Jodha Akbar 7: Parwaan chad chuka tha

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FOR ALL THOSE WATCHING THE RE-RUN OF JODHA AKBAR AND MY OLD READERS

Folks,

Those of you who still visit the Jodha Akbar forum, and used to read my almost daily episode analyses for Jodha Akbar between June 2013 and April 2014, would be surprised, if not startled, to see me popping up again, like Rip van Winkle😉, well after the serial has been (clumsily) wound up. It is not a long story, so here goes.

My very good friend Mandy (ghalibmirza) had persuaded me, somewhat against my better judgement, to write episode analyses once again for those watching the rerun of Jodha Akbar. This began on her Jodha Akbar Discussion thread at

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/zee-anmol/4447559/jodha-akbar-discussion-corner

and I have so far done Episodes 1-10. These were fresh ones for me, since I had posted first in this forum only 2 weeks after Jodha Akbar started, on June 30, 2015. I had thus done these new ones on a daily basis.

But from now on, I shall be doing biweekly posts for 3 episodes at a time, on Thursdays and Sundays.

As for reviving these posts in the main Jodha Akbar forum, this is in response to requests from some of my regular readers, who felt that there might be interest in reading them even among casual visitors to this forum. I am not very sure of this, but I am willing to make experiment, so here goes with the post for Episode No.1: Sound and Fury.

I send PMs about these posts to a certain number of regular readers who want that, and if you want to be included in that list, all you need to do is to send me a PM to that effect.

If you read this post or the follow up ones and happen to like them, do hit the Like button without fail. I want to keep track of my regular readers even if they are silent readers, and this is the only way I can do that. So please do not forget the Like button!

Shyamala B.Cowsik

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Jodha Akbar 7: Parwaan chad chukha tha

Folks,

This whole episode had the strange, will o' the wisp quality of a dream. It could just as well have been one of those fantasy sequences in films, only set in Amer instead of in Switzerland, with the hero gazing spellbound at the peerless beauty of the heroine and losing his heart to her in a nano-second. Only it was not.

Then again, our hero is not a lovelorn wannabe Romeo. He is, as he informs the cutlery seller with wicked relish, Shahehshah-e-Sultanat Jalaluddin Muhammad, on a swashbuckling adventure like a boy escaping from his dull school routine. And as the episode begins, he is yet to see his lady love-to-be. And she , luckily for him, has no notion that he is floating around!😉

Right now, he is wandering about, hands crossed behind his back in true royal style (when I wrote my first post here on June 30, 2013, I had to explain that this stance, far from being "stiff" , was the way royalty, especially Mughal royalty, moved), twirling his moustache with pride. His eyes, as keen as uske khanjar ki dhaar, scan the Gangaur scene of unbridled colour and gaiety. He is captivated by the light-hearted enjoyment of the crowds, and no wonder, poor boy, after having had to look at his eternally sour-faced Khan Baba day in and day out!😉

The palkis of the royal ladies of Amer appear, but he is not interested. Not, that is , till there are cries of Rajkumari Jodha ki jai! In that instant, his head snaps around, and his eyes are immediately raised to the palki now arriving, trying to penetrate the sheer pardha and catch a glimpse of the Registan ka gulab.

Waqt rukh gaya: Then begin I minute and 53 seconds of sheer magic. Or rather, 1 minute and 53 seconds when time stands still. I was reminded of a sher that captures to perfection what Jalal was feeling:

Waqt do hi guzarein hein mujh par yeh saari umr mein, Ek tere aane se pehle, ek tere jaane ke baad.

The words of his bedazzled sainik echo thru his mind: the bedaag chehra ( curiously enough, the makhmali twacha is omitted!)), the lacheela badan ( which could hardly be made out thru the parda, and that too when Jodha was seated in the palki, but who cares?). To me, Jodha's bepanah husn (the narrator, whose verbal clumsiness is beyond belief, pronounces this as hansna!) seems to be more an article of faith than of fact at this point of time, but then I was not looking at her thru Jalal's eyes!

