akdha ff -Don't forget where you belong - chappy 2 in pg 18

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so , hii frnds , i'm not new in here but for few , i may be alien ! well, i'm starting a new ff , and i promise i'd have this updated , like as soon as possible ? but only after sep 16 or 20 as i have my xams coming over !
i'd love to dedicate this solely to all my lovely frnds and especially to ishi , who stood by my side through everything , including the indian aristocracy thing šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰ , i'm truly very happy to have a frnd like u , who'd stand by my side always and a sister who'd give her shoulder for me to cry and laugh with me ... i love u , kitty ā¤ļø and i'd love to ask if u want to join me in this ff , too ? 😃

n apart frm ishi , i'd like to thnk arunima aka my pgli 😃 , my sweet aka savindi di and sammy , my biriyani aka barnali di and arushi di ofcoz , thnkew my dear frnds , for being available for me

well i can't forget , payal di , rio , anu aka niall girl , aisha di , meera sis , deekshu , neetu di , taklema di , priya akka ,shefu api , avi akka , sudha akka n everyone

sorry if i missed someone's name
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PROLOGUE :
life is very short, cherish it ...


A little girl peeped out of a toy store ... was looking like a angel...
...
"mama , i just loved it "
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"mama, is india a good place...? "
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tears swimmed in her mother's eyes
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"it's nothing my dear . we'll surely fly over there once " assured the mother
...
she looked out of the window and memory of the past started crossing mind


well, frnds i know tht u didn't get a bit of it ! šŸ˜†šŸ˜›šŸ˜³
and i assure u that i'll be updating soon 😊

index:
chappy 1 - page 2


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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for the new story harini
nice prologue
that girl might be the daughter of our akdha
and akdha is seperated in the story
continue soon
pm me too
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for new ff dear. ..
nice prologue... even im thinking what mamta told...
update 1st chapter soon dear..
nd all the best for ur exam. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1357raksha

congrats for new ff dear. ..
nice prologue... even im thinking what mamta told...
update 1st chapter soon dear..
nd all the best for ur exam. ...

nd pm me too...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats fr ur new ff dear..
prologue nice but confused
waiting fr chap
updt soon n pless add me in ur buddylist n
pm me whn u updt 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so nice.. update soon nd pm me if possible
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chappy 1

on a winter evening , that was extremely chill , so much that the whole city of paris looked frozen , when a little girl peeped out of a store with a doll in her hand , wearing a winter coat ,smiling at her new doll. Her mother who was just behind this little angel who was looking as innocent as ever having a doll as little as her, smiled . And that smile which the little girl was wearing in her face ,that looked like even the god;s own angel's smile can never be as beautiful as the girl's was ! while , the mother and daughter were goin' back home , there was snow falling , which wasn't unusual .Even in the freezing temperature there were kids , innocent souls playing out there . As soon as , the girl saw the other kids playing out there in the park , she also wanted to play , and she did it !

looking down at her daughter who was snuggling inside the snow , creating snow angels , the mother smiled . And after about an hour , the mother did not want her daughter to play in a extreme climate , as the little one had a fragile body that can catch cold easily. "aaliya...aaliya , come , it's enough of playing , it's too chill , we shall get home soon" said the caring mother gaining the attention of the little girl , "few more minutes mama , please ! " said aaliya , with a pleading voice . "baby , it's growing darker & colder " said the mother lovingly stroking her daughter's hair . " But mama , I'm so strong to withstand the chillness and too brave to oppose the dark " said aaliya with a comical face that made the mother laugh "of course my dear , you are stronger and braver but what to do , your mama is weak na ? we shall come over an other day , i'll take you to a restaurant now , if yur ready to go with me , so , are you moving or staying up her ? " asked the mother cunningly . Aaliya looked into her mother's eyes and demanded "you'll take me to a restaurant now ? before getting home ? " . " yes , now come " saying this she handled the doll back to it's little owner

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"mama , I just loved it there , Indian restaurants are pretty good " chirped aaliya to her mother . " they are ! " , agreed the mother as she sat beside her daughter , in the bed , " mama , Is india a good place ? as its style of food is ? " asked aaliya , as she turned the lamp on . " ofcourse , it is a very good place , indeed " said the mother smiling at the innocent face that seemed to show much interest in this topic . " will you take me to india at once ? " , when the little one said this , Jodha , the mother 's smile faded a little and tears swimmed in her eyes . " what are you keeping from me mom ? " . " It's nothing , my dear . we'll surely go there , but now go to bed . You'll have to get ready for your next day " saying this Jodha kissed aaliya's forehead , turned the the lamp off and walked out of the room .

