#2 *ITS COMPLICATED* MaNan ff (UPDATED PART 35) Pg138 13/10 - Page 2

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congo for new thread 👏
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Plzz update
U have not updated since so long
And in ur new thread also there is no update
We eagerly Want to know that how will the invisible love between them would be visible and they would realiase it
So please please please update sooonnn
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PART 24


Nandini entered into her room and closed the door leaving behind all the confused heads . She turned around to her room which was full dark. She switched on the lights and found her some of the stuffs were packed in few bags which were supposed to go to Harshad's house rather than there itself. She sighed and sat in front of the mirror.

She stared her sindur filled reddish face. She found herself completely changed from morning. Though she was in her most turmoil state but yet her face was unbelievably glowing.

Suddenly she felt something very heavy on her chest. And she got up and stepped into the washroom.

She stood underneath the shower. And slowly the cold water drenched her fully and slowly her sindur washed out from her forehead. suddenly a lump stuck on her throat while she recalled all the fiasco of that day. She started crying. Tears were rolling Down from her eyes vigorously. Shower drops were then accompanied her tear drops.

She cried . She cried pouring all her heart out loudly freely.


****

Hall

" Manik " Niyonika placed her hand on his shoulder. He was fully confused with the next. He didn't make out his next step.


" Go to your room son. You need rest " Niyonika softly rubbed his back to console his vulnerable thoughts. She eyed Cabir to take him to the room. Cabir obliged and accompanied him towards his room while Dhruv was asked to drop Navya home.

***

Manik room


" Are you okay ? " Cabir asked Manik .

Manik was seating at the edge of the bed with his face hide between his palms. He tilted his face and blankly gazed at Cabir.

" Dekh Manik.. I know it's not the perfect time to say all this but being your friend I just wanna say you k avi v utna kuch nehi bigra hai. I think you should go and talk with her. As now she needs you the most. "

Cabir said and his blank look changed into a confused one.


" Usse avi sabse jyada teri jarurat hai. She needs her best friend now beside her. Only you can heal her. " saying Cabir patted his back and left the room.


****

Maan Niyonika room


" What do you think ? Yeh sab jo v hua? " Niyonika asked Maan.

" I don't know Niyo. Kuch v samajh me nehi aaraha. Sab kuch itne jaldi me hua k soch ne ka v waqt nehi mila? " Maan said and found her lost in her own thoughts.

Maan thought of something and then asked confusingly shaking her up " Are you thinking about that guruji's words of Nandini being mangalik and all then Manik's future ? "

Niyonika became surprised and replied " are you gonna insane? Pagal ho gaye ho Maan? How could you think of this bullshit? "

She slightly retorted at her husband. But Maan wasn't upset with her behaviour at all but relaxed actually happy to find his wife so supportive.

" tum soch v kaise sakte ho that I am gonna think about those craps as because my son is now involved in this ? " She said . Then taking a deep breath she continued " first of all I don't believe in those superstitions nor that mangalik craps. And apart from this we have promised Raman bhai and Ishu and as well as ourselves of Nandini's well upbringing. We have never differentiated between Manik and Nandini. So aaj jab some creeps were talking ill about our child then hum kaise dono ko alag najariye se dekhte? "


Maan was proud of his wife and her maturity as well as great heart. He smiled and took her hands on him and said " tumne bilkul sahi kaha. You're absolutely right. Just because kisine kuch bura kah dia about our child toh woh bura ho gaye? No. Na. Never. No one can ever hurt them as well as we are here with them. "


Niyonika hugged him happily and he too hugged her back .

After some time while they were still in each other's embrace Niyonika said " Wase ek baat kahu? Finally Nandu humuri hui. Aub no one gonna snatch her away from us. Woh hunesha k liye yehi rahegi mere pass. Humure pass. "

Maan smiled with his wife's innocence and replied rubbing her back " hmm. And kahin na kahin I am having some strong positive vibes regarding the wedding. Universe must has something good for them. Aub bus Manik needs to support her. She needs him more than us. "

" I wish un dono ki duri jaldi khatam ho jaye. " Niyonika said sobbing worrying for the future of Manik and Nandini.


" thik ho jagega. Thora waqt lagega but it will be fall into place soon. As time can heal everything. " Maan replied assuring her. She sighed.


" God bless them. " they prayed together for their children.


