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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Prii1994..

Woww... 😎

That was crazyy yet cute!!!!!
I loved the tom n jerry fight of Sudhir and Jo... 😉
They looked superr cute... 😳
And that Jalal... Yoo man... Why was he acting so arrogant...???? Couldn't he see, it's right of we all sisters to demand a gift from our brothers... Not always we get this privilege to ROB them!!!!! 😆

hehe thnks sissy , we're crazy so is our story 😆i know we're being a bit childish but hoping to improve 😃 true , brothers are meant to be robbed , then 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovespari

hey dear...pless updt soon waiting

we both aren't finding time sissy , and ishika's 10th xam is nearing . But i think i'll be updating within this week as it's been too long 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Update soon eagerly waiting for that

so sorry for not updating the last time i promised , had personal problems to deal with . Will be updating soon , later this week , mayhap
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Update plzzz .. I think now ur r over ...

nay , it's jus that ishika and i find it difficult to find time . will be updating later this week 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

well hello friends , we're back with update . sorry for being late and breaking promises of updating . Ishika and I are having a tough time handling it , but we'll update whenever we find time .

HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY

RECAP

Mother and daughter speaking ...jo recalling past ...jo and ja meet while jo's running behind her bro for tying rakhi

Chapter 2

The ringing sound of her mobile woke her up from her lingering thoughts of her past . She reached out to take her mobile . She looked at the phone screen and saw that it was Georgiana

"Hello Jo , you there ? "

" yep , Georgie , is something wrong ? "

" No , why ? "

" You call late at night ask me why i ask if something's wrong ? " , Jo asked as she rolled her eyes heavenward .

" You're going to come soon tomorrow , there's a surprise " answered Georgia over ecstatically , which made Jodha's eyes narrow suspiciously

" Girl , what is it ? Don't tell me i'm gonna come there and find you in the aisle ? "

"Aisle in the lab , bah, we've found out something , and i'm sure you'll love our new discovery " , said Georgia

" uh huh , And I have to wait to know what ? "

" That's obvious . Anyway what's up ?

"Was just going to sleep and you ? "

" Same , good night Jo , come soon on the morrow , bye ! " ( morrow means morning , highland accent )

" Same to ya , sleep tight "

And with that they hang up . Georgiana was a charming and beautiful girl with her fiery red hair and shining hazel eyes that are as shinny as gold . Georgiana usually brightened Jo's mood , but not today , not when she was thinking of something that meant so much to her once

Why did it have to happen ?' she thought sadly .

Back to Flashback :

Two years flew by without meeting each other . And they almost forgot about each other but nay , fate wouldn't let them walk away .

Did she have eye problem or what ? She was seeing him sitting in her home . Is she mistaking someone for him ? Jalal , the great businessman , was sitting in her home . Was she dreaming ?

" Amalia , did I not teach you staring is rude ? "Her mother asked bringing her back to the world

. She realized she'd been staring at him . Jalal , on the hand , was looking surprised , too . Nay , there was no mistaking his expression , his eyes were wide and they were saying he was surprised . What was he doing here , anyway ? She knew he was arrogant . He'd shown her exactly what he is , that he was a stubborn oaf of a man , in their 2nd and 3rd meets ,too . He'd enlightened her by saying he thought she was the most impossible stupid bitch ever , in their 1st meet . Yeah , right he'd said her that as he helped Sudhir get out of the pool .

Amalia was what her Grandma Clara used to call her . Her Grandma was of Italian decent . Amalia meant defender . Her mother , too , uses to call her that but unlike her grandma she calls her with her given name too , at times .

"erh...yeah , you did , mom but...who's this ? " She asked motioning to Jalal , Who now regained his posture and wore the look of utter boredom .

" He's your papa's friend's son , princess "

She rolled her eyes as her mother called her princess , well , she'd been their princess since her birth . She's an only daughter and was treasured well . But how did she not know Jalal was her papa's friend's son ?

"well...hello " she said looking at Jalal and before he could reply she turned abruptly to her mother and asked

"can I go out tonight, maman ? " (maman = mama, in French )

" I don't think you can , sweet heart , though I wish you can have a moment to yourself , but your papa wants you in home today " Anna , her mother , informs her .

"Oh ? And what am I needed for ?To be a servant to papa's guests ? " Jodha asked without giving her words a second thought , but her mother's glare told her what she thought of her and words . Courtesies be damned !

" you ,children , have a little chat while I prepare dinner " Anna said with a cheeky smile . And she left them both alone in the living room .

" So , miss stupid as donkey we, now , are family friends . " He said with a smirk . what was that smirk for ? That she didn't know , but she didn't like it , nonetheless .

"Did no one mention you're dumber than dirt ? " She asked returning his smirk thought it wavered a little .

He narrowed his eyes but then he chuckled . Did he find her amusing ?

