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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello shocked with the title haan? Mee too actually I never thought of writing anything as I'm very much happy being a reader .but as u all can see our forum became so thanda thanda after show going offair ,so thought of trying my hand in writing field too but believe me guys this will be my first and last story .after writing this I realised that I'm worst in this feild. Hats off to the wonderful writers of the forum and i really mean it . since I finished writing this one posting on forum.enough of my bak bak now .go on reading this crazy stuff and pls avoid typos as this is my first TS :-) :-)

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Jalal Khan aged 28 yrs,the most eligible bachelor of the town,a man of every girl's dream , vexed with the thousands of proposals and not finding the desirable girl, the charming man decided to go and marry the girl choosed by his parents.since then Mr and Mrs Khan left no stone unturned to select a suitable bride for their irresistible son. Finally their search came to halt when they found the "PERFECT MATCH" for their handsome hunk "JALAL KHAN".

The hardworking ,sauve businessman was engrossed in his work when he heard a knock at the door.shifting his gaze from his laptop screen ,the busy man looked at the door only to find his parents standing there with a soft smile .
Mom dad ,u r here at this time??do u want anything ?? is every thing alright??

Relax beta ,all is good :-) we just came here to discuss an important thing with u. Actually we selected a girl for u ,here is her photograph ,have a look and tell us about ur opinion about her.

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Jodha Singh , aged 23 .papa ki laadli and maa ki pareshaani . Dilli ki aan baan aur shaan ,hai jodha sabki jaan. A girl with golden HEART,very cheerful and bubbly, always spreads happiness around her.Thinking of retiring for the day jodha was about to throw herself on the bed when she heard her father's voice...

Jodha beta r u free now?can we talk for a while?
Jo - papa u don't have to ask permission for talking with me, u know na? (She pouted her lips). Embracing her father into a side hug jodha asked the reason for his arrival.

Jo we got a proposal for u beta. He belongs to good family ,here is his photo, have a look and let me know whether to go further with this rishta or not?

Taking a look at the person in photograph , the only thing they uttered from their mouth was a big nooo

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Jalal- no way dad ,I'm not going to marry this pagal ziddi girl. I can marry any girl but not her dad. He declared firmly.

Jodha - papa dilli ke saare ladke Mar gaye kya Jo aap meri shaadi isse karwana chahte ho?? How can I marry this ARROGANT man?

Baffeled by their son/daughter's reaction , the innocent couples mind flooded with so many questions.
To name few:-) :-) what's wrong with him/her, how they know each other ?have they met before?
These questions could be answered only by them and so they started with their queries.:-) :-)

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Posted: 10 years ago

**********FB********** PART 2
Jalal- Abdul we r getting late for the meeting bhai, I have to meet this client at any cost. We have to grab this project by hook or crook.(said the shrewd businessman)
Abdul- relax jalal everything will go smoothly. Don't u stress urself bhai ,when Abdul is here no fear
Discussing the important points of their project jalal and Abdul entered the luxurious shopping complex which consisted of a hotel in second floor.
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Moti- Jo look at that dress ,its so elegant ,let's buy that one too na pls (exclaimed the cheerful girl with her oh so innocent puppy eyes)

Shopping for about more than 3 hrs by now jodha and moti were neither satisfied with the stuffs they bought nor they were tired. The greedy heart shouted "YEH DIL MAANGE MORE" and so the girls got busy again checking out new designer clothes.
Jo- moti I'm done with my shopping yaar,let's go now and pay the bill , we r really getting late.
Moti- one last dress Jo,I promise we will leave soon.
Jo - ok fine ,I will be there at the counter ,u pls finish ur work fast and meet there.
Moti assured with her eyes.
Grabbing a juice can from the shop ,Jo headed towards the counter when her phone started buzzing, fishing mobile in her bag with one hand as the other was occupied by the juice can ,Jo didn't see the person coming from the front and as a result she bumped into the man while the juice can was spilled all over his coat.
Biting her tounge she raised her head a little to see the person she crashed into and got lost in his charismatic persona:-) :-)

Hayee there stood a man in black jacket, red crisp shirt with black trousers, looking handsome as ever. She would have taken some more time drooling over this Greek god ,if only she was not dragged out of her dream world.

Jalal- what the hell lady?can't u see while walking? Look what have u done to my outfit ( the displeased man roared in anger pointing towards his coat which was spoiled by the juice)

Jo- I'm really really sorry Mr .I was in a hurry and my phone was buzzing continuously, I was searching for it and didn't see u coming (explained jodha apologetically).