***

Nandini room


Nandini was seating on the swing chair at her balcony and silently gazing the stars.

" Maa , Papa !!! " she was crying missing her parents. " Look kya ho gaya. Sab badal gaya. Everything is messed up now. Everything is ruined. "

She was crying hugging her knees when she felt someone's soft trembling hesitant touch on her shoulder. She looked up and found him.

They both were looking each other expressionless. Though they wanted to say a lot. Wanted to share a ton. Wanted to pouring their heavy heart out but they both found themselves dumb founded.

It was like a while they were staring each other silently letting their silence talk through their eye lock. Manik sat beside her on the chair and they continued their silence war.


***

After an hour.


They both were seating beside each other with the soft swing of the swing chair. Both had tears in their eyes. Both were finding words to share but their vocals were on leave.


Nandini found it very difficult to seat with him like that so she decided to leave. She got up from her seat and was about to go but couldn't.

Manik had stopped her from leaving holding her wrist . She was startled for few seconds then composed and as well as prepared herself for the next.

Manik grabbed her wrist and made her seat again beside him. She obliged as there were no reason to walked away as she was very much sure of one thing that ' Manik was not at fault. He did it for her sake. '. But she was upset on him because of his impulsiveness.


" Naaannndu " Manik's trembling whisper reached her ears.

She replied nothing but waited for him to open up as she knew he was having very hard and difficult time to share the storm happening inside him.

That's the disadvantage to know your best friend to the backbone.

" woh main... woh yeh sab... I didn't want to hurt you. But I don't know how I did it? Don't know what had gotten inside me that time and tumhe puche bina I took the decision myself. Woh actually na I just couldn't stand those bloody jerks accuses. How could they say those about you? Hote kaun hai woh tumhare bare me ayese bolne wale woh? Bloody morons. Man to kar raha tha to kill those jerks then and there. " he said and clenched his fist in anger.

Nandini still was silent. She sighed a deep breath and waited for his further blurt out.

After taking another few minutes pause he started again composing his anger

" I know what blunder I have done. But trust me I didn't mean to hurt you. Jo main ne kia woh tarika bohot galat tha but all I deed for you Nandu. Trust me. I just couldn't see you crying and being humiliated. So uss time Jo v sahi laga I did. I know I have list you humesha k liye . I have ruined our relationship. I have spoiled your trust on me. But Please mujhe maaf kar do. For once and all please Pardon me please. "

his voice choked and eyes became moist. Tear started forming inside his eyes.

Nandini even could feel his pain clearly but her self respect was stopping that rock inside her heart to be melt. She took few deep breaths to control her tears which were already ready to come out of her eyes finding him so vulnerable and in guilt.

" Nandu kuch bolo gi nahi ? " finally he manged to say what he wanted to say from last an hour.

Nandini neither looked nor replied anything to him from their encounter. But Manik's plead forced her to turn around him.

She gazed at him with eyes full of pain whilst anger . Her gaze made him loose his all very hardly gained courage. He counted his end at her deep painful gape.

" kya bolu Manik? Tumne kuch rakha hi nehi kahne ko. " she replied coldly. Her tone was so ice cold that it became very difficult for Manik to figure out her running mental state.

" Nandini " he called her softly and then said

" I know I can't change what I have done but I can make it up If you will be with me. Main past toh nehi badal sakta but will we try to make our future good forgetting all the mishaps? Can't we be friends again? Can't we start a fresh forgetting all the fiasco? "

Manik asked lovingly.

Nandini was surprised with his words. How easily he could say to start a new phase. But little he could understood the turmoil feeling of a broken girl.Manik was looking at her with all hopes he could gather that time.

Nandini got up silently and started walking towards the bedroom. Abruptly she turned and replied

" To start a fresh we need to end something then only we can start with a closure. But jab humare bich, there's nothing to end toh start kahan se Kare? There's no closure for us as it's our START Manik. It's just the beginning "

she said and walked away leaving him all heartbroken shattered whilst confused.


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I know its very chotusa. but will update asap this tym.

keep liking. commenting. Ignore errors. Stay tuned.😊

Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice...they will soon clear the misunderstanding and will lead the happy life
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U hve penned it so beautifully...
Manik n nandini's inner turmoil...
Its so emotional...
I just want them bck together...
Awesome update...
Thnkz 4 the pm

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