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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522

^^ohh ok...tell her not to update till 28 aug..28 aug evening chalega!!


kyun kya hai??on 28th??
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies


kyun kya hai??on 28th??


arey aayu...3 days test hai..26,27 & 28..so cmnt na kru toh madam gussa ho jayegi na!! 28th eve m free so update krne ko bola...nothin else!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522


arey aayu...3 days test hai..26,27 & 28..so cmnt na kru toh madam gussa ho jayegi na!! 28th eve m free so update krne ko bola...nothin else!!


hmm hmm okay!! All the best.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 59: Aditya Santok Malhotra.

Okay please forgive me for being so late but I will try to compensate. I just need your support guys as I am so busy. I know it becomes difficult to link up after these many days but what do I do I have a very busy schedule and so I am not able to write. All I can do is apologize please forgive me.. see I am holding my ears... Ab toh maaf kardo yaara... chalo let's see what I have stored for you in this chapter... and yes I want to thank all of you as I will soon be writing chapter 60 and frankly speaking it means a lot.

"Pick me up in 10 minutes, bye", said a stern voice over the call.

Seeing Manik sweating like hell Nandini asked him, "everything alright? Who was on the call Manik?" Her voice brought Manik out of the trance and he asked her leave and said he will explain once he is back he was leaving when he came back kissed her forehead and shouted while going away to his car, "please don't worry nothing is wrong I will explain once I am back and be ready to meet someone you were dying to meet, and yaa I LOVE YOU" she laughed at the thought that he knew her very well. He knew that she would be worried about what happened but now she was relaxed.

"But wait, did he just said be ready to meet someone? Ab kon hai o god this Manik na can't he just clear the air. Uff now I have to wait", cribbed Nandini at Manik only to realize she is blabbering to herself.

"Everything alright?", asked Cabir when he saw Nandini talking to herself and soon was assured by Nandini's gesture that she was okay.

The party was going pretty well but there was one person who was waiting for Manik and to beat the time she was walking to and fro and then she heard a familiar voice.

"Hello friends, sorry to disappear from my own party but had to go to catch someone more important than the party, Meet Aditya Santok Malhotra my Dad", announced Manik looking straight into a pair of puffy dove eyes whom he can recognize in millions of crowd and he saw a smile on her face and his eyes twinkled on that.

Yes, she was smiling not because she was meeting his dad but because she saw a spark in his eyes a smile on his face which she never witnessed in her entire life with him. This was new; this was her first she wanted this smile to be always there on his face always. She at that time itself knew, Manik and his dad were really close really very close. And she felt privileged watching the bond in front of her eyes that made her believe that yes someone loved him the way she loves him or may be a little more than her.

"Nandini meet my dad", introduced Manik his dad to his love breaking her train of thoughts and suddenly she felt numb. All her senses gave up on her and she started trembling and she stammered at her own sentence, "ah.. he..ll..lo.. sir.. I me..an...un..cle mean.. dad.. actually wo." Seeing no way out she touched his feet showing a gesture that he means a lot to him. And in return she received a kiss on her forehead by Manik's dad as a blessing.

Aditya Santok Malhotra, the man who never felt loved was amazed to see a tiny little princess paving way in his heart and her touch on his feet made him realize that she really considered him as dad. No doubt he understood today how she might have entered his son's life. Manik was shocked to see his dad showing a lovely gesture in public but it dint took a second for him to realize that after all it was Nandini. A girl proved to spell a person by her charm and he was happy to see them accepting each other.

"Thank you ah.. um.." stammered Nandini not knowing what to address Mr. Aditya Malhotra until he answered, "You can call me Dad as I would be privileged to have you as my daughter-in-law". The statement of him made MaNan to drop their jaw and made them blushed. "Oh, I never knew my son could actually blush, I must say you have got immense charm and you have spellbound my son. I wish you don't turned out to be the one standing in the blue in that crowd", said Mr. Malhotra pointing to a lady wearing a blue dress in the crowd who was none other than Nyonika Malhotra. And now this sentence made Nandini feel like someone has stabbed her a knife but still she managed to say, "No doubt that Manik aap pay gaya hai cause even his belief on love and woman was fragile. But you know dad I don't know the truth but I can't leave Manik not because he loves me but because I Love him MORE and if I'll leave him na then I'll pakka die", her words brought tears in Manik's eyes and it said the truth which was instantly believed by his dad. He then whispered to Nandini and Manik, "I will wait for the way when you grow up and get one but till that I have to manage that old lady who is getting on our nerves and has made your lives hell. It's time for her to learn a lesson for behaving like a bitch to MY SON" , said a hurt father who couldn't be there for his son because he was hurt and betrayed by a lady he used to or should I say who still loved her but now he is able to handle his emotion for her.

