AsYa (KaBhi) SS You're The HEARTBEAT Of My HEART(chap2 updated Pg19)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys My name is Muskaan Sayyed also known as Aashii Sayyed anyways I'm 18 years old I'm huge Fan of AsYa (KaBhi) so I'm starting a story on them I thought about this long time ago but just penned it down now so here we go guys writing this for the First time so plz bear with me Critism accepted
Introduction

This story is about unconditional Love and Faith of a women towards her Husband she's a simple girl who believes in love and Fairy Tales she belongs to a small city from Dehradun . She's living her life nicely when she gets married to a guy who doesn't love or respect her he lives in Mumbai but his principle of life is totally different he doesn't believe in fairy tale love he's just a casanova of Mumbai who flirts with all the girls and is least interested in Marriage. He's known as Mumbai Eligible bachelor He's also mumbai's most successful business man Rashid Ahmed Khan's Only son and sole owner of his property..

What happens when their destiny collides together will her dreams shatter or will he change his way and fall for her..??

What happens when he/she becomes the reason for them to live will she be able to become his HeartBeat..This story will show how a women struggles to Win her Husbands love even though he Insults her and treats her badly and how she finally becomes his HEARTBEAT!!!

Right guys please leave your Views behind and tell if I should continue this or not

Index
Introduction- pg 1 above
Character Sketch- pg 2
Prologue- pg 6
Chapter 1- pg 11
Chapter 2- pg 19
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept...
Loving it already...
And ur this mere description is already promising ur skills...
U should really continue...
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Originally posted by: Kabhibloom

Interesting concept.
U should continue.


Thanx😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayat20

Interesting concept

Continue soon


Thanks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NnonaA

Nice concept...

Loving it already...
And ur this mere description is already promising ur skills...
U should really continue...


Thanks😊
Thanks for your encouragement😊
Will continue soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys sorry for the delay was busy with school since its last year of mines in Matric, its very tough so guys here you go..
Character Sketch

Asad's Family

Asad Ahmed Khan- 24 years old he's the only son of Mumbai's Famous Architect Rashid Ahmed Khan and sole owner of his property,he's very arrogant and full of attitude,he's a casanova and big flirt he gets married but isn't interested in his wife. He loves his mother Dilshad a lot and can do anything for her and he studies @ the mumbai college he's doing Arts as he wants to become an singer not interested in his father's Business.

Rashid Ahmed Khan- 48 years old he's Mumbai's Famous Architect, He Loves his wife and son a lot. He's fun,loving, and Professional man, wants his son to join his business but he doesn't want to force him either.

Dilshad Ahmed Khan- 45 years old she's a loving mother and wife. she's a fun loving kind of person loves her son and daughter-In-Law a lot she's also a business women an architect like her hubby and helps him in his business she's the sister of Gaffur Qureshii and Zainab Farooqui.

Najma Qureshi- 19 years old she's bubbly, chubby, cute and beautiful girl. she's Asad's Cousin and asad's darling baby sister studies @ Mumbai college doing medical science as a gynaecologist. Daughter of Raziya and Gaffur qureshi who died when she was 3.

Ayaan Qureshi- 24 years old cousin cum best friend of Asad brother of Najma, he's a jolly kind of a person studying @ mumbai college on Software Engineering he's nothing like Asad in fact he's serious about relationships he's only 3 months younger then him he likes zoya's yonger sister Zaynaa. He's the son of Gaffur and Raziya qureshi who died when he was 8 years old.

Zoya's Family.

Zoya Farooqui/Khan- 22 years old she's the daughter of world famous cardiologist Abbas Farooqui She's the 2nd daughter in the Family she has 3 sisters who are very close to her. She's a simple girl who wears glasses but still she's very beautiful she studies @ Dehradun college, Her motive in life is to become an architect and Find True Love she gets married to her Aunts son she loves him a lot she's very close to Humairah her youngest sister.

Abbas Farooqui- 49 years old he's father of Zeenat Zoya Zaynaa and Humairah and husband of Zainab farooqui he's a cardiologist owns 5 hospitals in dehradun and 3 hospitals in mumbai he loves his 4 daughter a lot they his life. Specially Zoya.

Zainab farooqui- 46 years old she's an housewife and a darling mother to her 4 daughters she's very close to her daughters. She always worried for Zoya as all the people who come with marriage proposal reject her because of her simplicity.

Zeenat farooqui/Ibrahim- 24 years old she's the eldest daughter of Farooqui Family Her Marriage is Fixed with Anwar Ibrahim their having an Love Marriage.

Zaynaa Farooqui- 21 years old she's an bubbly chirpy Full of life girl just like her twin sister humairah. she's a modern thinking kind of a girl her motive in life is to become a Fashion designer she's in love with Ayaan.

Humairah Farooqui- 21 years old bubbly chirpy cute and youngest in the family and she's only 5 minutes younger then Zaynaa she's also modern girl not like Zoya. Her motive in life is to become a psychiatrist she's very close to zoya. She has a crush on Haider.

Anwaar Ibrahim- 26 years old years old is getting married to his love Zeenat Farooqui he's very jolly person and has 2 brothers Imraan and Haider he's an software engineer he owns 3 software companies.

Haider Ibrahim- 24 years old he's very serious person he dislikes humairah because he thinks she's annoying and irritating and his bhaijaan's ladli he's also software engineering like his brother.

Imraan Ibrahim- 22 years old he's a spoilt brat is very proud of being rich and arrogant he didn't follow his brothers footsteps he took up Arts and wants to do acting and become an actor.

Right guys update complete now please Hit Likes and leave your precious comments I'm doing this 1st time so want to know how it is

P.S: sorry for any grammar mistake or anything else I seriously don't know anything about indian colleges or studies as I'm not from india so sorry for that..otherwise enjoy...

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Edited by Aashiisayyed - 10 years ago
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interesting story plz continue soon
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hmm treats her badly means what? does he physically abuse her?

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