Jalal- sorry ?just sorry? Do u evn know how much important meeting I have to attend now? My client is waiting for me right there , I was already getting late and now I will be more late only becoz of u.
Jo - look Mr I understand it was my mistake and I already apologised for that , and if u can see it was not totally my fault , agar aap dekh kar chalte toh yeh sab nahi hota right??now pls excuse me I'm really getting late. She said annoyingly and started moving forward when she felt her hand pulled by someone with a jolt and in the next second she was again in front of him.

Jalal- not before paying for my suit miss.
Jo- what? R u serious? U must be kidding right?
Jalal- sorry to scare u miss but im not, pay me or I will call police
Jo- unbelievable. U r really crazy.pls go on and call the police but first may I know what will u charge agaisnt me??oh let me guess , yeah that I spilled juice over ur coat right. Kitna bada crime kar diya Maine I really wonder what punishment I would be given for such a big crime ? Grow up Mr and instead of waisting ur time arguing with me here why don't u just go and change itself into another outfit and attend ur important meeting? U said u were getting late right??

Infuriated by her audacity jalal was about to retort back when he heard the crowd murmuring about them which gatherd hearing their loud argument.and then jalal decided to leave the place asap before anyone recognises him . after all he was a well known businessman he could not afford to spoil his image right?

His eyes furried in anger, gritting his teeth jalal murmured under his breath "DEKH LUNGA TUMHE"
and he flew from the spot.

Crazy ARROGANT man (mentally noting him)jodha too left the place stomping her feet
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**********FB ENDS************
With the end of the fb Singh mansion and Khan mansion was filled with boiestorous laugh .

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 3
Jalal- stop laughing mom and pls I don't want to talk about this further, I'm not going to marry that girl at any cost, now if u pls excuse me can I sleep?I'm really feeling tired. Said the irritated son.

Humany- we don't want to force u into this relation jalal. U gave the responsibility of finding a girl for u and so we did .trust us beta she is the best for u . we already met her and believe me u both will make a wonderful pair.I understand ur first meeting with her didn't go well but that situation was different. Give her another chance jalal ,meet her once for our sake, I'm sure u will like her

Bharmal- give him Another chance beta ,I'm sure u will like him:-) :-)

The whole night passed with jodha and jalal tossing on their beds.sleep was far beyond their eyes and they finally decided to meet each other once only for the sake of their parents but of course with a devilish idea in their minds.
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Jalal- Bas enough is enough , I'm waiting for this girl from half and hour and she seems to be nowhere in the vicinity, how irresponsible she is if she doesn't show up in the next 5 minutes ,I will leave this place without meeting her no matter what my parents feel next . getting impatient by each passing second ,the irritated man thought of leaving the place when he saw an attracting angelic figure entering the cafe , intrigued by the petetite form jalal decided to check her out,and not to mention the girl was jodha

She wore a designer black anarkali suit which complemented her skin with minimal makeup.simple yet ravishing ,for once jalal skipped his heartbeat and this time it was jalal who was drooling over jodha .shrugging his thoughts away and focussing on his original mission jalal decided to irritable jodha as much as possible .

Jalal- oh so finally u got time to come here haan , may I know what took u so long ,oh wait let me guess ,u might be busy with ur shopping right? Jalal purposely blurted venomously.

Jo - look Mr busy bee I'm not here to argue with u,I was stuck in the traffic u know and this time I'm not going to apologise ok as u don't know the meaning of sorry. She retorted back with smirk on her face.

Jalal sarcastically- this world is so small na ,see we met again . I never wanted to see ur face again in this lifetime but my unlucky fate forced me to meet u again and too with a special reason.

Jo- see even I'm not interested in this proposal ,my parents asked me to give u a chance and I really didn't want to hurt them so came here ,nothing more than that ok. And I hate ur face more than u hate mine

Jalal- same here , chalo kisi Baat mein toh hamare khayal milte hai .Great ,our problem is solved then , neither u like me nor I do,so what r we waiting for ,let's go back to our houses and say no for this rishta

Jodha- hmm
Getting over with their unwanted meeting jodha and jalal stood up to leave the place when the fate send a man who will play the role of cupid for them.
Hearing a familiar voice jodha and jalal stopped in their way and turned back.

Sujamal(jodha's cousin)- Jo ,sir u both r here together ?? What a surprise? Finally u met each other haan?

We wanted to meet each other ?confused with her cousin's statement Jo asks
Surya how do u know him?how did u know about our meeting ? Did papa discussed anything with u?

