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I was in the office working yeah. . That is what I have turned to be from the past few years a workaholic' losing myself to work drowning in it so that I forget everything specially forget him'. . He who have taken my heart and soul never to return and here I'm waiting. . Waiting for him to come back. .

Back to me'

I closed my eyes to get rid of my thoughts which only hurt me. I was pulled out of my bubble by the knock in my door. I took a second to compose myself and said "Yes. . Come in" I now realized I felt chocked my voice hoarse. .

"Sharon ma'am there is a parcel for you" said me the pion placing a classy looking box wrapped in a glittering gift paper. . I gave it a quick glance there was no address or the note of the sender. I felt wired. . "Who gave it to you?" I asked still looking at the mysterious box in front of me. "There was a man who asked me to give it to you ma'am he was looking like a gentleman" came a prompt reply. For a second I felt angry how Ramesh my pion could do it. .taking a box from a random person and not even knowing who he is. . But I couldn't say anything to him Ramesh was in his late fifties and ever since I opened this firm he worked here he was like a close part of this firm and couldn't lash at him just like that. He felt my cabin and I was here being all too confused with a mysterious box given by a gentleman'

I was having second thought to open it or not in years altogether I haven't received any gifts and this box in front of brining an excited Sharon from no where

And within a second I was found unwrapping it. . The little box seemed very light and I started to wonder what it might contain. And to add it all my heart was pounding in my chest and the reason unknown to me. .and I was being restless and finally I opened the box and what I saw inside filled my eyes with tears. . It was a

half eaten chocolate'

*FLASHBACK *

(when I was 12yr old)

I was sitting under my study table eyes blazing with anger and nostrils flaring how could he. . how could he do this. . I will never ever speak to him. .' I was muttering to myself and cursing swayam because he eat my favorite chocolate which I preserved to eat later.

Sharon are you in. .' I heard a little scared but cute voice it was Swayam's I felt like chuckling but kept a straight face sharon is dead. . go away. .' I said anger raging in my voice. here you are. . as usual. . how can I forget' he said flashing his charismatic smile and making him comfortable next to me under the table. The chocolate wrapper still in his hand which added to my fury.

go way swayam I don't want to talk to you' I said turning my hear to the other side.

sorry my princess I just saw it in your bag while searching for home work and couldn't resist from eating. . though I eat only couple of pieces he said as if explaining his crime.

yeah. . right. . only couple of pieces. . it was my favorite chocolate swayam. .' I said and I started to cry not knowing the real reason behind it.

hey. . hey. . princess' he made me to face him and wiped my tears with his little fingers and I saw straight in his eyes there was so much concern in them. Shona, I'm sorry. . please don't cry. . I promise when I start to earn I will fill your bag with chocolates' he said with ardent sincerity that I was in awe of him.

I flashed a wide smile the best I could give and hugged him tightly. . kissing him on the cheeks. . snatching the chocolate from his hand I ran from there leaving a confused swayam behind under the table.

*FLASHBACK ENDS *

Those memories still feels so fresh and I dint know when I started to cry hysterically. I missed him more than I thought I did. . and finally realization stuck me he was back' but where do I find him I started to panic I searched for any clue that would lead me to him. And I found a note below the chocolate

princess tonight 7.30 I will pick you' there was an arrow mark below I just flipped the note and wipe your tears and smile because I'm back to never let you cry I'm back to you'

Much love *_*

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..RiSha.. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello readers I had written this way back but dint get the time to post. . better late than ever right

This os is dedicated to my NUT I couldn't write one for her birthday so here it is hope you like it

And you beautiful people out there read, like and comment

Will be waiting

@_@

Edited by ..EnIgMa28.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally you posted...👏

You know right how much i love swayam n

Sharon as childhood best friends...n how much

I luv chocolates...so it had everything that i luv...😛😃

So basically this os becomes one of my favourite...

Thanks for writing this...n hope you post

Your next concept soon coz i have fallen in love with

That as well...

Loved this os ... You have written each line beautifully

N i really knw this is one lame comment but kya karu

Mai aisi hi hoon...😆

Loved it.. Keep writing more or i'll trouble you more...

Love n lods of it...

Ani
Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
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See
Finally i unresed
1st of all no thank u for d os
Its my right 2 get
N secondly tune sabko beautiful bola sirf mujhe nai how unfair
Coming 2 d os
I loved it
That half eaten chocolate idea was something inovative
I like dat box vala part
N d last line of swayam
Aye haye
If u really would continue writing like dis mai teri bhi fan ban jaungi
Also it was not a romantic yet a cuet story with little seasoning of romance
I want u 2 continue dis bt i knw u wont
I commented doesnt mean dat m nt angry coz of ur unfairness
Lots of gussa
Nut no no Mansi
Edited by Mansi98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute os. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Back to you :*

^Unreserve^

I loved the title!

This was cute Shinzo! The flashback part especially. .

The gift. . The idea of a half eaten chocolate was the best thing in this piece.

But I thought with your cravings for romance you would have written a romantic OS. But I guess you have left that task for me. :P

Anyways, this was short and sweet. Good.

Chitra :)
Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sweet n cute OS:-)

flashback was AWSUM:-)
(missing SwaRon a lot):-( :-(
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unreserved on Page One.

Unlike you I do write on which page I have unreserved >_<
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this was so sweet
loved it
awww fb was so cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb os...
Keep writing more :)

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