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Hey guys ..m neither new to this forum..nor an active ..m more like a ghost member...who appear once in while :p. Should I tell how much I love this show ?Ardhika Nesam SaRa.nd Manmarziyan the whole.I love it with all my heart...I have spl liking for flawed characters so arjun tops my list 😃
Nd m completely heart broken with manmarziyan ending ..I loved this show :,(. What will I do with my life after this awesome piece of fiction comes to an end ?
So sorry for my rant ..its just my dil ki dastan right now..so plz excuse DAT nd maybe read this OS ..I tried my best to put in the right emotions. Nd yes its not proofread so plz excuse my mistakes as well

He sat in his cabin staring at his laptop screen lost in thoughts again.its has been the same for months.someone barged into his cabin
"Back to earth Mr .mehra" said a chirpy Sam
He half smiled at her
"Yes Sam..kuch kehna tha ?" He asked
"Yes can u smile to enlighten my world ?"
He again half smiled at ..a smile that didn't reach his eyes nor it was satisfying one.
"Arjun yaar stop all this devdas drama.u do knw u hav to take the step .."said sam kneeling in front of him n holding his hand
"Sam...I m doing wat she wanted me to do ..live a happy life ..give u the love u deserve" he said
"Arjun ...khush rehne ka ye Matlab nhi ki khudko uss guilt main dhakelte raho..I have forgiven u .nd see m happy ..with my love Jo mujhe chashni ki wajah se mila hai...phir kyon yeh udaasi k badal chahye hai?" Asked Sam
"...m happy Sam truly"he reassured her
Before Sam could say anything there was a knock they both turned a smiling Neil
" did I disturb u both?" He asked while entering
"Perfect timing idiot"Sam said standing up
" I know Sam. And Arjun i hope I hav rescued u before she could go philosophical on u "
Arjun smiled at him
"BTW Sam sab tumhara wait kar rahe hai..if u are done with Mr.mehra can we leave ?" He said gauging the situation in cabin
"How bad ..though I dnt want to leave I have to ...kambakt kaam bhi karna padta hai" sighed sam and the trio left for the meeting
After the meeting arjun was silently sitting on the stairs..a place he started to love..find his peace
He took out a piece of paper frm his pocket and started reading it
Arjun sir,
I know I have found the most coward way to tell you this. I know u must be very angry at me right now. I have always been a stone of your path..but now its time u walk on a clear path .the stone finally hav to be out of the way .. I really want you to be happy in your life and always go for the right path..It will be difficult but trust me you will meet the real you on this path only...don't let Gud human being within you be lost.and yes give Sam the love she deserve..and she deserves nothing but happiness.u both hav been through enough tears and heart aches its time to welcome happiness.its time to welcome light in your life.we were just the two paths who came along to go different ways.kabhi kabhi humrahi humsafar nahi hota.maybe I was just the one guide u the path towards your destiny.sirf ek humrahi liye manzil nhi badalti.be happy and I finally untied you of this relation you are free to happiness sir.I hav signed the divorce papers.and remember what really belongs to you will come to you..nothing in universe can stop it.and you really deserve all the love and happiness.BYE
~your panauti Radhika