Tham gayi thi aanken, rukh gayi thi saansein, bezubaan ho gaya tha Jalal, intones the narrator, and then falls back once again on bezubaan, while I felt like hitting the inarticulate chap on the head for getting in the way, and that too so clumsily. In the way, that is, of my gazing at Jalal's eyes and his face.

First he walks along the side of the path towards the palki, on its right. Then he stops, and as she comes parallel to him, and he moves backwards for a moment, there is a shot of his face that can only be described as priceless.

His eyes, once so sharp and cutting, now look different. They are bold and rakish as they gaze up at Jodha with an unhesitating curiosity that comes from Jalal's imperial lineage and his inbuilt sense of entitlement. But they are also at once seeking and questioning: Is this possible? Can there be beauty as flawless as this? The eyes soften, and for an instant the look in them comes close to adoration. The mouth twists in a half smile of pure satisfaction: Us Rajkumari ke deedar ki chahat poori ho gayi thi!

The narrator babbles on of history having decided to link Jodha and Akbar, but I was not listening. I was lost in the rapture on Jalal's face, a rapture that was reflected in his eyes. He was lost too, in a dream of his own, and as he comes to a halt and the palki starts moving away from him, there is a very curious expression on his face. I could not make it out: was it satisfaction or was it a craving for more?

One minute and fifty three seconds of enchantment were over, and time started moving once again.

The face in the water: Yes, yes, we will get there, But after a moment to remember.

This is when Jodha arrives at the site for the Gangaur pooja and prepares to alight from the palki. Suryabhan has come trotting up, and has placed himself where he thinks Jodha can spot him. But Jalal has other ideas, and he smoothly cuts him off and takes up a position between Suryabhan and the palki. I did not pause to wonder why the former did not shove this impertinent commoner aside, for I was too busy trying to read Jalal's eyes.

The whole face is tight and drawn, and the eyes look almost angry. Is it a nascent possessiveness already at work, that no one but he should gaze on Jodha's beauty? Is it the same raw emotion that later makes him threaten the folk singers against ever singing praises of Jodha's physical perfections? It might well be so.

After Jalal cons the Ameri guards into letting him into the inner enclosure, he walks parallel to Suryabhan but behind him, on the next higher step. Hands behind his back, the body bent slightly but completely at ease, the eyes once again sharp and focussed on Jodha's face, fascinated, devouring.

Whereas Suryabhan, who is in the know of things, looks concerned at Sukanya's storming away after a squabble, Jalal looks amused.

Jodha, told by her mother, Kehte hain jo diya tum paani mein bahati ho, uski roshni mein, ek pal ke liye, tumhein tumhara aanewaala pal dikhta hai, looks half disbelieving, half sweetly compliant, and altogether charming. She bends down, launches her diya on the water and questions the Goddess, He Gangaur Maata, batayiye kya hai hamari kismet mein? ( and I thought kismet was pure Urdu, and this should have been bhavishya!).

The Maata responds with unexpected celerity. A sudden wind comes up, blowing leaves and earth all over the place. With perfect timing, it blows away even Suryabhan's heavy, zari doshala just as Jodha is bending to catch the promised glimpse of her future. For a man so keen that she should see him, and him alone, in the water, Suryabhan behaves idiotically, for he bends low and fumbles for the doshala for what looks like ages. And the bird of opportunity flies past him and disappears.

Jalal, on the other hand, stands still, unmoving and unmoved. So it is his face, dazzlingly handsome even upside down, that Jodha gazes at in the water for a long, long moment. A face that is now tilted back as its owner smiles with pure pleasure.

But as she looks up, wanting to make sure of this man who is her future, the wind and the rain make him just a blurred, shadowy presence, a will o' the wisp that is there but almost not there. Jodha aur Jalal ka pehla milan has the curious, intangible quality of a dream. A dream that is to haunt her in the days ahead, as she sees that bold, handsome face in the water even when its owner is not there.

Parwaan chad chukha tha: Ah, yes, the paayal! We have got there at long last.

