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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone. This a short OS about Patta's love story

Flowers here there and everywhere, decorated the grounds. The royal kind off decoration impressed all the guests. All were busy congratulating the bride and groom. Bride as usual was dressed up like queen where groom like a prince. Though both were not prince and queen but his brother-in-law had paid for everything. Every mouth was spilling out words that "Kitne saubhagyashali hai jo Kunwar Pratap ne inke vivvah mein inta paise dala hai".

In this happy moment all were there except two. Kunwar Pratap, brother in law of the groom and Kunwarani Ajabde, sister of the groom were missing. As it is said there is a story behind everything there is a story behind this marriage. The reason is very simple for the groom but for others it is undigestible.

*FLASHBACK*

Kunwar Pratap hum jaa rahe ya nahi Patta ke vivaah mein??

Kya kare hum?

Ek taraf toh humara pyaar hai aur dusri taraf hai humari patni

Karen toh hum kya karen?

Jayenge toh hum Patta se durr nahi reh payenge aur humari pati hume bhojan nahi dengi nahi mahel mein chodegi?

Kya kare hum?

Hum unhe keh dete hai ki hum nahi jaa sakte hai

Kunwar pratap aap kaha koye hue hai??

Kahi nahi

Toh jaldi batayiye hum jaa sakte hai kya??

Nahi Ajabde yaha bahut se kaam hai aur aap toh jante hai na ki Akbar bhi humare dwar pe kadha hai

Thik hai Kunwar pratap hum unhe patra lik dete hai

*FLASHBACK*

All the preparations were done. Only one thing was not done, the actual wedding was still remaining. Every wedding has some or the other cause. This one had too.

*FLASHBACK*

Kunwar Pratap kya aap hume bala chalana sikha sakte hai?

Kyu nahi. Awashya.

Toh sikhyiye.

Patta's mother being a protective one saw everything happening. Something similar to romance was happening there. It was nothing but Bromance. Patta holding the baala and Kunwar Pratap was playing with his hand. One hand rubbing the other one, chin of one on the other's shoulder, both their face side by side was making the scene not worth seeing.

Patta ab aap chalayiye yeh baala

Ji Kunwar Pratap

Waise Kunwar Pratap hume apse kuch kehna hai

Toh kahiye

Who kya hai na...

Batayiye kya hai

Woh hume na...

Patta kaha hai aap

Arey koi aa raha hai, hume chodiye

Jayiye jayiye.

*FLASHBACK*

Knowing all that happened between her son and Kunwar Pratap she arranged a marriage for her son.

*FLASHBACK*

Patta hume aap ek vachan dijiye.

Ji maa de diya humne vachan

Arey pehle sun toh lijiye kya hai vachan

Maa aap kahiye

Patta hum chahte hai ki aap vivaah kar lijiye

Kya

Haan ab toh aap bhi bade ho gaye hai

Thik hai maa

*FLASHBACK*

He suppressed his feeling and accepted to marry because he gave word to his mother. All were happy at this moment. Only two were not i.e. Kunwar Pratap and Patta.

The seven pheres were done and Patta and Jiwa were declared husband and wife but Patta did not consider Jiwa as his wife. God was also with him in this. When both were going to unite some miracle happened.

Patta apko Kunwar Pratap se patra aaya hai.

Kya

Haan lijiye

Ji ma

Lekin Kunwar Pratap ka patra ab

Hume toh yeh samjh nahi aa raha hai ab kyu aaya hai yeh patra

Thik hai pad lete hai

" Patta yaha Mughal humare dwaar par kadhe hai. Aap jitna jaldi aa sakte hai utni jaldi aa jayiye

Apke Kunwar Pratap"

Jiwa hum Kunwar Pratap ke paas jaa rahe hai. Unhe humari awashyakata hai

Thik hai jaldi laut jayiye

Ji

He left his wife and his home and reached Mewar. Only thing he could find was silence- no one was seen there, not even any Mughal.

Kunwar Pratap ne kaha tha ki Mughal dwaar pe hai lekin hume toh ek bhi nahi dikayi de raha hai

Kya chakar hai yeh

He entered the mahel and only found his sister waiting for him. after the aarti he went to his room. there he found a letter.

"Jaldi kasturi bagiche mein pahunch jayiye- apke Kunwar Pratap"

Yeh kya Kunwar Pratap ne yeh yaha kyu choda hai

Thik hai cahle jiyenge hum unse milne

He reached the Kasturi bagicha only to find the prince waiting for him.

Kunwar Pratap

Patta aap aa gaye

Ji Kunwar Pratap hum aa gaye

Both shared a long and everlasting hug. They were very hapy.

Kunwar Pratap apne toh hum patra mein kaha ki Mughal dwaar par kadhe hai

Ji ji who toh ek bahana tha

Kya

Haan

Toh apne hume kyu bulaya

Hume apse kuch awashyak baat karni hai

Toh kariye Kunwar Pratap

Hum apse yeh kehna chahte hai ki hum...

Aap...

Hum...

Aap...

Kunwar Pratap hume bhi apse kuch kehna hai

Toh aap hi kahiye pehle

Nahi nahi aap

Nahi aap

Nahi aap ne pehle kaha

Nahi Patta hum nahi aap kahiye

Nahi Kunwar Pratap aap keh rahe the na toh aap batayiye

Thik hai hum hi kehte hai

Ji

Hume...

Aap ko...

Hume na apse

Apko humse

Hume apse pyaar ho gaya hai

Kunwar Pratap hume bhi yeh hi kehna tha

Kya

Ji

They finally untied with a hug.

Thanx for reading. Do leave reviews after reading.

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twilightlover29 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey bhagwaan
yeh kya tha
itna saara pyaar woh bhi Pratta ke beech

haaye Rosh interesting take on Patta's love story re

Aur Pratta ka ji aap nahi ji aap ne toh bas kya kahen hum

Keep writing more and more

'Am first
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Hahaaha 😆
Such a funny os
Loved it 👏
Keep giving more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
When I saw the title I was like...must be Patta and Jiwa's love story..
But this...this was hilarious and amazing!!!
Very creative of you!! 🤗
Loved it!!
Give us many more like this
Your thirdie birdie ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

hey bhagwaan
yeh kya tha
itna saara pyaar woh bhi Pratta ke beech

haaye Rosh interesting take on Patta's love story re

Aur Pratta ka ji aap nahi ji aap ne toh bas kya kahen hum

Keep writing more and more

'Am first

thanx di thanx
yeah will keep writing
yes yes u r my firstie
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: Annei123

Hahaaha 😆

Such a funny os
Loved it 👏
Keep giving more

thanx
will keep giving not a worry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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throught reading it ...i covered my mouth with hand not to split a loud laughter 🤣
patta and pratap...bechaari ajabde or jiwa...🤪
well amazing os ...
mjhe lga srf me hun aisa kch soochne waali pr no...😆
do right more...
and i agree with natasha...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
plzz take part in role playing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

When I saw the title I was like...must be Patta and Jiwa's love story..
But this...this was hilarious and amazing!!!
Very creative of you!! 🤗
Loved it!!
Give us many more like this
Your thirdie birdie ❤️

ohhh
i never knew the title will confuse you
thanx
than
xthat i will surely give
yes u r my thirdie
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi_angel

throught reading it ...i covered my mouth with hand not to split a loud laughter 🤣

patta and pratap...bechaari ajabde or jiwa...🤪
well amazing os ...
mjhe lga srf me hun aisa kch soochne waali pr no...😆
do right more...
and i agree with natasha...😳

thanx aditi
when i myself read this i do the same cover my mouth
thanx
yeah will do that

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