He sighed deeply after reading the letter for the Nth time..there was no day ..he didn't read that letter her last coward good bye.
"Arjun" said a calm looking Neil who sat beside him
Arjun neatly folded the paper kept back in his pocket
"Again the fateful letter ?" Neil asked
Arjun nodded at him
"A letter were my fate is written"he replied somberly
" I dont believe it the arjun mehra is tied by a mere letter"chuckled neil
Arjun chuckled too
" I wouldn't hav believed it either if I were you" he replied
"Sam going philosophical everyday ..I m afraid there is another chashni in making" said Neil
"Chashni is just not good for health" said arjun
"Do you mean heart?" Asked Neil
Arjun nodded
"Girls...they want something and mean something"said Neil
" women are real confused souls who want everything perfect yet strive to puzzle everything anything"said samrat who was passing by and accidentally overheard the convo of two males who are victim of the disease LOVE
Neil and arjun straightend up seeing samrat
"Relax you too..I have been there and done that." Said samrat leaning on the wall
Both Neil and arjun looked quizzically at samrat
"Love young men...LOVE" he replied
"It hurts you..tests you ..makes u cry ..still be the best thing ever happened to you" he continued
Arjun snorted at samrat words
" it wouldn't hav started if there was no love to begin with"said arjun
"If there was no love ..we wouldn't have been here.we wouldn't have a life ..we would just hav been breathing. Love gave us meaning"corrected samrat
" it has been 5 months...nd m still trying to breath" said a broken arjun
"No young man ...its a 5 months of your self discovery... Now it's time u go get your life" said a smiling samrat
"I agree..arjun go get back your love" said Neil patting arjuns back nd encouraging him
"Everyday I wake up to bring my love back...only thing that stops me is love.it would be my selfishness. Again...I want her to choose the path this time..not out of sympathy or helplessness.. But for love..if it was meant for me nothing in universe can stop us.." Said a tired arjun
Neil and samrat could just nod at his word.
They were interrupted by another coworker he came to tell thm about the chaos in office
"What's wrong" asked the three men
"..wo samaira mam.." All the men ran. Before he could say anything further
There stood Sam behind the tainted glass door tears rolling down her cheeks.for a second all the three men were shocked then there gaze fell on another petite feminine. Frame.
"Radhika"arjun breathed.he stopped in his tracks. His wrld stopped.
Neil nd samrat were happy nd almost ran towards Radhika n engulfed her in tight hug.but her eyes were for the person ..she cried for every night. A person her world revolves around ..her love her life ..her arjun
She had those unshed tears brimming her big eyes.she smiled at her samrat and Neil whose happiness cannot be ignored
She took baby steps towards arjun she could surely hear her heart beating faster than usual.louder than the chaos around.she stood in front of him..taking in his appearance ..he look exhausted..his disheveled hair and unkempt stubble.dark circles under his soul opening eyes which perfectly depicted the tale of his sleepless nights.she also noticed ..he lost much weight too.she slowly raised her right hand and caressed his face ever so slowly ..as if its another of her dream which may vanish if she open her eyes
" ar..ar..sir" she croaked with tears spilling
In return he hugged her tight to never let her vanish ..it was his dream too where she vanished before he could even smile at her.


Meri har nazar tere muntazir
Teri ek jhalak mera imtihaan

P.S: I might continue this. But not sure coz I haven't thought for the further story.but I do wish to write more for this forum


Do drop in ur feedbacks
~shab😊





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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic story. Plz do update it as this is what is going to help us in remembering ardhika and the others for life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a painful update
At last they met

Why arjun and radhu always hide their feelings

Loved it

Plz continue it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do continue. Pls Pls Pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please continue this! These ffs are all we will have left after tomorrow...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetshab


Hey guys ..m neither new to this forum..nor an active ..m more like a ghost member...who appear once in while :p. Should I tell how much I love this show ?Ardhika Nesam SaRa.nd Manmarziyan the whole.I love it with all my heart...I have spl liking for flawed characters so arjun tops my list 😃
Nd m completely heart broken with manmarziyan ending ..I loved this show :,(. What will I do with my life after this awesome piece of fiction comes to an end ?
So sorry for my rant ..its just my dil ki dastan right now..so plz excuse DAT nd maybe read this OS ..I tried my best to put in the right emotions. Nd yes its not proofread so plz excuse my mistakes as well

He sat in his cabin staring at his laptop screen lost in thoughts again.its has been the same for months.someone barged into his cabin
"Back to earth Mr .mehra" said a chirpy Sam
He half smiled at her
"Yes Sam..kuch kehna tha ?" He asked
"Yes can u smile to enlighten my world ?"
He again half smiled at ..a smile that didn't reach his eyes nor it was satisfying one.
"Arjun yaar stop all this devdas drama.u do knw u hav to take the step .."said sam kneeling in front of him n holding his hand
"Sam...I m doing wat she wanted me to do ..live a happy life ..give u the love u deserve" he said
"Arjun ...khush rehne ka ye Matlab nhi ki khudko uss guilt main dhakelte raho..I have forgiven u .nd see m happy ..with my love Jo mujhe chashni ki wajah se mila hai...phir kyon yeh udaasi k badal chahye hai?" Asked Sam
"...m happy Sam truly"he reassured her
Before Sam could say anything there was a knock they both turned a smiling Neil
" did I disturb u both?" He asked while entering
"Perfect timing idiot"Sam said standing up
" I know Sam. And Arjun i hope I hav rescued u before she could go philosophical on u "
Arjun smiled at him
"BTW Sam sab tumhara wait kar rahe hai..if u are done with Mr.mehra can we leave ?" He said gauging the situation in cabin
"How bad ..though I dnt want to leave I have to ...kambakt kaam bhi karna padta hai" sighed sam and the trio left for the meeting
After the meeting arjun was silently sitting on the stairs..a place he started to love..find his peace
He took out a piece of paper frm his pocket and started reading it
Arjun sir,
I know I have found the most coward way to tell you this. I know u must be very angry at me right now. I have always been a stone of your path..but now its time u walk on a clear path .the stone finally hav to be out of the way .. I really want you to be happy in your life and always go for the right path..It will be difficult but trust me you will meet the real you on this path only...don't let Gud human being within you be lost.and yes give Sam the love she deserve..and she deserves nothing but happiness.u both hav been through enough tears and heart aches its time to welcome happiness.its time to welcome light in your life.we were just the two paths who came along to go different ways.kabhi kabhi humrahi humsafar nahi hota.maybe I was just the one guide u the path towards your destiny.sirf ek humrahi liye manzil nhi badalti.be happy and I finally untied you of this relation you are free to happiness sir.I hav signed the divorce papers.and remember what really belongs to you will come to you..nothing in universe can stop it.and you really deserve all the love and happiness.BYE
~your panauti Radhika

