NiBir OS || Kyun ... ?? ||

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone... 😊

Yesterday I read a story by my NanandJi.. Mansi ..😆

Love beyond Death

I wrote this yesterday at night around 2am.. when I woke up crying because that story made me miss someone really badly that I couldn't help but wake up crying.. and this OS is dedicated to that person..

Hope you guys like it.. Waiting for your likes and comments.. 😊

And yaa I have not proof-read it as usual.. so please ignore the errors😛

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NiBir OS || Kyun ... ?? ||

Kyun aisa hota hai ki jinse hum sab se zyada nazdeek hote hai hum unse hi juda ho jate hai..??

Jinka saath hamesha chahte hai beech raah main unka saath kyun chut jata hai..??

Kyun aisa hota hai ki zindgi aksar humare imteehaan leti hai.. Kyun ??

Nisha shut her dairy and kept it aside.. she din't realise when she started crying writing this ... She heard the click of the door.. quickly she wiped her tears and plastered a smile on her face before turning back..

Kabir entered the room with a small Baby in his hand... The baby was busy playing with his own fingers but when he realised that his mother was infront of him.. He stopped playing with his fingers and stretched his arms.. asking Nisha to take him from Kabir.. He started leaning towards her ...

"Maa..Maa..."

He kept calling Nisha ...

Nisha came forward and took him from Kabir...

"Waah .. Mamma mil gai toh Dadda ko bhul gaya... Mamma's boy "

Kabir frowned while Nisha giggled and that little boy gave Kabir a look ..

"Nisha .. dekh kaise look de raha hai ..."

Kabir was shocked to see his son behaving like this ...Nisha couldn't control anymore she started to laugh... Even that little boy started laughing seeing his mother laugh... at first Kabir acted as if he is hurt and angry with their behaviour ...But within minutes he joined them too...

Nisha stopped laughing and kissed the baby's cheeks...

"Nishaan ko kuch mat bolna... Nishaan Mamma aur Dadda se equally pyaar karta hai .. Hai na Nishaan ?"

Nishaan started to nod his head in excitement..

"Dadda.. Mum.."

He tried to say that she was saying truth..

Nishaan was their one and half year old baby boy.. who was NiBir boy.. He was as sweet as Nisha and as naughty as Kabir...

Kabir came ahead and hugged Nishaan and Nisha.. His life was complete with them.. His life was nothing without them... Nishaan was the reason behind Nisha's smile... and He was happy because Nishaan was an angel for them..

Nisha put Nishaan to sleep and placed him on the bed.. she kept a teddy next to him.. and Nishaan immediately cudded the teddy in sleep .. He felt that he was cudling Nisha or Kabir..

Nisha did this whenever she was busy in work.. Nishaan would sleep without cuddling anyone so she kept a teddy next to him...

She turned to see Kabir reading her dairy... Kabir looked at her with questioning eyes and she looked down feeling guilty and apologetic... He came to her and asked...

"Nisha... 1 saal se zyada ho chukka hai iss baat ko ... Tu abh bhi uss dard ke bare main sochti hai ..?"

Nisha sat on the bed and started to cry...

"Kabir main koshish karti hun par nahi ho pata .. jitna usse bhulna chahun utni uski yaad aati hai.."

Kabir knelt infront of her and caught her hand he gently started to rub the back of her hand with his thumb...

"Nisha .. I miss her too... but Nishaan hai na humare saath..."

Nisha looked at Nishaan... she bent and cherished his hair and placed a feather kiss on his forehead...

"Nishaan... Dolly Di ki Nishaani..."

She smiled sadly...

Kabir came and sat with her on the bed.. Nisha's cry had become loud now.. Kabir caught her hand and took her in the living room... He din't want Nishaan to see his mother cry .. He knew that Nisha's cry would wake him up thus he bought her out..

He made her sit on the sofa and bought a glass of water for her.. at first Nisha refused to have it but then Kabir some- how convinced her and she sipped a little water.. Kabir sat on the coffee table and took Nisha's hands in his hands...

"Nisha .. Meri taraf dekh.."

