SwaRON OS: Te Amo - Page 2

Awesome OS.

Finally got a time to comment

beautifully written os

Loved it..n I loved this title too

I loved Sharon here..she knew swayam will come back..she was waiting fr him

nd finally he came back to her..loved ending part

nd these lines👍🏼

"You left me in the wide world

To wonder around and feel so cold

Now you are walking back to me which I can't believe

But I'm assured that love is still alive."

keep writing

Hi Shinzo!

My opinion is slightly different from others. . .With the kind of OSes you have written in the past you have raised your bar for your ownself. So this kind of fell short there.

But the emotion you tried to show from Sharon's side definetly reached me. . . And even though Swayam was a total jerk she loved him too much. . .Nit everybody can forgive a person who left so brutally breaking her heart. . .So yeah.

Sharon was the highlight of this piece.

Chitra :)

wow...
this one is also unique...
the way u penned their feelings is awsm...
flashback was too emotional...
but sharon knew swayam will come back to her..
I loved it...
😊