There is nothing so charming as a paayal of the girl you adore. A lovely piece of work, made lovelier by the fact that it graces her shapely foot. And there can be nothing so delicately romantic as the act of the lover replacing the paayal of the beloved, fastening it with hands that tremble at her touch ( of course one hopes that she does not have cracked heels, for to have to apply Krack cream would have hardly been romantic!😉)

In the event, Jalal has no such notions, and as he looks at Jodha's lost paayal lying in the puddle of water, he seems for a moment unsure and puzzled as to what he should do. Then he bends, one arm behind his back, hesitates once more for a long moment, and then picks it up with his right hand.

There is a certain stiffness in this movement, a rigidity that seemed, in June 2013, to give some cause for complaint. But one has to take into account the character to be played. This is a young man who has his world at his feet. So arrogance comes naturally to him, as also the attitude of one who habitually dominates lesser mortals. The stance, the hands behind his back (exactly like the great Dilip Kumar playing Prince Salim in Mughal-e-Azam, incidentally), the slow walk to pick up Jodha's paayal, the hesitation before he does so, it is all part of the consciousness of being a Mughal ruler.

Jalal is not used to bending at all, for anything or anyone. It would normally never occur to him to stoop and pick up a girl's paayal as a token. Women have always been his to take as he chose, he would never dream of chasing any of them. Still he picks it up, which means a lot more than with an ordinary man.

He does not kiss the paayal as any ordinary lover would. It would be not be like the Shahenshah at all. He tosses it up in the air, but he always catches it, and when it falls into the fire, he burns his hand to retrieve it.

It is revealing that it never occurs to him to poke about in the fire with a stick to retrieve it safely; he plunges his hand straight in. And once he has the paayal safely back, he rolls both his hand and the searing metal of the paayal in the sand to ease the pain of the scorching. But there is not the slightest hint of hurt to be seen in his face or his brooding eyes, for he is too lost to be even conscious of his scorched hand.

All this is not so much, as some have thought, a sign of passion for Jodha. He is not yet aware that he is falling in love with her, he does not know what love means. It is rather the possessiveness towards her that, as the line has it, uske parvaan chad chukha tha. For him, the payal symbolizes Jodha, and he will not let go of it or her, even if he has to burn his fingers to secure it.

It all comes thru beautifully, and far from being unnaturally rigid, it is all spot on for who Jalal is.

At this point, the narrator kindly informs us about what we knew perfectly well already. To wit, that Amer mein kayi khoobsoorat ladkiyaan thin, par Jalal ke liye Amer ka arth thi Jodha. Jalal ko nahin pata tha ki insaan kabhi kabhi kisi to paane ke liye apne aap ko kho deta hai.. Ab Jalal ki ek hi khwahish thi, Jodha ko paane ki..

It is revealing that in Jalal's split second fantasy, where he gallops up on his steed and sweeps Jodha off her feet in one supple movement, into his arms and on the horse , Jodha looks first bewildered and then helpless, while his gaze feasts greedily on her loveliness. This is wish fulfilment at its charam seema!

As the narrator continues to intone solemnly about Jalal having been chosen by fate and having his place in history secured, but bas sahi waqt ka intezaar tha, Jalal is doing his own thing. Holding Jodha's paayal in this hand, he stands there still and unmoving. But his eyes are anything but still, and in them is the same expression that they had when he was in his tent, calling out to Abdul before setting out on this madcap adventure to the heart of the enemy. The spell of his kismet was strong on him, and it is even stronger now. Kismet ke aage kis ki chali hai?

Ok, that is it for today, folks. I am not going into the Jodha-Suryabhan segment at all, so as not to dispel the spell that holds us all in its thrall, except to note that it somehow reminded me, in its headlong, heedless obstinacy, of her Khyber rescue mission. Tomorrow, we enter the Jalal ka sar zone with a vengeance. Adios till then!