Nisha looked at him.. Her cried had subsidised and now she was sobbing...

"Nisha tujhe kya lagta hai.. Nishaan ne sirf tujhe Maa kyun kaha ??"

Nisha was confused ..."Matlab ??"

"Matlab yeh ki .. Kirti aur Jwala bhi toh the na wahan.. Dolly bhi thi tab... phir bhi Nishaan ne sirf tujhe Maa kaha.. "

Nisha kept looking at him trying to understand what he was trying to say..

"Nisha.. Nishaan khud chahata tha.. ki Dolly ke baad aagar koi uski Maa bane toh vo tu ho..."

Nisha was just mum trying to absorb his words...

"Tu aur Dolly sab se zyada close the ek dusre the.. aur Nishaan bhi tujh se itna hi close hai... Tujhe pata hai Dolly ne apne bete ka naam Nishaan kyun rakha.. ?"

Nisha nodded her head in no...

"Nisha Dolly hamesha se janti thi ki uski pregnancy main complications hai.. issliye ussne Saurav se shadi nahi ki... aisa nahi tha ki vo usse pyaar nahi karti thi.. par vo yeh nahi chahti thi ki uske jane ke baad Saurav tut jaye.. issliye usne usse khud se door jane ke liye kaha... "

Nisha looked at him in shock.. she had no clue about the complications in Dolly's pregnancy..

"Dolly Di ne kisiko kuch bataya kyun nahi Kabir.. hum kuch toh solution nikal lete na ."

Nisha was at loss of words...

"Nisha .. Tab tak bohut der ho chuki thi... Jab Dolly ki delivery hui aur doctor ne kaha ki uske pass zyada time nahi maine doctor se iss bare main akele main baat ki thi.. doctor ne kaha ki Dolly ki khud ki wish thi yeh.. "

Nisha felt terrible .. Her sister went through all this.. all alone..

"Jab Nishaan ne tujhe Maa kaha.. Dolly ke face pe smile thi.. ek satisfaction tha .. ki uska beta uski Maa ke saath hai.. "

Nisha kept crying...and Kabir continued..

"Nisha.. tu hi kehti hai na .. Nishaan Dolly ki Nishaani hai.. phir tu kyun aisa sochti hai ki Dolly tere saath nahi hai..? Jab tak Nishaan tere saath hai tab tak Dolly bhi tere saath hai.."

Nisha closed her eyes and Dolly's smiling face came infront of her... there was a smile on her face even when she was breathing her last breath...

She hugged Kabir with all her might she clutched his T-shirt and started to cry.. Kabir wrapped his arms around her and let her cry..

"Kabir.. Dolly Di ne itna kuch saha aur mujhe kuch nahi bataya... Hum sab cousins hamesha ek dusre se sab kuch share karte the na toh unhone yeh share kyun nahi kiya ..? Hum sab pe trust nahi tha kya unhe ? "

Kabir rubbed her back and replied ..

"Usse tum sab pe trust tha.. sab se zyada tujh pe trust tha usse.. issliye toh usse Nishaan ki koi fikar nahi thi... usse pata tha ki uske jane ke baad bhi Nishaan hamesha khush rehga.. and Jab tak Nishaan ke Mamma, Dadda aur uske Mamas aur Maasis hai uske saath vo hamesha khush rehga.. "

Nisha broke the hug and looked at him...

" Thank you Kabir... Nishaan ko apna ne ke liye.. usse apna beta mane ke liye.."
"Oye .. pagal hai kya.. agar tu Nishaan ki Mamma hai toh obviously main uska Dad hua na... Ek minute kahi tera iradaa Nishaan ke liye koi aur Dad matlab apne liye dusra pati dhundna toh nahi hai ..?"

Nisha cribbed .." Kabir tu kitna K hai..."

"Aur mere K se tu kitni J hai Janu.. "

Both chuckled and Kabir looked at her lips .. He leaned in and was about to kiss her when they heard Nishaan's cry..

Kabir closed his eyes in frustration..It was his turn to crib now...