Surya- I don't know what ur talking about Jo but haan I know him very well since I met him in Bangalore.
Jodha -Confused
Surya - Jo u remember the day me and kakasa went to Bangalore for business meeting, while returning from the meeting our car tyre was puntured and so we were waiting for another transport. We waited for hours and suddenly kakasa felt a strong pain in his left side of chest ,he got a mild heart storke . we needed to rush into hospital immediately and we were not getting any help as it was almost midnight and the place was isolated with less ongoing vehicles and mostly bikes.
That was the time when sir came there like an angel sent by the god .he not only helped us reaching hospital but also stayed there with us for whole night . since then our families know each other.:-) ok sir ,bye jodha I have some urgent work . nice to meet u again sir (he waved his hands to say bye leaving the couple shocked)
To be shocked would be an understatement ,jodha and jalal were bewildered

Jo - u saved my dad , does that mean ur humanyun uncle's son (jodha asked astonishingly)

Jalal- and ur bharmal uncle's daughter jodha right? Omg mom dad never told me I was going to meet u ,I mean I didn't know ur bharmal uncle's daughter or should I say I didn't have them chance to tell me about ur details

Jo- neither did I, what an irony HAINA ? U know I always wanted to meet u once as I heard a lot about u from papa , jalal yeh jalal woh jalal aisa hai jalal waisa hai u should be like jalal blah blah blah
I was really pissed off by hearing ur name all the time.so I asked Surya to fix

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

I was really pissed off by hearing ur name all the time.so I asked Surya to fix my meeting with u one day but he is so busy in his own world that I never got chance to meet u ..

Jalal- situation is not different on my side too ,I heard my mother praising u everytime.beti ho toh jodha jaisi ,sunfar susheel sanskaari and haan she also gave a title for u "REGISTAAN KA GULAB". Being a boy i sometimes used to feel so jealous of u toh socho agar main ladki hota toh kya hota!?
And she was right ur really very beautiful jodha , inside and outside both .

Oh she didn't expect him praising her

Jo- thank u for saving my papa jalal ,I can't even imagine what would have happened to him if u didn't reach on time..he is my life jalal . tears pooled her eyes imagining that unfaithful day and a lone tear successfully escaped from her hazel eyes.
Jalal didnt know why but he felt a strong urge to wipe her tears with his lips.may be he felt her pain
Jalal - pls don't cry ,log dekhenge toh SOCHENGE KI Maine aapke saath sharaarat kar di (he winks at her)

After realising the actual meaning of the sentence our innocent jodha's cheeks turned crimson red as she blushed heavily.
Jalal- Hmm u look so cute while blushing u know, u should blush often rather than showing ur feisty avatar
Jo- and u should not be like a khadoos boss always ok. Waise r u always like this or u have done some special course in being khadoos.
And they laugh together contently .

Jo will u marry me ??
Sorry Mr jalal Khan , as u know my parents already selected someone for me, and now since I realised that no one can be a better choice for me other than him , I would love to go with that proposal.
Jalal- attitude huh, then I too will go by the girl choosed by my parents as I heard she is the most beautiful girl in the whole world

With this jalal pulls her closer to his heart and kissed her forehead with a promise to love her till eternity.
Chalo ab ghar chalke sabko yeh khush khabari sunate hai.
I'm sure they will be shocked with our decision
They won't be jalal becoz they already knew we r made for each other and somewhere I strongly feel that they the ones who introduced Sujamal in the picture.
It was only him who revealed our identities right?
Anything is possible jodha , jab parents hamare waale jaise ho then everything is possible 😆

****The end *****
Pls let me know whether it was bad or worse 🤢
Fingers crossed

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ramya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congrats Avika for ur first story

It's simply superb

wonderful work

waiting for more stories dear😊

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Dani

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congratulation for your first story Avika 🤗

It's superb dear

and Don't said it's your last story dear...

Plzz continue soon with the other story 😊

We waiting 😉

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Savindi Abhisheka

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Posted: 10 years ago

hey dii🤗
congrats for your first ever story diii🥳superb story dii.
Mr busy bee😆 plz continue this story..plzzxzxzz dii..its realy awesome...and write more and more..

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Bond_7

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Posted: 10 years ago

Avika Akka!!
A big hug to u for this story 🤗 🤗
Its really really sweet story 😃
Congrats on ur first story 👏 and don't think this is the last.its just a beginning.. pls write more..pls pls.
Jodha..papa ki ladli and maa ki pareshani
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You have written well with an unexpected twist Sujamal playing cupid😳..everything was simply superb 👏
Jalal and Jodha are adorable and lovely❤️ ❤️and their parents very cool 😎

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Raksha Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

avika akka amazing I was waiting for u to write something nd it was fulfilled nw...
congratulations for d first one nd this is nt last one ur writing more more of us nw...
super amazing story akka...
I loved it...
they have so cool parents...
twist was superb... did nt expect v will get twists like this
I love jodha nd jalal of ur story...
there love for there parents are so cute...
I want u to extend this or write a new one waiting for that...
thanks for pm... akka...