Asya OS: Stranger in rain

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It's raining heavily out side. asad got stuck in office. already he is late and then this rain. after some time he is going home. but at a bus stop he thought that he saw one of his colleague so thought to help her.
'Hey tanveer' the girl turned to his side n guess what woh koi aur hi hai. Asad thinks wow what an amazing face. she looks like an angel.
girl said 'excuse me'
he came out of her spell 'yaa sorry mujhe laga ki meri colleague hai tho lift dene aaya tha'
'oh it's ok' she said.
he thought for sometime n said 'if you don't mind i will drop you its raining so heavy n i don't think ki iss waqt koi bus yaa taxi milegi'
she said 'no its ok mei manage karlongi'
'but aap yahan akeli rehna it's not safe Plz i insist.'
She is afraid to take lift from a starnger she thinks 'kya karoon mei iss pe yakeen karoon yaa nei par itni barish bhi tho ho raha hai' all this time asad is looking at her he know what is going in her mind 'dekhiye mera yakeen kijiye mei ek ache ghar ka ladka hoon u don't have to worry trust me' she had no choice but to agree.above all he dosen't look like a guy who would harm her in any way so she agree. they r driving now. asad is looking at her from time to time.
asad asked 'hmm aap ka naam kya hai?'
'jee mei zoya'
'oh nice name waise aap iss waqt kahan se jarahe hai'
'mei yahan ek mazhar ke paas aayi thi par raste main meri gadi kharab hogai thi tho mei wahan bus ke liye wait kar rahi thi waise aap ka naam kya hai'
'mera naam Asad hai aap mujhe apna address boliye mei aap ko waha chodta hoon'
its very difficult to reach her home coz of the rain some roads are blocked with water.
'agar aap ko koi probelm nei ho to thodi der mere ghar pe rukte hai jaise barish kam hogi mei aap ke ghar tak chod dunga'
'aree nei pehle hi aap ko itni pareshani hui meri wajah se..
asad cut her 'iss main pareshani ki kya baat hai aap sach main iss barish main kahi nei jaa payengi jo mei ne kaha wahi theekh hoga'
zoya agreed to this they kept silent in the car. just songs r playing on the radio.
asad is so happy to spend some time with her. they reached his home. asad asked her to sit then he went in some room n retrun with some clothes.
Zoya 'aap ka ghar bohot hi acha hai'
'thanks yeh meri behen ke kuch kapde hai aap jake change kar lijiye' 'ok'.
After some time zoya come out in red salwar. asad just can't take his eyes off from her. zoya sees it but did't say anything as she is also attracted to him.
Zoya 'aap iss ghar main akele rehte hai?'
Asad 'jee meri ammi aur dad Bhopal main rehte hai mei aur meri behan najam yahan Mumbai main rehte hai mei yahan ke office sambhalta hoon aur najma padai kar rahi hai abhi woh apne friend ke yahan hai aur phir kuch din baad mom dad bhi yahi aajayenge ab aap ke baare main kuch boliye'
Zoya 'mere baare main kuch jayada nei hai mei yahan nayi hoon isske pehle hum USA main rehte the phir dad ne socha ki hamesha ke liye India hi aajay ab mei mom aur dad rehte hai bas itna hi'
Asad 'ok thats gud aap coffee peeyengi?'
Zoya ' yaa sure mei aap ki madat karti hoon'
Two went to make coffee they got to know about each other their likes n dislikes and everything. when asad was giving her cup their fingers brushed each other's but asad did't take them back. zoya is trying hard not to lose her control. they r just lost in each other's eyes. asad came close to her. before he can do anything his phone rang. zoya stepped back quickly n went to the living room.
asad cursed the person who disturbed their moment.
he ended the call n came to the living room.
Asad 'hmm zoya mujhe nei lagta ki yeh barish abhi band hogi abhi 9 ho chuke hai tum apne ghar ko phone karo ek baar'
Zoya 'par meri phone ki bettry khatam hogai hai aur mughe bhi nei lagta ab kahi jaapaongi' she is blushing remembering their moment a while ago n now they have to stay in same house.
Asad 'aap mere phone se kar lijiye ga aur jaise hi subha hogi aap chale jayei ga'
She called to her dad n told them everything
Zoya 'asad aap ke saath baat karna chate hai'
Zoya's dad thank him for helping her. they had dinner n went to sleep. They are thinking about each other the whole night.
At Morning:
Zoya woke up n got ready then came to living room. asad is also there
Zoya 'Gud mrng asad'
Asad 'gud mrng zoya hope u slept well'
Zoya ' yaa umm ab mujhe ghar jaana chahiye barish bhi kam hogai hai'
Asad 'ok pehle break fast karle phir chalte hai'
They had break fast n went to her house
Out side of zoya's house:
Zoya said softly 'thank u so much asad for ur help kal ka din mei kabhi nei bhul sakti'
Asad looking deeply into her eyes 'mei bhi nei'
Zoya 'mei jaaon?'
They come close
Asad 'haan' he gently cupped her face 'phir kab milogi?'
Zoya 'bohot jald'
They hugged each other ek vaade ke saat ki phir milenge.


Thats it guys hope u all like it😳
And a special thanks to api(sweet_tehs) she helped me a lot
Loves u api🤗
N thanks to kanwal, sum di also🤗
Thank u❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS Shailu...
It was so cute...

The last line was so sweet...
Phir milenge..

Asya akele at home😳

Do write more..

And yes...

Love you too🤗
Edited by sweet_tehs - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing piece of work shail...
really loved it...
the rain was actually very supportive in their meeting...😆
asya are always treat to read...
continue to write such amazing things...
Edited by NnonaA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow shail its was full of cuteness yaar..😊
Superb ..
Loved it..
Asad fall for zoya at first sight..and zoya was attracted too..
Chalo acha hai zoya ke dad se bat ho gai apne hone wale damaad se😉
love last part when asad asked fir kab milogi..that was cute..
Awww thanks for mentioning shail 🤗
love u ❤️
Edited by Kanwal4salman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NnonaA

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going out on shopping will be right back


If you r going out for shopping then how can u be right back?
😆😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey tumhe mera pm aaya kya?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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reswa shallu😎
but muje tho koi pm nahi aaya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailu123

hey tumhe mera pm aaya kya?


ha abhi aya hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_tehs



If you r going out for shopping then how can u be right back?
😆😉


🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikii11

reswa shallu😎

but muje tho koi pm nahi aaya

ab aaya hoga dekh

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