CRAZY ,MADLY,DEEPLY IN LOVE(chap 16 on pg 26)

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hey friends,its my first story,i hope you like it;

A MAN WHO OWNS EVERYTHING HE WANTS,HE IS THE MOST HANDSOME AND DASHING BUSINESS MAN "MANIK MALHOTRA",EVERY GIRL WANTS HIM BUT HE HIMSELF IRREVOCABLY LOVE HIS SUNSHINE,HIS JAAN,HIS BABY,HIS NANDUU.
HE MARRIED HIS LOVE 1 YEAR BACK AND THEIR WEDDING WAS THE MOST DREAMY WEDDING FOR ANY GIRL,THEIR WEDDING WAS THE MOST POPULAR AND HOT TOPIC AT THAT TIME FOR ALL CHANNELS AND NEWSPAPER.ONE YEAR HAPPILY PASS WITH LOTS OF LOVE,ROMANCE,FIGHTS,MAKING OUTS.BUT THE PROBLEM WITH BOTH OF THEM IS THAT HE IS TOO BOSSY AND SHE IS TOO STUBBORN AND ITS THE MAIN REASONS BEHIND THEIR FIGHTS.

ITS A BEAUTIFUL MORNING AND AGAIN HE AWAKES FIRST TO SEE HIS FAVORITE VIEW WHICH IS HIS SLEEPING BEAUTY,CUDDLING HIM AND SLEEPING LIKE A BABY,HE JUST ADORE HER AND SMILES SEEING HER AND PLANT A KISS ON HER FORHEAD,FEELING HIS TOUCH SHE IMMEDIATELY WAKES UP AND WHILE GIVING HIM HIS FAVOURITE SMILE WISHES HIM .

NANDU;GOOD MORNING MANIK,WHEN DID YOU WAKE UP???
MANIK;GOOD MORNING MY LOVE,JUST FEW MIN BEFORE YOU
NANDU;MANIK YOU KNOW NA TODAY WE HAVE TO MEET FAB 4 AT CABIRS HOUSE,SOO ITS GETTING LATE SOO BE QUICK AND GET READY
MANIK;OHH MY LOVE,WHY YOU ALWAYS IN HURRY,COMES LETS HAVE SOME COZY MORNING MOMENTS,IF WE GET LATE SOO THEY WONT PUNISH US
NANDINI;OHH MY ONE TRACK MIND HUBBY,HOW MUCH COZY MOMENTS YOU WANT,YOU NEVER GET TIRED???
MANIK;HAWW HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT,YOU KNOW ALL MY TIREDNESS JUST VANISHES DUE TO THESE MOMENTS AND IF YOU HAVE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL WIFE SOO ITS VERY HARD TO CONTROL YOURSELF,he says this in a mischevious way and smirks
NANDU;NOW MR CONTROL YOURSELF BECAUSE I DONT WANT TO GET LATE AND THEN ATTACK BY A BOMB OF QUESTIONS FROM YOUR FRIENDS,SOO YOU BETTER HURRY,saying this she goes to have a bath ,leaving her husband with no choice

AFTER GETTING READY THEY MOVE TOWARDS CABIRS HOUSE WHERE FAB 3 ALREADY ARRIVED AND WAITING FOR THEM.

WHILE OPENING THE DOOR FOR THEM,CABIR PREPARES HIMSELF FOR TEASING SESSION;

CABIR;OHH LOVE BIRDS ARRIVE,WE ARE SOO LUCKY TOO HAVE YOU HERE AND WE KNOW YOU HAVE ALOTT OF THINGS TO DO IN MORNINGS BUT THE QUESTION IS THAT THE NIGHT IS NOT ENOUGH,with that he start laughing
Nandini feels shy while manik in fake anger says;

MANIK;YOU KNOW CABIR SOMETIME I THINK WHY YOU STILL ALIVE,YOU SHOULD BE KILLED FOR CRACKING SUCH CHEAP JOKES
CABIR;WOWW,CHEAPS JOKES FOR ONE TRACK MIND PEOPLE LIKE YOU
NAVYA;PLEASE CABIR LET THEM IN

both manik and nandini greets their friends and then boys goes to music room while girls join navya in kitchen to help her preparing for dinner,meanwhile in kitchen on a random topic girls start their chit chat