He sighed deeply after reading the letter for the Nth time..there was no day ..he didn't read that letter her last coward good bye.
"Arjun" said a calm looking Neil who sat beside him
Arjun neatly folded the paper kept back in his pocket
"Again the fateful letter ?" Neil asked
Arjun nodded at him
"A letter were my fate is written"he replied somberly
" I dont believe it the arjun mehra is tied by a mere letter"chuckled neil
Arjun chuckled too
" I wouldn't hav believed it either if I were you" he replied
"Sam going philosophical everyday ..I m afraid there is another chashni in making" said Neil
"Chashni is just not good for health" said arjun
"Do you mean heart?" Asked Neil
Arjun nodded
"Girls...they want something and mean something"said Neil
" women are real confused souls who want everything perfect yet strive to puzzle everything anything"said samrat who was passing by and accidentally overheard the convo of two males who are victim of the disease LOVE
Neil and arjun straightend up seeing samrat
"Relax you too..I have been there and done that." Said samrat leaning on the wall
Both Neil and arjun looked quizzically at samrat
"Love young men...LOVE" he replied
"It hurts you..tests you ..makes u cry ..still be the best thing ever happened to you" he continued
Arjun snorted at samrat words
" it wouldn't hav started if there was no love to begin with"said arjun
"If there was no love ..we wouldn't have been here.we wouldn't have a life ..we would just hav been breathing. Love gave us meaning"corrected samrat
" it has been 5 months...nd m still trying to breath" said a broken arjun
"No young man ...its a 5 months of your self discovery... Now it's time u go get your life" said a smiling samrat
"I agree..arjun go get back your love" said Neil patting arjuns back nd encouraging him
"Everyday I wake up to bring my love back...only thing that stops me is love.it would be my selfishness. Again...I want her to choose the path this time..not out of sympathy or helplessness.. But for love..if it was meant for me nothing in universe can stop us.." Said a tired arjun
Neil and samrat could just nod at his word.
They were interrupted by another coworker he came to tell thm about the chaos in office
"What's wrong" asked the three men
"..wo samaira mam.." All the men ran. Before he could say anything further
There stood Sam behind the tainted glass door tears rolling down her cheeks.for a second all the three men were shocked then there gaze fell on another petite feminine. Frame.
"Radhika"arjun breathed.he stopped in his tracks. His wrld stopped.
Neil nd samrat were happy nd almost ran towards Radhika n engulfed her in tight hug.but her eyes were for the person ..she cried for every night. A person her world revolves around ..her love her life ..her arjun
She had those unshed tears brimming her big eyes.she smiled at her samrat and Neil whose happiness cannot be ignored
She took baby steps towards arjun she could surely hear her heart beating faster than usual.louder than the chaos around.she stood in front of him..taking in his appearance ..he look exhausted..his disheveled hair and unkempt stubble.dark circles under his soul opening eyes which perfectly depicted the tale of his sleepless nights.she also noticed ..he lost much weight too.she slowly raised her right hand and caressed his face ever so slowly ..as if its another of her dream which may vanish if she open her eyes
" ar..ar..sir" she croaked with tears spilling
In return he hugged her tight to never let her vanish ..it was his dream too where she vanished before he could even smile at her.


Meri har nazar tere muntazir
Teri ek jhalak mera imtihaan

P.S: I might continue this. But not sure coz I haven't thought for the further story.but I do wish to write more for this forum


Do drop in ur feedbacks
~shab😊





Awesome read!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing story.. please do continue!

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