New Asya OS ~Mehrbaan Hua Rabb~

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Hi lovely readers😊
Ok coming 2 d point I wrote after getting inspired by my dearest Aloo aka Aroo I also tried writing a song drabble 4 my pyari baby doll Affu on her Birthday last week & gifted that 2 her on her Bday thread. But when I started writing it got a little out of hand & was no longer a drabble so I devided it in 2 parts. 1 was song drabble & this is d OS version. Bestie & Affu was asking me ki full story kya hai so here it is.
Since song Drabble part was exculively gifted 2 Affu now this OS is 4 all my dear Family members & dearest frnds I made here 🤗❤️🤗 Ab btane ki toh jaroorat hai nahi ki kon kon right😉
Scroll down & enjoy😛
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~*~ Mehrbaan Hua Rabb ~*~

Khan Villa was silent Asad was sitting in the hall with his laptop. But he was not doing any office work as his Ammi & She always used to say. He was busy looking at the pictures of his beloved, His Zoya. Her name meant Zindagi & that was what she was, She was life of his Home no her home their home. This is what he does every Sunday since she left him, Sit with his laptop seeing her pics when Dilshaad & Najma leave for orphanage.
He knew he hurt her beyond repair that's why she left him an year ago never to look back. Why will She? He always misjudged her, Insulted her, manhandled many times, never showed trust on anything she says heck he didn't even told her once what he feels for her. How much she means to him & that life was colorless without her.
His home which always used to be filled with happy voices of his three most loved ladies became silent when she left. She took away everything with her. He missed her terribly everything that she does whether it's her silly couplets, her messiness, her zeal to live life happily spreading happiness in everyone's life or her motto of life to always help everyone even if she herself end up in problem which she often used to get after all she's his MUSIBAT MAGNET.
He himself didn't knew when he fell hopelessly in love with her maybe when he saw her in Dargaah. He felt that magnetic pull which he later thought was Allah's sign who was guiding him that look she's your destiny but Alas he was too blinded by the demons of his past, His insecurity & trust which he had on wrong people who took advantage of it thus ruining his dream to have a happy life with the love of his life.
But it was too late when the blindfold removed from his eyes & reality of his fraud of a friend came to light who fooled him all along & the staged Suhag raat darkened his life forever. His beloved had left leaving him in darkness making his Home a lifeless house & his life barren. He searched her everywhere but was unsuccessful. She had not left any clue & her Aapi Jiju refused to help him stating he doesn't deserve her.
It has been One year but he kept his hope alive. He wanted to meet her once, apologies for all his mistakes & just once tell his feelings after that he'll accept her any decision any punishment.



But today finally Allah answered all his prayers giving him another chance. He heard the door cracked open & as soon as he looked at the person at door he froze. She was standing at his Home's door wearing a simple pink kurti & tears filled in her eyes ready to flow any moment.
Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaki thodi si hai zindagi
Asad sat up he couldn't believe it that day arrived, the one he loved with all his being is standing in front of him today. Asad was too stunned to react why won't he afterall he never expected that the day he's waiting for so long will come like this.
Jagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Yeh lamha kahaan tha mera
Asad & Zoya both moved towards each other with small steps, both reached at centre of hall both had tears so many unsaid feelings so many questions some fears but with immeasurable amount of Love for each other. Asad couldn't take it any more so he quickly moved forward taking Zoya in a long comforting hug pulling her to himself with all his might.

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Ab hai saamne
Ishe chhuu loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraaa
Both cried their heart out for the painful separation, their ill fate which drifted them apart. Zoya hid her face in the crook of his neck wanting to ease all her pain that she went through in the past few months by being in Asad's arms which always make her feel home.
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraa
After some time they stopped crying but they were not willing to leave each other but cries of a baby forced them to finally move away from each other.
Hoo abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaki thodi si hai zindagi
They looked at the door where Dilshaad & Najma were standing with tears in their eyes. But it was the small Pink blanket which carried a small infant whose little hands were visible that caught Asad's eyes. He was surprised & confused. His eyes were fixed on only the baby in Dilshaad's arms.
Hoo... dhoop mein jalte hue tann koo
Chhaya pedh ki mil gayi
Seeing Asad standing stunned Zoya got a little worried & looked at Khan ladies. Najma saw that look & brushed her's & her Ammi's tears which brought Dilshaad also in present who was just looking at her son with pride after all the angel in her arms was brought due to the couple standing in front of her.
Roothe bacche ki hansi jaise
Phuslane se phir khil gayi
She stepped forward seeing Asad's face which was stuck on the baby only. Coming in front of him she gave the baby in his arms which came up automatically as if knowing she belonged to be there.
Kuch aisa hi ab mehsoos dil ko ho raha hai
Barson ke puraane zakhmon pe marham laga sa hai
As soon as baby settled in his arms Asad looked up at his mother with eyes filled with emotions it was like his soul had recognized the baby but he just want to testify. With eyes filled with tears again she nodded in affirmation to Asad's unasked question.