Shyamala (B.Cowsik)/Aunty/Akka/Di


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sashashyam

Jodha Akbar 7: Parwaan chad chukha tha

Folks,

This whole episode had the strange, will o' the wisp quality of a dream. It could just as well have been one of those fantasy sequences in films, only set in Amer instead of in Switzerland, with the hero gazing spellbound at the peerless beauty of the heroine and losing his heart to her in a nano-second. Only it was not.

Tomorrow, we enter the Jalal ka sar zone with a vengeance. Adios till then!

Shyamala/Aunty/Akka/Di



Aunty, I have no words to describe the myriad of emotions I felt while reading this beautiful take of yours !


You are truly a reader's delight & I think its high time for you to start a blog & compile all your master pieces.


Our Reaction to Jallu...😳 😳 😳


Our reaction to your post...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️


PS: a person associated with JA is reading ur analysis ( culprit : me ). Guess who?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ha HA ha!! Harry Bird. Your posts are really priceless. Thank you for making me laugh early Saturday morning. Where on earth do you get these pictures 😆
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My dearest Anjali,

What a treasure-trove of surprises you invariably produce! I LOVED both those action groups, 👏especially the second. The first lot is surely going to knock poor Jalal flat with their super-enthusiastic reaction to him!😉

Now as for the teaser at the end, I have no idea who it is. I do not think it can be Rajat, as he would hardly have the time to wade thru my posts. Who is it? Do tell, there is my good girl! Otherwise I am likely to expire of sheer curiosity, in which case you will get no more of my posts!😉

Seriously, I am delighted that you liked this post so much. It has become one of my favourites among all my 107 (so far) episode analyses in the IF JA forum, and I am delighted when someone else likes it as much as I do. The material was so insubstantial that it was like fashioning something with gossamer. I was so relieved when it turned out well.

Affectionately,

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: harrybird



Aunty, I have no words to describe the myriad of emotions I felt while reading this beautiful take of yours !


You are truly a reader's delight & I think its high time for you to start a blog & compile all your master pieces.


Our Reaction to Jallu...😳 😳 😳


Our reaction to your post...⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️


PS: a person associated with JA is reading ur analysis ( culprit : me ). Guess who?

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Shyamala, I am happy that you have accepted my request and posted your valuable insights on this forum.
I will of course give my own opinion in a little while but before that I have a request. This is for the folks who come to this thread. If you are enjoying the repeats as much as I am, you must also enjoy these gems by Shyamala of insights into the motivations and behaviors of the characters.

Now is not the time to be shy. If you like what you read, you must comment. The ending of the serial has already depleted our ranks, so just clicking on the 'Like' button is not an option. Please, if you want this outstanding series of posts to continue, you must comment. It is just for a few months, let us enjoy this short journey. I guarantee you, whatever next serial you migrate to, the chances of finding a writer of Shyamala's ability is close to Zero, appreciate it now, while you can.

Thanks for understanding.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh, my dear Donjas, whatever would I do without you? Thank you, thank you, thank you, both for liking my writing so much, and even more so for motivating the readers to participate actively in discussions on this and the other threads of mine.

Shyamala

Originally posted by: Donjas

Shyamala, I am happy that you have accepted my request and posted your valuable insights on this forum.

I will of course give my own opinion in a little while but before that I have a request. This is for the folks who come to this thread. If you are enjoying the repeats as much as I am, you must also enjoy these gems by Shyamala of insights into the motivations and behaviors of the characters.

Now is not the time to be shy. If you like what you read, you must comment. The ending of the serial has already depleted our ranks, so just clicking on the 'Like' button is not an option. Please, if you want this outstanding series of posts to continue, you must comment. It is just for a few months, let us enjoy this short journey. I guarantee you, whatever next serial you migrate to, the chances of finding a writer of Shyamala's ability is close to Zero, appreciate it now, while you can.

