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Posted: 9 years ago

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PART 11

He come closer to her & pull her by waist, she try to hit him, but he held her hands with one hand and placed on her back, with other hand he caring her cheek...

Geet : don't come closer maan

Now am fire

Tum jal jaayonge

Maan : mein whi chahta hu jaan

Tumhe apne pass chahta hu

Apne aangosh mein

Issi tarah

.

Geet : now what you want from me

Maan : bs tumhe chahata hu geet

Geet : but I love karan

Maan : no

You love me

I know

Geet : tumhe manana hai toh maano

Nhi toh mujhe kya

.

Maan why you stop jannat project

Maan : ye jannat tumhare liye itna mayne kyun rakhta hai

Geet : tum kya smjhengo maan

Tumhare liye toh bs ye sb ek khel hai

Maan : jaan I know

Maine bhut si galatiya ki hai

But am really repenting

Geet : maan am not interested

Please leave my hand

He leave her hands and take step back...

Geet : why you stop the project

.

Now am understanding

Mujhe yaha lane ke liye kiya na tumne ye sb

.

Maan : jaan

Tum bilkul shi ho

Mein chahta tha tumhe yaha laana

Aur jaanta tha

Project stop hone pet um mujhse baat krna chahongi

Par jb mein khi nhi milunga

Toh tum jaanti ho

Mein kaha honga

Geet : abhi tum thode der phle repent ki baat kr rhe the

Aur ab khud ko dekho

Whi cheap tricks

Maan : jaan mein toh bs ye shabit krna chahta tha

Tum aaj bhi mujhse judi har baat jaanti ho

Geet : isme shabit kya krna hai

Tumhe mujhse achi tarah kaun jaan sakta hai

.

Now

Stop of all this

.

Shabit ho gya

Project kal se start ho jaana chaiye

Maan : jaan that's not possible

Geet : maan

Maan : meri baat suno phle

Project mein ek problem hai

.

Come with me

.

Come

Geet

**********

He opens the laptop and blueprint and show the mistake...

Geet jis scale pe tum ye project chahti ho

Uske liye building ke is hisse ke liye

Hume sath wali aur land chaiye

.

Geet we surely try for this land

Geet : par maan phle toh calculations mein kuch problem nhi thi

Maan : jaan thi

Maine check kiya

Toh dekhi

.

Now we have two options only

Ye land mil jaaye toh bhut acha hai

Fir hume koi change nhi krna padenga blue print mein

.

Ydi nhi milti hai

Toh hume scaling km krni hongi

.

Geet : hm

Mein broker se baat krti hu abhi

Maan : jaan wo maine phle bol diya hai

Wo do din mein hume bta denga

Geet : ok

.

Maan : geet kuch puchi tumse

Geet : hmm

Maan : tumhare liye ye project itna mayna kyun rakhta hai

Geet : that's not matter for you

Maan : tumse judi har cheez mere liye important hai geet

Please give one chance

Geet : good night Mr. khurana

.

She left...

*************

Flashback in

Geet : ye mr. arrogant khud ko smjhta kya hai

Uski itni himaat mujhe chuya

"Miss

Mujhe late comer's bilkul pasand nhi hai

Isliye time pe mujhe canteen mein hi milna

I help you in your study"

.

Ab ek cheater meri study mein help karenga

Par geet you need help

Ye financial management toh kuch smjh nhi aa raha

Aur sir ne bhi bola

Us cheater se help le lo

.

Geet ek baar try krne mein kya jaata hai

.

Right...

**********

Maan : finally you come miss

But you are five minute late

And I totally dislike late comers

But today your first day for my class

Toh chalta hai

.

Geet : Mr. arrogant

Don't fly so high

.

Come to straight on topic

Maan : miss

Don't forget you need my help

Not me

So be polite

.

Now sit

Geet : hmm

.

One hour passed so fast, both lose in study...

Geet : not bad

Tumhe sch mein aata hai

Good

Maan : tumhe kya lagta tha

Mein koi cheater hu

Geet : wo

.

Ha

.

Maan : miss friendly hone ka matlab ye nhi hota

Wo insaan pdta nhi honga

Change your view

Always coin have two sides

.