Kuch ehsaa Reham hai,
Iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha meraa
He sucked in a breadth & a lone tear travelled down his cheek. His hold on the baby tightened. With tears still rolling down he looked at Zoya who was standing holding is arms.
Ab hai saamne.. isse chhoo loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loo zara
Zoya was scared but she had faith in Asad & her Allah Miyan so without much delay she also nodded her head shedding tears from her eyes & a little sob which unintentionally left though her mouth.
Khushiyaan choom loon
Ya ro loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zara
Asad closed his eyes as his heart overwhelmed with emotions. Today is the most lucky day of his life that he got not only the love of his life but also got blessed in the form of an angel who was resting in his arms & very cutely looking at him with adoration.
Dor se tooti patang jaisi
Thi yeh zindagaani meri
Remembering the painful days of separation his heart clenched painfully & eyes closed making tears run smoothly down his cheeks. He looked above thanking him on bestowing his blessings in abundance on him.
Aaj hoon kal ho mera naho
Har din thi kahaani meri
She was just few months old her cheeks were light cherry red, Big doe shaped eyes just like her Ammi with lots of mischief in them. She was holding his white Kurta with tight fists of her small fingers.
Ek bandhan naya peeche seh ab mujhko bulaye
Aane wale kal ki kyun fhikar mujhko sataa jaaye

Asad bend down & showered so many kisses on her face saying that he loves her & she's his daughter.
Ik aisi chubhan, iss lamhe mein hai
Yeh lamha kahaan tha mera
Asad was not able to take her eyes off of his cute little angel & Tears were not stopping from his or ladies eyes. When baby started crying he stopped & started swinging her & talking babyishly to calm her down which actually worked.
Ab hai saamne.. isse chhoo loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zara
Seeing him do all this brought another round of tears in Khan ladies eyes but this time they didn't mind as these were happy tears which were adorned on their happy faces.
Khushiyaan choom loon
Ya roh loon zara
Mar jaaun ya jee loon zara...
After spending time with his angel & admiring her sleep Khan ladies explained him what happened in the last one year. Najma got lucky to reach Zoya after two months of her leaving Khan Villa. She gave Zoya her swear to keep in contact with her & in return Zoya took promise not to reveal it to Asad which she agreed. Soon she found out Zoya was pregnant. She asked her to come back & tell Asad but Zoya refused. Time went by & both best friends kept contact. Zoya used to feel pinch in her heart whenever Najma used to tell about Asad & his condition. How much he misses her & want one last chance. With time Zoya's heart started melting she had forgiven Asad beforehand but when Najma told Tanveer's truth, She connected the dots of Tanveer's challenge to never let them marry & live happily. She cried at her mistrust on Asad but she wanted time to see if Asad really cares. And her Love Asad proved his love for her. Soon their daughter was born. And when Asad never left hope or any chance to find her she realized that Asad truly loved her & is sorry for his mistakes & she decided to come back.
Asad apologised to all of them for all his mistakes & confessed his love to Zoya in front of his mother & sister. Zoya blushed & Khan ladies giggled at the young couple. When he proposed to marry her Dilshaad told him another truth about his life that both of them were already married. They had signed the Nikah naama when Maulvi Saheb mistakenly brought it during the short skirt fiasco. And they also signed it being busy in hiding Zoya from Maulvi ji.
A week before, while checking documents Maulvi found their Nikah naama & informed Dilshaad & when she told this to Najma she also shared about Zoya & thus all of them met & decided to bring Zoya back on the day of their first anniversary.
Asad was shocked hearing all this. Both of them were going through this pain while they were married already. But he was happy that there is not any problem now. He has all the people he love in his life & his most favourite is the angle who was sleeping in her cradle. But his thoughts broke with his angles crying voices & he quickly got up to attend his princess leaving Khan ladies to awe seeing his this soft side with the baby.