"In the study room in 5 minutes, we need to talk to some matter Miss Nyonika Malhotra", said Mr. Malhotra fiercely and was followed by a scared Nyonika to the study room.

"Manik sab thik hai dude", asked Cabir to which he replied that he is not aware of dad's surprise visit as he never came back to home after she left him. "Manik there comes a day when you feel solving your old problems or should I say the old leftover works and it would be the best if there is a closure on this. Trust me dad will not leave us now I can promise you he will never go" said Nandini and her words calmed Manik and he kissed her temple.

"Hogaya tum logo ka romance then let's hit the dance floor", churned Mukti seeing the atmosphere going all tensed and then they went on dance floor and after a while everybody started shouting for Fab 5 to give a rocking performance and finally they started to perform...

Manik and Mukti started their electric guitar.. and Dhruv played his acoustic one...

Mujh mein safar tu karti rahe
Har ik saans mein guzarti rahe

Cabir started the drums and Manik sang looking straight in Nandini's eyes.. followed by Dhruv who went to Alya who started playing keyboard and swayed along with Dhruv as she knew he mean it...


Shaamo subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jismo jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda

Manik again took the charge went on his knees making the party people go all gaga but little did they knew that Manik did this for his lady love..


Teri meri kahaani
Hai baarishon ka paani
Banke jo ishq barse
Teri meri kahaani

Cabir started singing for Navya and he meant the lyrics and Fab 5 were shocked to see him so open

Dekho na kaisi ijaazat mili hai
Ek doosre mein hifaazat mili hai

Navya came on stage and circled Cabir and sang and they were lost in each others eyes..


Jeene ki saari zaroorat mili hai

Mukti sang breaking their trance... and kept her hands one on cabir's shoulder ad other on Navya's shoulder telling them to be like this always


Ye jo bhi hai jaisa yunhi hamesha
Hamesha rahe jis tarah

Manik started again and Dhruv accompanied him in singing..


Shaamo subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jismo jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda

Cabir, Dhruv and Manik sang together..


Teri meri kahaani
Hai baarishon ka paani
Banke jo ishq barse
Teri meri kahaani
Mujh mein safar tu karti rahe
Har ik saans mein guzarti rahe

Manik went off stage and playing the guitar he looked straight in Nandini's eyes and sang the lyrics..


Hum se ye jo bhi harqat hui hai
Mohabbat mohabbat mohabbat hui hai

Nandini caressed his face and sang the lyrics meaning each words they were so lost and their lips were inches away they were about to kiss.


Kuch itne hain hum tum
Kami kuch nahi hai
Jitna bhi jeena hai
Tujhko hi jeena hai
Jeete rahein jis tarah

Cabir broke their trance and sang standing close to them..
Shaamo subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jism jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda

Teri meri kahaani
Hai baarishon ka paani
Ban ke jo ishq barse
Teri meri kahaani


The performance was witnessed by two other people from the study room and there was a smile an ear to ear smile on the man's face as he could witness their true love.

"I won't let you spoil this never Nyonika never, get out of our lives or else I promise I will destroy you. I have had enough betrayal I took it cause it was related only to me but today it is concerned of my children and I won't let you ruin it never so get this straight in your PEA-SIZED BRAIN that one wrong step and you are out of this property and our lives forever", said Mr. Malhotra with anger filled in his eyes for her. "You can't do this with me, don't forget you still love me. What is wrong with you both, son and dad are both ready to sacrifice me for that COMMONER" complained Nyonika to which she received a statement enough to be like a tight slap on her face. "Nandini Murthy and the future Nandini Malhotra she is, take her name in a proper manner or else I swear you will be never called Nyonika Malhotra again" said Mr. Malhotra and he was leaving the room when he stepped back and continue, "and yes I am not leaving my house now, I am going to stay with my son and his love over here so suit yourself in one of the guest rooms and vacant the bedroom soon. Shhh no if's and but's this house now belongs to Manik Malhotra and I am sure he will be willingly ready to throw you out but I am offering you at least guest house so be fast you have half an hour and don't disturb the servants they are busy so do it yourself or else it won't take a minute for me to throw you out. Be quick." Said Mr. Malhotra that made the wicked bitch shut her mouth and left her all horrified.

Manik went to Nandini and hugged her tightly, she responded with equal intensity as she knew he would burst out anytime so she sneaked him near the pool and he rested his head on her lap and her legs rested in the water inside the pool.