navya;soo nandu you both guyzz have celebrated your first wedding anniversary,soo now what are your plans for having childrens??
nandu;i dont know navya we and manik never talk on this
mukti;strange nandu,seeing manik love for you that he cannot leave you for a second,its hard to believe that you guyzz never talk about it
alya;right mukti,seeing his love its strange that you guyzz never talk about having a baby as baby is the sign of immense love
nandu;i know guyzz but i myself dont know sometimes i try to talk to him but he always change the topic
navya;dont worry nandu,try to talk to him again
nandu;yeah i will surely talk to him

meanwhile boys also do their chit chats on random topics and after a while girls call them for lunch

during lunch all of them were teasing eachother and talking about their college memories but nandu's mind was stuck in the previous convo because she herself want to have a baby and sometimes she felt strange that why manik never allowed her to talk on this topic,all of her thoughts were broken by manik's voice;

manik;nandu why are you not eating lunch my love???
nandu;ehmm manik i am not feeling hungry,soo i will eat later
manik;why are you not feeling hungry,are you fine honey???
nandu;yess manik dont worry ,i am fine ,i just want to go home i am feeling a bit tired
manik;as you say honey

then after biiding bye to everyone,they leave for their house,meanwhile in car nandu also thinks about their convo and look at manik and thinks that she have to talk to manik about having a baby because she herself want their symbol of love which makes their bond more strong.
after dropping nandu at home ,manik leaves for office

nandu sitting in her room thinks about their beaytiful life with their baby and thinks to ask manik about his views on having a baby as its one year to their marriage

SOOO GUYZZ I WILL STOP HERE PLEASEE DO COMMENT AND SHARE YOUR VIEWS AND LIKESS ,SOO I CAN CONTINUE WITH IT,I WILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR VIEWS


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!
Such a cute story..
Manik is so caring hubby..
Really curious to know why manik didn't talk about having a baby..
Plz continue
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i know why he does want a baby because he is scared because just like he never got love from his parents he is afarid that he wont be able to love his child
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nice dear 👏.. continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fireroad99

i know why he does want a baby because he is scared because just like he never got love from his parents he is afarid that he wont be able to love his child

good guess yrr but if its this then every body can guess but i am thinking about some other reason and this story will be different from current story in many ways
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Don't write in captal letters please 😳
Otherwise a good start
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chair1992

Don't write in captal letters please 😳

Otherwise a good start

ohh i will try but i am sorry i love writing in capital letters but from next time i will try to leave my likes and consider your likes
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Originally posted by: 0315

ohh i will try but i am sorry i love writing in capital letters but from next time i will try to leave my likes and consider your likes


Look if that's what you prefer, than you should continue to write in capital letters, it's your story, please continue the way you like it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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heyy guyzz me back and seriously i am happy with response as didnt expect is either ,i was not planning to write a story,yesterday i just wrote it suddenly even i randomly gave name to it a but after your likes ,the whole night i thought about the story and i came up with some great scenes soo i just have to mold my story for that scenes because i just love it what i thought soo now coming to story i just want to give a brief introduction of characters and how they are related to manan.

MANIK;a very famous business,young,handsome and dashing,he is the name of perfection,he owns everything what he wants,he is like the king whose own house is like a castle or you can say a modern version of it not like in fairytales,he is strict person for his staff and other people but he is a perfect person for those people whom he love but one think here important to mention is that his love has no boundaries means sometimes he also didnot think for others choice but whats matters to him is thats persons existence in life and for which he can do anything if by doing this he hurts the person he love.he is crazily and madly in love with his wife,his nandu and the only fear in his life is losing her which he cant afford.

NANDINI;she is a bubbly girl,soo sweet and always go to any extent to make the people in her life happy,she is deeply in love with manik,their lovestory is not very unique but their love is pure,nandini is an orphan ,she has only one brother name rishab and manik as her husband,so her life revolves around them.nandini also sometime thought that manik tries to control her life and forces his decisions on her but the bigger fact she also knows that he crazily and madly in love with her,for her safety,for fulling her single wish he can go to any extent.

RISHAB;nandini's brother,the love of nandini's life,she always treat him like a baby but in real he is a young boy,he studies in college and lives in hostel as his college is far away from manik's house but on vacations he visits them and he love nandini and manik alott

FAB 4;cabir and mukti are siblings and dhruv and aliya are engaged while mukti is in a relationship with abhi,cabir is married to navya and they are happily together

VILLIANS;now thats a secret will disclose it later

soo guyzz this was the introduction to characters of my story,soo please share your views and i will try to update the next part as fast as i can

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Hey that was amazing and if possible then pm me next time

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