ShivYa OS ~ Hamari adhuri kahani ~

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys this is my first attempt to right a story so guyzzz plzz enjoy this... 😊 "Riya ki shaadi amit se hogi" announced shanti Devi infront of evry1..."per dadi..." bt couldn't complete his words as he was stopped by sarla ... " rehne do shivam ab bhut tamasha kar liya tmne aur waise v amma ka faisla aakhri faisla hoga toh ab tm apni nautanki band karo " shouted sarla and asked riya to get ready for wedding. "Per yeh kaisa nyay (justice) hai dadi. Apka yeh faisla teen zindgi barbaad kar skta hai. Main kv amit se pyar ni kr paungi usse khushiya ni de paungi." "faisla ho chuka hai tmhari shaadi amit ke saath hi hogi. Hum ek bete ki khushi ke liye dusre ki zindagi ni barbaad kr skte" said shanti devi in angry tone. "accha aur iss faisle ke karan shivam ki khushiya chhin jaegi uska kya" chup rho" shouted raghav " amma ne jo faisla kiya vhi hoga" Riya looked at shivam with a hope that he will stand for her bt he was standing like a statue. " tum kch bol kyu ni rhe ho shivam" cried riya. " tm bolo inhe ki tm mjhse pyar krte ho aur shaadi v krna chahte ho". "riya mein apne baaro ke faisle ke khilaaf ni jaa skta. mein majboor hun". riya held his coller of his kurta and shouted "tm majboor ni kayar ho jo apne liye ya apne pyar ke liye ghar waalo ke saamne khara ni ho skta. Accha hai ki meri shaadi tmhare saath ni ho rhi warna mere saath toh mera pati kv khara ho hi ni pata" cried riya. "tm chahe mjhe jo keh lo per mein apne ghar walo ke khilaaf ni jaa skta i m sry riya mein tmse bhut pyar krta hun bt iss janam hamari adhuri kahani ni puri hoga" said shivam with teary eyes nd left the marriage hall. " kaha jaa rhe ho aap bhaiya" asked nimmi. "apni pyar ko kisi aur ka hote hue ni dekh skta". "toh aap kch boliye na bhaiya" said preeti. " ni preeti yhi hai HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI"




...ohk i know it is very bad nd i m ready for chappals nd tomatos to throw on me bt plzzz evry comment is excepted bcs this is my first attempt so i knw it will be vry bad so feel free for any comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oyeee..Shivam Riya are married na..why are you separating them?? 😭
Write something on ShivYa's nuptial night na..that will be interesting...
don't separate them 😳
but yeah nice writing dear 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ireena7

Oyeee..Shivam Riya are married na..why are you separating them??😭

Write something on ShivYa's nuptial night na..that will be interesting...
don't separate them😳
but yeah nice writing dear😊😊

As i said this is my first attempt so u can say its jst an experiment bt dnt vory soon i will write an hot OS on their SR
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahi_anya

As i said this is my first attempt so u can say its jst an experiment bt dnt vory soon i will write an hot OS on their SR

oh ok..thanks 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THE OS ISN'T 4 CHAPPLS😆 BT CHOCOLATES😛. VERY NICE BT SAD ONE. HOPE U'LL WRITE MORE 😃
Edited by ekra101 - 10 years ago

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