reads the message) : sorry mein tumhe lene nhi aa pauga.aaj office mein bhoth kaam hai.mein driver bhej dunga.aur ha wo tumhe hote blue heaven drop kar dega aur pari ko ghar le jayega. Actually hume aaj raat ko ek business party attend karni hogi.aur mene tumhare liye ek saree bheji hai to tum wo pehn kar aa jana sham ko

See you in the evening mrs swara sanskar maheshwari

Swara: samajhta kya haiye sanskar apne aap ko ek to lene nhi aa rha upar se mujhe party mein aane ko bhi bol diya..ruko zara mujhe ghar aane do sanskar fir batati hu tumhe to mein(then suddenly something strike in her mind and she again read the message and she was shocked)mrs swara sanskar maheshwari...par sanskar to kbhi bhi aise nhi likhta...jarur ye msg usne secretary se likhawaya hoga...ek msg tak khud likhne ka time nhi hai uske pass aur mein yaha bekar me hi uske pass jane ko excited ho rahi thi.

In the evening swara get ready in blue saree which sanskar had sent for him. She was looking like an angel. She came out of the car and go towards the reception of the hotel but suddenly she got sanskar message asking her to come to room no 604. She went there and as she opened the door there was darkness in the room and soon she felt that someone has locked the door. She got scared and was about to shout but she felt a hand on her mouth. She felt that touch familiar and immediately recognized that it was sanskar. Sanskar remove his hand from her mouth and switch on the light. She was mesmerized to see the beautiful sight in front of her. Whole room was decorated with flowers and balloons and filled with swara pictures. And sanskar,love of her life was on his knees with a ring in his hand.

Sanskar: swara mujhe nhi pata kab mujhe tumse pyar ho gaya..kab mere liye tumse door rehna mushkil ho gya...pata nhi kab tumse itna pyar ho gya ki tumhare bina meri jindagi soch bhi nhi sakta mein..shayad tab jab tumne pari ke liye mujhse shadi karne ka faisla kiya tha...ya fir tab jab tum mere liye pareshan hoti thi...ya fir tab jab tum mujh pr gussa hoti thi aur ek chocolate dene pr maan jati thi...pata nhi kab par ho gaya tumse pyar...shayad bhoth phele hi ho gya tha par mene abhi ja kr smjha ...ha swara mujhe tumse pyar ho gya...I love you swara...I love you... kya tum mrs swara sanskar maheshwari banogi ?

Swara who was now almost in tears was unable to say anything. She cannot believe that the love of her life was there in front of her waiting for her answer. Stupid, he did not know from the past 4 years swara has only love him,every minute,every second it was only him. She wants to say so many things but words were not coming out from her mouth. She just nods her in a yes and next moment she was in the arms of sanskar, who was hugging her like his life depends on this. She just hugged and send millions thank you to god for giving her sanskar.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update. Really loved this part. he became dependent of swara. And finally he realised his love for his swara. Mrs.swara sanskar maheswari. 😳

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