"You still have the guts to speak to me in the tone , I thought age would change you , but it didn't "

"Are you my creator or master so I wouldn't speak to you the way I did ? " Jodha asked totally irked .

" Soon , I think I will be " He said and winked at her . Clearly , He knew how to irritate her .

"Go to hell " She just completed saying when a voice came from behind her .

"He's already got the passes to go there " The voice said

She turned to look at her best friend of school days standing there

"can you never keep your mouth shut , Mirza ? " Jalal asked Mirza

what is Mirza doing here ? she thought as she looked from Jalal to Mirza

"Bhaijaan , aren't you going to introduce us ? " Mirza said and turned to Jodha , "Hello Jo , in case you forgot me , I'm mirza , Jalal's brother but as you know you don't have to worry as I have manners unlike the idiot that my brother is "

"I think someone will be in need of ambulance do you not shut up ,Mirza " said Jalal in a tone that clearly said Don't you dare argue

" I know you're not like your brother , Mirza , cause no one can be as shittier as he " Jodha said and she and Mirza started laughing hard

Jalal didn't know what was so amusing . How dare that bitch say he's shittier ? Jalal started to walk outside the living room as he didn't know what to say , God only knows how he managed living with one devil all these years and there is another now . He didn't know how they both got along well when they just met . Enemy's Enemy is friend and he was their common enemy , he concluded . Just met ? Did Mirza not say ' In case you forgot me ' ? Aw , that meant the devils knew each other . And they were a pain in his arse

"Jo , don't you think someone is afraid to even be with us ? " Mirza asked eying his brother and that stopped his brother and made him turn around and glare at him

"Yep , He's as scared as a cat in water , tch tch I never he'd be a coward that he is ."

" Do you think he looks like a cat ? " Mirza asked . They both turned to look at Jalal in unison and then looked at each other and then broke out laughing .

"He looks like an ugly buffalo " Jodha said still giggling . That is it , he'd had enough of it now .

"Will you both shut up and get out of my sight ? " Jalal shouted . Mirza and Jodha just looked at each other and again started laughing .

"You both seem to get along well " Jodha's father said from the door step .

"Yeah , they get along well just as I said you they would " said yet another who was with jodha's dad . Apparently , He was Jalal's father .

" Oh yes , they get along well , get them both married " said Jalal wanting to escape a marriage with the bitch .

Yes , you got that right . Their fathers wanted them both to be married . And the irony is , they were engaged when they were both still crawling . And these friends , who were their fathers ,thought it's best to tell them and get them married after they were grown up enough for a legal wedding for they felt their kids should be old enough to know what's good for them .

"Jalal , I meant you both get along well " Jalal's father said

"Is that so ? " Asked Jalal totally irked .

From the start he didn't like this idea of marriage to a stranger but his parents convinced him it wasn't as bad as he thought . But now he knew for sure it was going to be living hell for him if he was married to a girl like her .

Jodha who wasn't informed of the marriage thing wasn't taking their talks serious . As she didn't understand anything she thought of walking out of the room , But she wouldn't go out alone , would she ? No , She'll drag Mirza along .

" Good evening , papa and welcome , uncle " She said smiling at the middle aged men , then turned to Mirza , " coming along ? " she asked .

"Yep " Mirza said without even asking why .

"Where are you going , beta ? " Jodha's father ,Bharmal , asked as they both started outside the room

"Rose garden , papa " she replied and resumed walking .

"They seem to get along very well indeed , Jalal " Jalal's father , humayun , commented after they went out .

"It seems they knew each other before now " Jalal said as they sat down in the couch .

And they started discussing everything that came to men , politics , business , future world ...

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"Why did you never tell me he was your brother ? " Jodha asked

"Because I never felt the need to tell you , but now , You know it ? don't you ? And what does it matter he's my brother ? "

Jodha sighed because she knew she wasn't making any sense to herself .

" Anyway , I'm happy we can meet again after 3 long months " Jodha said

"I'm happy ,too , we're relatives " Mirza said

" Relatives ? " Jodha asked skeptically

So no one still told her Mirza thought and said "Well , family friends "

"hmm"

" You've didn't change a bit in these three months, did you , Jo ? "

" No . Did you ? "

" No . "

" You know something ?

"hmm? "

" your brother is a bullshit "

" I knew it . " he chuckled , " But he can be nice to people he love "

"He and love ? I've met him only 3 times and I know he's the icy king "

"3 times ? " He raised a brow .

And she told him about the times she met Jalal .

" hmm , you both had an amazing start " He said

" really ? " she asked rolling her eyes

" Did you give your dream up or what ? " He asked

"What dream ? "

" The dream in which you were supposed to be a singer cum scientist ? "

" Well , do you think I can manage to achieve it ? "

"Come on , give it a try , you sing well and you're good in science ,too "

" But , papa wants me to take over the business and maman expects me to run her estates , what am I to do ? "

" You can marry someone who can take oer your business for you and running estates is a girly thing , your mother must already have taught you well of it "

" I don't wanna be at the mercy of a man and I don't sing well , anyway "

" You sing well enough "

"but..."

