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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome OS.

Sharon was so heartbroken..

Loved swayam's Pov very well written..

Finally he is back to her.

Beautifully penned down tgeirtheir emotions..

Thanks for PM.

-Shivani

Edited by --Ecstasy-- - 10 years ago

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Finally got a time to comment

beautifully written os

Loved it..n I loved this title too

I loved Sharon here..she knew swayam will come back..she was waiting fr him

nd finally he came back to her..loved ending part

nd these lines👍🏼

"You left me in the wide world

To wonder around and feel so cold

Now you are walking back to me which I can't believe

But I'm assured that love is still alive."

keep writing

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Hi Shinzo!

My opinion is slightly different from others. . .With the kind of OSes you have written in the past you have raised your bar for your ownself. So this kind of fell short there.

But the emotion you tried to show from Sharon's side definetly reached me. . . And even though Swayam was a total jerk she loved him too much. . .Nit everybody can forgive a person who left so brutally breaking her heart. . .So yeah.

Sharon was the highlight of this piece.

Chitra :)

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Renu Rajpurohit

@--RENU--

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

wow...
this one is also unique...
the way u penned their feelings is awsm...
flashback was too emotional...
but sharon knew swayam will come back to her..
I loved it...
😊

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Unique and differently written.

We have always seen Sharon being the impulsive one but here I felt good to see things changing 😆

Beautiful<3👏👏

The way you expressed Swayam's guilt combing the past with it commendable. Also Sharon's intensity awww. I always wanted Sharon to be this strong and her longing is well portrayed. Loved the role reversal here.

Good Job ⭐️

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