Yuvani OS- The Waiting Game- Yuvi's POV - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read this as first thing in the morning!!😉😉
What a magical moment!!! I was blushing while reading!! I can visualise everything.. ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it.. Very well written.. U are blessed dear.. Looking forward for more stories from u.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh wow, that was beautifully written. I salute you. You have so captured the Yuvraj we hope to see. The scenario flows, and it was a treat to read.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this was amazing Mehwish👏I am so in Yuvani lala land😆😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all so much.

Will reply to the written reviews ASAP. Love you all who took time to write your feelings...means a lot to any writer big or small...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: yanks28


Thank you all so much.

Will reply to the written reviews ASAP. Love you all who took time to write your feelings...means a lot to any writer big or small...

part 2 please...pretty please...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes please part 2 will be nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow. That was great. Really well written!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awestruck after reading this. I was dying for this closeness and this desperation from Yuvraj.

You truly blended all the emotions so innocently. His frustration on the traffic jam...his concern for his worried wife...his thirsty eyes to see his wife only...really Yuvraj is always a STAR of your story. The way you narrated is just upper class brilliant 👏

He was abusing his dear phone lol. I was giggling at this like that duffar Menka hahahaha. The result of patience is always sweet.

Though it was purely on Yuvraj's POV still I could clearly see Suhani through his eyes. How worried she was but Yuvraj was 100times more tensed. He just cannot think himself at her place. WOW just AWESOME. So much depth in his confession that he is not as patient as her...so much love...so intense...so innocent...

I'm in YuvAni land now...Totally lost in them. Thanks for giving me a view of desperate and horny Yuvraj who was craving much more than Suhani. Take a bow Appi. You are a treasure. Extremely beautiful description of their reunion after the wait. Every single word coated with so much love. Thank you so much ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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if you are the cv, then ssel would be doing magics...

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