"No ifs and buts Jo , weren't you the one who used to say learn to fly and chase your dreams ? "

"Miley cyrus "

"I beg your pardon ? "

"It's Miley cyrus's song You'll always find your way back home lyrics "

"The Quote ? "

"Aye " She replied

" Anyway , you're the one who said it to me "

" Uh huh , But I don't think I can even go participate in something like the X-factor "

" If you think you can't in X-factor , you can try with The American Idol ? "

" As if I'm gonna win that ? "

"Oh , Come on , you know you deserve it !"

" We'll speak of this later . Where's your mother , Mirza ? "

" She's with our aunt , who's sick . But she'll be here by dinner time "

"Oh , and what of your dreams , Mirza , ? "

" I , apparently , am trying to chase it but it keeps running away from me "

" Liar , You're too busy chasing girls to even think of your dreams , is that not so ? " Jodha said and started laughing

And their banter continued ...

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DINNER :

" Jodha beta ? " Bharmal hesitantly said

" Aye , papa ? " looking up from her plate she asked

" Do you love someone ? " Her father asked

" What ? Why do you ask , papa ? " She asked

" Yes , Uncle , she loves someone " Mirza interjected and got a deadly stare from Jodha that silenced him .

"No , papa , He lies . Liar ! " She spit out at Mirza

" Well , then , have you ever thought of your marriage ? "

" Are you kidding me ? I mean I just turned 18 and you ask me if I gave my marriage a thought ? "

" You think whatever your mother and I decide for you , is good for you , right ? "

" Yes . but..why do you ask me ?" She asked suspiciously

" We're going to get you married , Jodha "

"Married ? why ? " She started panicking ,, Mirza just made her believe she can still go after her dreams and now it's crashed .

" Because You are engaged , Jo "

" Engaged to whom ? " she asked

" Don't panick , beta , we'll take care of you very well " Said Hamida

" Engaged to Mirza ? " She asked as she eyed him

" No , beta , You're engaged to Jalal " said her father

" What ? Marry this " she caught her tongue in time " I'm sorry , everyone , it's just the news was so sudden and I ...well I panicked "

Hamida smiled knowingly , she knew her Jalal , and understood Jodha . But she wouldn't let Jodha walk away from her son . A little chat with the girl and she knew the girl can melt her son .

"It's okay we understand , it usually is how someone , with right mind , will react if they heard they'll be marrying my son " She said

"Amy , If she's not interested in marrying me , tell her she's free of the engagement " Said Jalal irritated by the whole drama

" No , you both , will be marrying no matter what . Jodha , beta , I'm so bored of living with men . Now , I want a daughter-in-law and I want you to be the one " Hamida said

Jalal grunted in reply

" Amalia , you just said you believe the decisions we take are for your good , don't you think we're doing what's the best for you , angel ? "

" Okay...do whatever you believe is good for me " She said

" You aren't feeling forced into this , honey ? " her mom was apparently over concerned of her feelings

" No , maman , at least your marrying me into a family that my friend belongs to , instead of a family of complete strangers "

" I'm happy you think so , but , we're also your family now , beta , don't think Mirza is your only friend " said Hamida

Jodha smiled " If you'll excuse me ,I'll retire for the day " she and started turning away

" Jo , All the best " Mirza said smiling at her .

She was confused at first but then smiled , "Thank you and I'll help you chase , both " She said and she winked at him .

"Good night , sleep tight "

"Same to you , bye "

And she went upstairs to her room . Mirza was right , she is supposed to be chasing her dreams , not worrying about her father's business and all other stuffs . Now , she'll let Jalal worry about all those and she'll live her dreams .

sorry for an mistakes in text or grammar . It wasn't edited , And we'll try to update from time to time

with love ,

Ishika and Harini
Edited by harini1482002 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi sissy , missed ya so much ! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear. ...
Superb update. ...
Jo finds jalal in her mom nd what d next thing she got to kne that she is marring him...
Mirza gave her right advice to go get her dream fulfilled. ...
Nd jalal is there to take care of other things. ...
But y do they fight so much. ..
Update soon. ...
nd thanks for pm. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Hi dear. ...

Superb update. ...
Jo finds jalal in her mom nd what d next thing she got to kne that she is marring him...
Mirza gave her right advice to go get her dream fulfilled. ...
Nd jalal is there to take care of other things. ...
But y do they fight so much. ..
Update soon. ...
nd thanks for pm. ...

I have no idea why this fighting thing comes but it feels right to hae them fighting instead of having them falling for each other
thnk you sis , and yep , will update as soon as possible :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update👏

why do they argue so much.

Mirza's advice is cool
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow...finally JJ marriage topic discussed ... hope JJ will understand each other... wow Mirza & jo r frinds..continue soon & do pm

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