"Manik, sleeping?" asked Nandini while busy moving her fingers in his hairs and she received a No as an answer. "Toh mera baby kya soch raha hai?" asked Nandini in the sweetest tone to which he replied entangling his fingers with hers and caressing her knuckles, "Nandini you know me very well, I really m tensed. Kya dad sach mein ab nahi jaayenge I mean wo humare sath rahenge na main firse unse alag nahi hona chahta. I miss him a lot and Nyonika has ruined everything but dad will he again be selfish and leave us alone" this time Manik had tears in his eyes and she rubbed it off and asked him not to cry and she said, "Manik, yeh PaNi dekh rahe ho, it seems stationary, constant it seems like it is not moving but it is always under a great tension. Deep in this water always flow a pressure similarly dad seems to be constant and you named it selfishness but Manik I feel whatever is going on inside him na we won't be able to face if it comes out. Give him time, because if you were betrayed by your mother than he was betrayed by his own wife. Imagine agar kal tumhe pata chale that I betrayed y.." before she could complete she was stopped by a hand covering her mouth and an anger filled red eyes said, "Never, never ever in this entire life say this sentence again. I believe you so please don't". she can see the pain in his eyes and so she continued, "jis dard ko um mehsus karne se bhi dar rahe ho, wo dard tumhare dad 19 saalo se jeete aarahe hai. Put yourself in his shoes and imagine the scenario. Manik life has set its own packages of happiness which life itself decide when to open and by whom. So why waste time thinking about ke future may kya hoga and ruin your present. Dad is with us today enjoy this time make immense memories, so that if he leaves you can leave you life on this memories" Manik was not amazed by the way she calmed him cause she is been doing this to him it seems since forever. But there was one person with tears in his eyes surprise to witness such beautiful tiny creature existing on this earth who understood life at such age.

Aditya Santok Malhotra had tears cause he saw fears in his 20 year old son, fear of losing his father once again, fear of getting ditched by his mother again, fear of falling in darkness but then he saw a hand holding his son tight and he decided to tighten this bond and to stay with them until they officially unite.

"kya horaha hai yahan?" asked Mr. Malhotra to the couple and on feeling his presence they straighten themselves and replied in a gesture stating nothing much is happening. "oh to tum dono tare gin rahe the yahan lete lete" said dad in a joking manner to which both o them laughed and Nandini said, "No dad, Manik was afraid that" Manik shushed her before she completes the sentence. "I will not leave now beta, trust me" said dad.

Precap:

"trust you, how can I dad?" said Manik.

Outrage of emotions...

Okay okay fine I am sorry I am pretty late but main kya karu I am so busy now-a-days... so happy finally daddy is in the picha... Yaa the next chapter would be a little emotional but the latter half would be a worth waiting for..

Please write your lovely comments and share your views on my new SS...

"If the intensity of the SUN could be measured, if the depth of the craters in the MOON could be known... Than that's exactly how much I love you" - Kiara..

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Kiara...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Very happy that Manik's father is back to them
Loved MaNan scene
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ty for d pm n update...
loved d update...
haha hw nandu was stammering while talking to Mr malhotra...hehe cute...
loved manan song part...
finally Mr malhotra is back...
loved manan pool side scene...loved d way nandu calmed down manik...
Hehe aww dat was cute scene between manan n Mr malhotra...
plz continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fab update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Di aapka update padke humesha mera face pe toh bahot hi badi wali smile aajaati h😃...sachi meinnn😆😊
Ur update was fabuluos...srsly :)
Ur depth of writing is so great...each emotion so deeply explained...waterwala exmaple...so trueee👏
I alsooluvd d song sequence:)
Finalllyyy...mr. M enters dstory...haaaye...nyonika ki shakl dekhne layak hogii...kya awesome scene tha woh...perfect😉😉
I so veerrryyy lluuvvdd d laassttt llyynnn😳..it means so much dat i cnt explain in words..❤️
Loevelyupdatee😉
Always keep writing😊

PS- happy rakshabandhan di😊😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Chocolava14

Di aapka update padke humesha mera face pe toh bahot hi badi wali smile aajaati h😃...sachi meinnn😆😊

Ur update was fabuluos...srsly :)
Ur depth of writing is so great...each emotion so deeply explained...waterwala exmaple...so trueee👏
I alsooluvd d song sequence:)
Finalllyyy...mr. M enters dstory...haaaye...nyonika ki shakl dekhne layak hogii...kya awesome scene tha woh...perfect😉😉
I so veerrryyy lluuvvdd d laassttt llyynnn😳..it means so much dat i cnt explain in words..❤️
Loevelyupdatee😉
Always keep writing😊

PS- happy rakshabandhan di😊😳



Aww sweetheart.. It means a lot..
I feel blessed to have such good ppl in my life..
Happy rakshabandhan princess..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Glad...finally got an update!!
It was too good...
Pls update the next part soon

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