" Lo.. shuru hogaya yeh.. yaar Nisha jab bhi hum romance karne jate hai yeh kyun kabab main hadi ban jata hai ..?"
"Oye Mere bete ko kuch mat bolna.."

They both went inside the room and lay next to Nishaan on both the sides..
Nishaan smiled seeing his parents..

Nisha and Kabir smiled at him...

"Nishaan.. baby appko ek chotu sister chahiye kalene ke liye..?"

Nishaan kicked his legs in excitement...

"Gaiye.. Gaiye.. "

He said yes in his own language ...

Kabir looked at Nisha and smiled ...

"See Nisha.. yeh haan bol raha hai ..."

Nisha's eyes grew wide as saucers..

She blushed and left the room... she went to the kitchen and bolied milk for Nishaan ...

When she came back she saw that Kabir and Nishaan both were sleeping peacefully... Nishaan was sleeping on Kabir's stomach ... She smiled at them.. she went and made Nishaan sleep properly on the bed... She covered them with the duvet and kissed both of them on their forehead...

When Nisha made Nishaan lie on the bed.. Kabir turned and wrapped his arm around him securely and Nishaan snugged into him...

Nisha smiled and went to her study table.. she opened the dairy and wrote another couplet..

Nazaaron se door par tu dil ke paas hai.. Har hawa ke saath tere hone ka ehsaash hai..

Juda hoke bhi hum juda nahi hai .. Tere Nishaan hamesha mere saath hai...

She went and laid next to Nishaan .. she smiled looking at the two and closed her eyes...she felt Kabir wrapping his arm around her in such a way that he secured both Nisha and Nishaan in his arms.. Nisha smiled and sent a silent pray to god.. thanking him for sending Nishaan and Kabir in her life...

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I hope I was successful to convey my feeling to you😊

I wanted to write a sad OS but end main I couldn't help but make it a happy one 😆


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Niyati_T thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res for my Baccha Saru 😳
See baby Mamma loves you so much ☺️
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres
niyu now u made me cry 😭 😭
m speechless again aur is baar toh m just crying 😭
that was out of the world
I really can't describe this in words
it touched my heart directly
I can just clap for it 👏
rula diya tune toh 😭
it is my favorite os now... beautiful ❤️
u proved that such beautiful bonds are eternal they never die 👏
🤗 🤗
Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Choti
Awesome os yaar...beautifully written
I know u dedicated this to ur di na😊
But amazing work..u made me cry
Nishaan is dolly's nishaan
Loved it
Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I felt sad for Dolly..😔...but Nisha-Kabir and Nishaan are so cute...😳
Lovely...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Niya...what was that??
I was just crying throughout...
If it wasnt mentioned...one could never makeout that nishaan was dolly's son...
And mera kabir...as always...was dreamy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsm os niyu mumma...
nishaan was so cute mumma ko dekhte hi dadda ko bhul gya...
kabir ne nisha ki diary padhi loved d way he consoled her
dolly's complication part was beautifully portrayed...u made me cry yr...❤️
it was so emotional n touching...
but last me sab happy happy ho gya
superb os niyu mumma
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Niyaa..beautiful os..very well written..emotional too
nishaan was cute..
Loved it..😛
Edited by zaara610 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Niyati THIS WAS JUST AMAZING.
No nibir story has ever moved me so much.
This was so pure and beautiful. Simple yet touching. Its true writers are at their best when they are emotional. I'll quickly point out my favourite parts

1. When u mentioned abt kabir asking nisha y she still remembered the incident i knew it nishaan was dolly's son. Loved how you mentioned little nishaan cuddling the teddy.

2. The satisfactory smile of a mother on dolly's face that nishaan had got his parents was again well written.

3. Kabir explaining abt dolly's decision. It is easy for nisha to accept nishaan because dolly is her cousin but kabir accepting him without any obligatory feeling was so heart touching.The last part where he wraps nisha and nishaan together shows his protective nature.


I did not cry at all while reading this OS niya because i was smiling at the beautiful portrayal of relations.
Edited by picadally - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome👍🏼
loved it❤️

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