Thanks for understanding.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shymala O Shyamala, how did I not respond to this post any sooner? For I do think even by your lofty standards you have really excelled with this post. You have brought out every nuance and changing expression on Jalal's chiseled and oh so handsome face with such mastery. You have to wonder how a mere boy of 23 can demonstrate such a range of expressions with such finesse.
BTW I truely believe that this Ameri/ Rajput look was one of Rajat's best looks in this show ( along with his look when he wears the special pagdi when he visits a dargah)

I loved your description of "Jodha and Jalal ka pehla milan". The time when she sees his reflection in the water was one of those iconic, poignant moments in the show that will stay with us for a long long time. I personally thought is was more powerful than the palki scene ( first sighting).

delightful episode ! delighful post!
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My dear Preeti,

I knew that you would love this one as much as I did. It is spangled with faerie dust, and is so insubstantial in terms of material for analysis that it was really difficult to get it done to my satisfaction. Even so, it is reassuring to get independent confirmation that I had not fallen down on the job!

Rajat was exceptionally good-looking throughout the Ameri escapade, even in his simple sipahi outfit, and he was exceptionally good in terms of finesse and range. He is an amazing young man, and that makes me worry all the more that he should get the right openings after Jodha Akbar and make the most of them. Fingers crossed!

Yes, the face in the water segment has, as I wrote in the post, the curious, intangible quality of a dream. It seems not quite real, and is thus all the more enchanting, more than the factual palki scene, though Jalal was superb there too.

I also loved the segment later on when Jodha sees his face in the water in the Amer palace, and even when her eyes are closed. It haunts her, this unknown face in the water, and when she wonders about who it was, there is a curiously gentle note in her voice and on her face. And this is well after she is affianced to Suryabhan. It is only after she discovers that the face was Jalal's that she suppresses the gentle, dreamy feelings and buries the whole as deep as she can in her mind and heart.

But what I found curious is that even later, after she has fallen in love with Jalal, they never show her thinking back about how she saw the face even when he was not there.


Shyamala

Originally posted by: Coolpree

Shymala O Shyamala, how did I not respond to this post any sooner? For I do think even by your lofty standards you have really excelled with this post. You have brought out every nuance and changing expression on Jalal's chiseled and oh so handsome face with such mastery. You have to wonder how a mere boy of 23 can demonstrate such a range of expressions with such finesse.

BTW I truely believe that this Ameri/ Rajput look was one of Rajat's best looks in this show ( along with his look when he wears the special pagdi when he visits a dargah)

I loved your description of "Jodha and Jalal ka pehla milan". The time when she sees his reflection in the water was one of those iconic, poignant moments in the show that will stay with us for a long long time. I personally thought is was more powerful than the palki scene ( first sighting).

delightful episode ! delighful post!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Krack cream teaser was a cracker joke.
But the commentary is superbly written - Very Sensual, romantic and makes one long to have a lover. 😉
I watched the timeless moment reading your commentary side by side. It was fab the way you have encoded Rajat in these moments. He has indeed brought so so much more as Akbar when he had the script with him.
Even PS is okay. Not extraordinarily beautiful but there is some tenderness and masoom in her face and actions, which also must have appealed to Jalal.
This is one of my fav too but I have liked some long analysis you have done more like Jodha home coming before SR etc - It had some nice sarcasm for my fav character so I like them more. 😆
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Originally posted by: sashashyam

Anjali, you imp, what a clever thing that puzzle is!👏👏👏

Thanks Aunty !!! 😊 😊 😊

I would have guessed it too, only by the time I got to your page,Sandhya was already first past the post.

Hmm...Everyone is saying the same...😕

OK, Did u crack the puzzle at the first glance ? 😉

Now tell me, what precisely have you been foisting on this unfortunate chap? My current one up to Episode 7 or the old ones?

Current ones up to Episode 10 ! 😃 😃 😃

I hope he survives them in good shape! What is he working on now? Or planning to take up, with or without Rajat?

I am yet to hear from him Aunty for he is very busy working on 2 projects at the same time...But I am sure, he is elated from the smilies he sent in return ! 😊

B/w received a Thank you message from Naved Aslam for ur take on him in Sound & Fury ! 😃

Shyamala Aunty


Following ur foot steps, I too have shifted my thread to the main forum. I would be pleased if you can join us over there !

Link Below...




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