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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#821

Thanks for the awesome banner Lakshmi🤗

Chapter 11

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#822

Thanks for the wonderful comments and pictures😃

I am starting to like writing a sadu Maan😆

Hope you like this next one too...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#823

part 10
nice...
so hate those people...
poor Geet...
hope she wont come to this place...
this Brij should be taught a good lesson...
does Geet know about this?
and Maan is he hiding his roaming eyes from her by wearing the glasses?
wow abhi se hi aisa sapna...
good going Maan...
cont soon dear...

PS - from now on keep sending the links and passwords...caught up with ur work i think...so dont wanna miss any update...

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC
Avi ab tou Maan ko baksh do 😆
Let him be sweet not DD 😳

😆😆itni jaldi?

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#825

Originally posted by: libros

Avi time bata dena... phirse 1st aana hai mujhe😆

haila cheating?😆

na Baba!

Tabby will throw her jootis at me😆

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: sophiexx
Part 10 - i think you know by now how i feel about Brij, witch with a capital B, make that bold too and underline it while we're at it 😡

why does it always revolve around money 😡 cheap people, cheap mentality 🤢
pain in the neck, hay why doesn't she just twist it while shes there already 😆

why did he put on his shades 🤣 so he can checak her out without noticing😉 😆😆 bad maan😆😆😆

Geet, you wouldn't understand sweets? Maan is in his dream world 😆😆😆 so shades are a must

I like how you're showing different characters in the home, thank you. At least its obviously the foundation isn't juts comprised on Geet and Meera, imagine that 😆😆😆 bhoot house 😲 but imagine a freaked out scream ok

gosh what harm would it do if he asks for prasand, inta attitude 😆

ahaan so he accepts she beautiful, way to go Maan great start
Kitni akkad, kitna guroor hai apni khoobsurati pe,

First dupatta and now her saree, can he just leave her clothes to be man. Ok granted his p'''''' but still

😳☺️ Oh Maans falling for her as per the dream sequence, by the way mujhe koi shauq nahin hai to gain an insight into peoples dream especially Maan's when its like this ☺️😆😆😆

WRAP UP KYUN, please na Avi don't I love this Dhusht Khatta Nimbooda and his Geet
AND can i just say I LOVED IT

Babaji!

Sophie ka kya hoga shaadi ke baad?😆

Sapne bhi sach hote hai.. suna hai na😆😆

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miss_mystery

@miss_mystery

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Posted: 10 years ago

#827

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Awww Loved the update Avi

beautifully written and really feel bad for her...Poor girl

so coz of Dadi they somehow comes closer...Let see how our beautiful writer do with two poles who are ready to meet...although one is little bit he he he

waiting for next update Eagerly

Maan Singh Khurana smiles Thora kam that but its okay for today :D

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#828

part 10 - lovely update. so brij is hell angry that he need to find geet now as he required her signature on land papers. ab in logo ko samajhme aa raha hai geet aur rano ki imp.
maan hiding his eyes behind sunglasses...hummm...so he can drool over her easily...he got attracted towards the chocolate that stuck to near her lips. ufff...kya jhagada karte hai dono...dono me utnihi akad hai..
maan hates her so much but his dream...my..my...but his big ego...
waiting for tease part

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Avenging_Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#829

Part 7
Maan intentionally hid the file so geet will come to collect it and he will get his chance to sunao her and the same happened
But thankfully maan didnt accuse her for that accidental kiss
Maan visited KF as per his punishment where he saw his childhood friend meera
Nice update

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Avenging_Angel

@Avenging_Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#830

Part 8
Geet and meera are roommates
So geet is also living in Kf why? eagerly waiting to know her past
I love dadima she knows how to handle people like pandeyji
And finally maans views are changing
Great update