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darkwarrior200

@darkwarrior200

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

ah yaa i understood that after u updated the 3rd chapter. first i was thinking her dad will make her slap mirza so tht he starts hating her n kicks her out of the project.

but anyway...his plan failed and became blessing in disguise...now shes married to mirza just the way we wanted it... how they fall in love will be damn interesting to read

update sooon im so excited
hugsss to u🤗

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

RAZIA froze. What was happening with her?? She was married to MIRZA?? How did this Happen?? MIRZA smiled evilly."Aajse Tum Meri Biwi ho. My wife. Mrs.ALTUNIA MIRZA Tumne Hume thapad Mara Tha na?? MIRZA ko?? Now u will have to pay for it MRS.RAZIA. Ur mine now..Chalo." He held her by her hand and started pulling RAZIA. "Ek minute! Hum yeh Shaadi Nahi maante. Hume Chodiye. Leave me!" "CHUP! Ek aur Shabd Nahi.. Baki Sab bate hum apne Ghar Mei karenge! Chaliye." RAZIA"mamma papa kuch to kahiye."
ILTUTMISH "Aab Tumhari Shaadi ho chuki hai. Jao apne pati ke saath." "Mujhe Nahi Jana.. Plzzz" tears were flowing down her eyes. "stop all this drama and come with me. Driver gari nikalo." "Yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath? Mujhe koi Lekar JA raha hai aur mere parents chup hai?" "I'm your husband RAZIA. No one can stop me. Let's go." RAZIA was not moving. "Alright then RAZIA." He picked up RAZIA in his arms. "Now u have to go." "Leave me!" MIRZA put her inside the car n they both drive off.

In the car-
RAZIA- let me go! Mujhe ghaar Jaana hai.
MIRZA- wo hi to JA rahe hai. OUR house.(with a smirk)
RAZIA- Just for that slap ur doing this to me??
MIRZA (in angry tone) Just a slap?? It was just a slap for u but for me it was an insult. No one can Insult ALTUNIA MIRZA! NO ONE!"
They reached their destination. THEIR HOME.

Inside MIRZA'S mansion.
"Welcome to Your new Home RAZIA. In other words Welcome to HELL." A tear escaped RAZIA's eyes."Aap Meri saath kuch bhi Nahi kar sakte hai. I am RAZIA. I won't give up! I will make ur life hell." "Waah! Tumhari himmat ko salaam RAZIA. U still have the guts to talk to me like that. Waise accha hua ki us ALI QULI se tumahri Shaadi Nahi hua.. I told him that if he marries u then the business deal we are having is cancel. Jhat se maan Gaya! U should be happy RAZIA u got married to me." "Aap jaise Insaan meine kabhi Nahi dekha." MIRZA"Dekho ge bhi Nahi. MIRZA jaisa koi Nahi! Let's not waste time anymore. U go catch some sleep.KAL KE BAAD Suhaag Raat." Then he laughed evilly. "Shabakhair RAZIA. Goodnight sleep tight. Sweet dreams. Because after that u will get nightmares...

MIRZA left. RAZIA broke down.

Precap: MIRZA pins RAZIA on the wall and kisses her on the cheeks.

This update was short I know.. Next part will be long. 😆

CHAPTER 5 : SCROLL DOWN

Edited by cuteshravani - 10 years ago

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RisingPhoenix

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Shravani 🤗

Fabulously written

Read all 4 parts in one go

Awesome story

And why does iltu hate her

And now recenge story between Alzia

So good to read them getting married

Dhamakedar precap

Waiting for next part

Update soon

-love manu-

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darkwarrior200

@darkwarrior200

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Zabardasti ki shaadi. Haaye if this was not mirza then I would be so angry right now with this guy aur meri andar ki naari shakti jaag jaati. But only mirza ko sab maaf hai.😆

Im waiting to read the part when love blossoms btwn the two. Filhaal its so exciting to read I like the dominating mirza sooo much but try n make him a lil gentle on razia haan😛😉

Yaaar jaldi update karo aap bhi na bohot tadpate ho

😆

And overall DHAMAKEDAAR UPDATE👏

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix
Shravani 🤗
Fabulously written
Read all 4 parts in one go
Awesome story
And why does iltu hate her
And now recenge story between Alzia
So good to read them getting married
Dhamakedar precap
Waiting for next part
Update soon
-love manu-

thank u so much!!! for praising me anyways i am soon updating the part 5 hope u'll like it!😃

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

chapter 5

razia lay down on her so call bed. All the incidents which took place came flashing back to her mind. Why did this happen to her? Why was life so miserable for her? It seemed like LIFe itself was tired with razia. First her father and now her SO CAlled Husband. Was there any real relationship in her life? Did anyone really care for her? No, she thought. