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Shopau thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Girrrlll!!!!!
I have a bad feeling😒 ... please is dream ko dream hi rehne dena haan😲???
Atleast the second part of the dream...

1st part ko elongated real sequence bana sakte ho :) I am all for it😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Just a beautiful part
Loved it
They are slowly falling foe each other
Keep writing
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
-Manu-
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Lovely update
Love is in the air.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
chapter 15
as they borded the plane next morning, both of their minds were filled with enormuous number of questions and
razia was confused of her own feelings why does his presence affect me so much? and why am i insecure of him? and suddenly his behaviour has been also changed...a heartless akdu jallad mirza had been transformed into a loving caring and
possesive husband? have he fallen in love with me? no...no...razia that's no way possible!he is planning all thease things to take revenge on me. but it did not affact me any way!
on the other hand mirza was all dipped in his own thoughts or rather said his rasiza's thoughts. he was so happy and surprised at the same time the one whome he had married just to take revenge
had been transformed to his life and yes of course his lady love and more than anything that was she is his wife. he looked at her when she was all buzy looking down through the window of the plane. this way their whole journey
ened without uttering a single word but having a deep converstion.the next morning razia waked up early and made herself ready for the office as she have to leave with mirza. but he was still sleeping so she thought of unpaking the things and senting them back to their places. she unpaked mirza's suitecase and opened his cupbbord to place the things back suddenly a photo album fell from there . it as the same she had seen on the day going to thailand tied with a red ribbon and memories written in the top of it.that day she was in a hurry to leave but today she could see the pictures.
few minutes later...
mirza's sleep broke because he heard some one crying...he leaped out of the bed and saw razia standing on the bacony with a photo album in her hand and crying badly...he understood everything in a flick of seconds and went there to claer her misunderstanding." don't dare to touch me, u cheater" she shrugged his hands aways in disgust she cannot even imagine the things she hand just seen...the whole album was full of mirza's picture with a girl... she was very beautiful..blue eyes, light complexion flawless skin with black curly hair.there were diffrent pics mirza standing with him in his hand in hand... in some he was hugging that unkwon girl and the most stiking thing was he was happy with her his facial expression was telling that. he was not looking like the normal mirza with a angry jallad face.he was smiling and looing too happy.which made razia totally bealive that mirza had cheated on her! how could he do it?? tears sttrated to fall down through her beautiful doe like eyes. again she felt the same that no one is with her no one she is all alone her parents left her and her so called husband cheated her. now what should she probalbaly do?? crying and that was what she was doind that was when mirza woke up and came near her. but she felt disgusting with his touch. mirza felt broken he again and again tried to talk with razia but she didn't listen she ran to the washroom and licked herself there.
mirza was in a way to broken he thought to himself " mere upar ek baar to yakeen kiya hota razia!" amd the he left the house...
THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO MY DEAR FRIEND ARSHIA 200

Edited by cuteshravani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Amazing update
Hope Razia listens to mirza
Thanks for the pm
Edited by cherrynicolem - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
ohhh no😭😭

ab aage kya hoga ??
whos this girl ??
hai bhi ki shes dead or something ??
or she broke mirzas heart in the past...if she did WHY HE STILL HAS HER PICS...???😡

jaldi batao
update karo please
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
omggg love
i loveee u sooo much
thank u for the dedication ...im so touched !
huggsss🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

Amazing update

Hope Razia listens to mirza
Thanks for the pm


JUST A MINS MORE i'am going to upadate the next chapter u'll soon know😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: arshia200

ohhh no😭😭

ab aage kya hoga ??
whos this girl ??
hai bhi ki shes dead or something ??
or she broke mirzas heart in the past...if she did WHY HE STILL HAS HER PICS...???😡

jaldi batao
update karo please


just a few more mintures and i'll upadate the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Yaar ab yeh blue eyed wali ladki kahan se aagai???
Ek suryabhaan kam tha kya???

well I am just hoping they will become more passionate after the mis-understanding is cleared.

update soon!!!

love
Shopau

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