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SalmanShahidSm

@SalmanShahidSm

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome os!!
was sweet n cut
tge,gift half eaten chocolate aww

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 10 years ago

This was so sweet OS.

I loved it.

Swaron childhood friends.

And chocolate sharing was best part.

And finally he is back.

Loved it

Thanks for PM.

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

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Posted: 10 years ago

loved it😊

flashback was cute.

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved it...

Flashback was awesome...tooo cute...

I love to read swaron as kids...its too cool na😎

And wht i loved the most is the half eaten chocolate...nice thought...👍🏼

And the way u ended it...with that beautiful note...

Firstly i thought u have written their meeting tooo but u didnt...but i liked the way u wrapped it...

Nice...

Keep writing dear...i love to read ur writings...

And y not updating "Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye * " this...

Update this one fast plzzz

Edited by --Keechu-- - 10 years ago

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

Unresed

Edited by --Keechu-- - 10 years ago

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Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

This was so cute! <3

Really amazing :)

I would have never guessed that a half eaten chocolate would be in the box

The flashback was really lovely :)

Short but sweet OS!

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

good one

nice concept...

swaron as childhood buddies...

her love for chocolates...

i found the flashback really cute...

half eaten chocolate wrapped in a gift paper

refreshed her memories of him...

i wish it a had a second part...

write one na...

beautifully written...

nice title too..

and thnx for the pm buddy..

p.s:i knoe im super late in commenting.sorry for that...

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Renu Rajpurohit

@--RENU--

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow loved it...
sweet and cute simply best...
flashback was too cute...
Loved swaron as kids...
ending was awesome...
u r fabulous writer plz do write more on swaron...
I would love to read ur work on swaron...

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Fatima

@HSFA

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Posted: 10 years ago

It really cute.

Loved their childhood scene. So pure <3

Wish you could write its 2nd part as well. It would feel complete then.

But I still loved how you described Sharon and her longing for Swayam.

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