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Thanx 4 reading😃
Sorry guys couldn't PM last night ok. So members who already read wanted 2 clear Zoya got pregnant after BNHH sequence & after that marriage functions kept them busy. She left after Nikah couldn't happen due 2 Mu created by Billi on their D-Day & she later found out about her expecting. So my calculated time is 2 months after which pregnancy was revealed 2 her. That's it nothing else should b confusing.😆
I more Important thing as this is Affu's gift I also took this Idea of Asya being already married from her FF. I hope she doesn't get upset cuz use pocha bhi nhi maine😆 Affu Mumma ki maafi Qubool kar lo peej.😳
I also added d song above can u guys hear it volume up karo tabhi mja aayega padne ka😉
Now u can plz leave ur reviews😊 cuz adhe besarb logon ne pad hi liya hai par PM toh karne hain hi meri duty jo hai 😆.
Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res 4 meri pyari IF family🤗
Heenu mumma, Pinku papa, Ashi, Aloo, Affu, Yumi,
& also
Amu, Goti, Adu, Srash, Rada, Jules, Janna(Bano), Sam di, Chandu darling,Trish, Aishu(Aishwa), Aish(Aishwarya), Mayur, Khush, Nikki, Binnu, Shailu, Sum, Sue, Tehs,
Hope I didn't left any1 😳


& 4 Pms buddy this account Asyafeelz
Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤗🤗🤗
Amazing OS.
Loved it.
It was really beautiful n awesome.
All the emotions were potrayed so beautifully.
The baby n asad part was most cutest.
🤗🤗🤗
Edited by Kabhibloom - 10 years ago
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Res :))
Edited.

Not even a single dialogue and what an OS...like seriously, your descriptions were wayy too Awesomeee girll!! *applause* Jassuu darling...Keep it up. This was really Amazing <3

Even I wanted you to elaborate the OS a bit...Thanks to the ones who asked you and Thank you for doing it :D 🤗

Keep writing Jassuu...And pleaseee update mere humnawa! You and ashhii torture ur readers literally 😆

Take care dear <3



Edited by _Annie_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res😃
Dear Jas, you almost make me cry and your song didn't help me to retain my moisty eyes 😭
I love this song, I really love and I can't stop myself thinking about Gaffur and Zoya's reunion when I heard this song.
So coming to this OS, it was so beautiful, 😭 what to say, I feel for both of them and the twist that you add at the end was un-ex-pec-ted yaar, I litterally jump of my bed when I read about the child, and I read it twice to be sure that it was Asya's child. I though it was Tanveer 😕 (you can imagine my shocking face).
But you didn't describe much how they got this baby, I mean I know how we make babies, it's not the question 😳 but still. Was it during bol na halke halke? of course what's beautiful moment it was *sigh*.
You make me cry, smile and jump from joy reading this OS, so beautiful dear Jas. Hat off to you.
Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jas91


<font color="#660099">Res 4 meri pyari IF family🤗</font>

<font color="#660099">Heenu mumma, Pinku papa,Ashi, Aloo, Affu, Yumi,</font>

</em>

<font color="#660099">& also</font>

<font color="#660099">Amu,Goti, Adu, Srash, </font><font color="#660099">Rada, Jules, Janna(Bano), Sam di,Chandu darling,Trish, </font><font color="#660099">Aishu(Aishwa), Aish(Aishwarya), Mayur, Khush, Nikki, Binnu, Shailu, Sum, Sue, Tehs, </font>


<em><font color="#660099">Hope I didn't left any1 </font>😳



Res

BTW me katti
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jas91


<font color="#660099">Res 4 meri pyari IF family🤗</font>

<font color="#660099">Heenu mumma, Pinku papa,Ashi, Aloo, Affu, Yumi,</font>

</em>

<font color="#660099">& also</font>

<font color="#660099">Amu,Goti, Adu, Srash, </font><font color="#660099">Rada, Jules, Janna(Bano), Sam di,Chandu darling,Trish, </font><font color="#660099">Aishu(Aishwa), Aish(Aishwarya), Mayur, Khush, Nikki, Binnu, Shailu, Sum, Sue, Tehs, </font>


<em><font color="#660099">Hope I didn't left any1 </font>😳


Thanks for the res, Jas
🤗🤗🤗
Love u.
🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's superb loved it
Little emotional but sweet
Plz pm me for your work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsm os.
Its such a cutee,lvly,emotnal aww wala os.
Lv it.

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