Today time is over

Tum ye exercise try krna aaj

Kal koi problem hongi

Toh we discuss

.

Now come

Mein tumhe drop kr deta hu

Geet : thanks for help

Par mein khud jaa sakti hu

Maan : don't worry

Mein koi rapist nhi huyi hu

Jo akeli ladki dekhi

Aur

.

So don't take wrong

Geet : nhi asa nhi hai

Bahar meri car hai

Mein jaa sakti hu

Maan : ok

**********

Flashback out

Bittuji : madam

Wo

Geet : sb thik hai

Bittu ji

.

Jannat ko kbhi kuch nhi honga

Bittu : ji

*******

.

Mom kash aap yaha hoti

Mere pass

.

Babaji ne mere gunaah ki sja aapko di

.

.

Flashback in

Mr. & Mrs. Handa

Your daughter is pregnant

.

Mohinder : ye aap

Dr. : that's true

Aap chinta mt kriye

Ye baat bahar nhi jaayengi

Rano : bhai sahib

Dr. : bhabhi ji

Please

Aap smbhaliye khud ko

Mohinder please take care

Mohinder : hmm

************

Mohinder : geet ase kaise humara barosa tod sakti hai

Usse wo har cheez di

Jo usne maangi

.

Ek ungli rakhne ki jaroorat thi bs

.

Aur ye sb

Rano : mujhe meri beti se puchna hai

Geet : maa

Dad

Rano : geet tu bol ye jhooth hai

Geet fall on her feet and said "mom

Dad

I loved him

And he betray me

Mohinder : kaun hai wo

Jiski itni himmat jo handa ki beti ke sath asa kre

Rano feel numb , she fall on sofa...

Geet : maa

.

Maa please kuch bolo

Mohinder : geet car nikalwayo

Geet : ji

Flashback out

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Posted: 9 years ago
see new ss -



WO LAMHE - concept, prologue & cs on page 1& part 1 on page 7

&

is pyaar ko kya naam du -part 27 on page 58


Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
So maan deliberately closed that project to bring to his place. Geet was getting irritate with his nearness and along with his same chant that he is changed now. Eventually he told geet the main reason for stopping that project. They decided to talk with broker and sort out problem regarding this project. Again geet got lost in her past where she lost her mother only because of maan's betrayal. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice part...

Maan repents his deeds... n wants to know abt the project on jannat..


is Geet mom dead ???
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

So maan deliberately closed that project to bring to his place. Geet was getting irritate with his nearness and along with his same chant that he is changed now. Eventually he told geet the main reason for stopping that project. They decided to talk with broker and sort out problem regarding this project. Again geet got lost in her past where she lost her mother only because of maan's betrayal. Waiting for next dear


thanks dear

try to give next soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CuteTommy

nice part...

Maan repents his deeds... n wants to know abt the project on jannat..


is Geet mom dead ???


tks

yes geet mom is dead

starting mein ek pooja dekhayi toh thi

uski mom ki death anni thi na
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ... Maan jaldi wapis le aayega apne paas geet ko
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Posted: 9 years ago


WOW LOVELY MEOTIONAL UPDATE..TE WAY MY MAAN WANT TO PROVE HIS GEET ABT HER LOVE FOR HIM WAT EVER SHE TRY SHE CANT HATE HIM BUT GEET'S PAST IN WHICH HE BROKED HER CANT ABLE TO BELIEVE MY MAAN..TE WAY MY MAAN SAYING ABT TE FAULT IN PROJECT AND HIS CUROUSITY TO KNOW WHY JANNAT IS IMP TO HIS GEET ONCE U KNOW U WILL BREAK MAAN..TE WAY MY MAANEET COMBINE STUDY WAS LOVELY..OPPS GEET'S PARENTS KNOWING ABT HER PREGNANCY AND HER MOM OMG..SO MY MAAN BETRAYED HER , DESTINTY HAVE PLAYED A BIG GAME IN MY MAANEET'S LIFE..I LOVE TE UPDATE YAR
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabolouss 😊
Geet getting irritate with maan nearness
Where maan wnt to knw abt jaanat project
Geet los her mom 😭
In past
Waiting for nxt

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