Jodha looked out of the window and the memories of the past started crossing her mind and the tears she tried to hold back started streaming down her cheeks , she tried to fight them back but she wasn't able to , so she let them flow down her milky cheeks

"oyyeee... bhai ! rukiye na " shouted Jodha
"why would you want me to wait , haan ? " said sudhir Jo's bro-like , running away from Jo
"you don't know ? i mean, today is raksha bandhan and you're running away from me !" said jo determined to run after him .
" i know ki today is raksha bandhan but i can't afford buying you a mountain of gifts , emptying my pocket ! " , running away from jo was one of the biggest tasks that sudhir ever took up , one of the tasks he had to do at least once in a day .
"hayeee.. you conjoos ...i wouldn't ask for a lot gifts bhai , wait ! " but , sudhir was running even faster because this was what jo said almost every year ! And when jo was about to catch him , he hid himself behind a tall, stout , well-built , handsome hunk . Jodha apparently tried to apply a break to herself but ended up colliding with the man & making him unbalanced , but he balanced himself and also managed to catch Jo in his arms , Jo closed her eyes , tightly , in anticipation of falling down so hard , but she didn't ... she opened her eyes slowly , realising that she was clinging onto someone , she jerked off ,. " Are you a blind by birth ? or a blind , right now ? so that you could bump into me , with a reason ? " He said smirking . Jo was embarassed & was also furious , at the damn man , before her . " why the hell would you expect me to act blind , just to bump into you ? " she demanded angerily and then glared at sudhir who was grinning with the happenings . " oh , you have all the chances of being blind , to bump into me , because you must know i'm Jalal -udin-mohamoud " said the guy with a slight smirk playing in his lips . But before shazia could open her mouth to retort , sudhir came to give a conclusion . "Jalal , this is my sister Jodha and... " saying so , he dragged his gaze from jodha to jalal , "she and i were playing around , running , and i kinda ran behind you...so.. " sudhir expained .

" haan , and now i remember , come here ! " said Jo moving to sudhir , smirking devilishly
" no , no! , jalal , save me , my bhai ! my pocket will be empty , if not " said sudhir again hidding behind jalal
"why ? what's up ? " said jalal , standing as a barrier between the two
"who the hell are you ? so that you come between me and my bro ? " said the furious girl , continuing to try to catch sudhir .
"sudhir , is my friend , why the heck are you running behind him ? " said jalal with a calm and composed voice , but threatening voice , too ! . Jo was afraid bu she successfully hidden it from him .
"but...he is my bro and i need to tie rakhi to him , you move away from my path " said Jo with rage filling her up . Jo saw sudhir running towards another side and started running behind him again , it looked like tom chasing the jerry ! but she left Jalal starring at her as if she is a alien . For , Jalal was never ordered by someone nor was he forbidden , but this girl , who had the damn guts to speak against him .
"bhai ! Jo called out for him . While turning and looking at his beautiful devilish sister - like , not caring to stop running , he fell into a pool . Laughing at sudhir , who fell into the pool , just because of looking back at her , grinning , she tied a rakhi to him . she did it ! yeah she did what she did all these years ,

" i guessed it right ! this year also , my pocket is going to be empty , again " said sudhir with unhidden grief .
"awww... i pity you & also , i'll punish you for trying to run away from me "declared jo
" koi lamha mera , naah ho , mere paise ke bina , har saans pe naam , ghandhiji ka ..." sang sudhir , re-writing the song for his own situation
" hahaha ..very funny bahi ! but you create jokes later , aur gifts de mereko " ordered jo

...to be continued 😊

hope you liked it

and ishi ? u remember ? i said my math sir said me to stop writing stories n concentrate on studies n mom scolded me blah blah na ? it was exactly the same story he read ! thnk god he read only till the mother and daughter thing and i said it was a crime sort of story and the elder daughter of jo was kidnapped in india and thus she was crying >_< , if he would've read some other non-sense of mine , i couldn't think of what i've reasoned him with ! šŸ˜† love ya ā¤ļø

don't forget to hit like and share your comment , it mean a lot to me 😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mamtasingla

congrats for the new story harini
nice prologue
that girl might be the daughter of our akdha
and akdha is seperated in the story
continue soon
pm me too

thnkew mamta sis
😊
idk sis , i have no idea of what i'm writing but will answer try giving big updates which would make it easy to understand
sure di
i actually thought of sending pm's aftr posting the chappy and i just did it šŸ˜†
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just posted the chappy sis , in pge 2 šŸ˜†

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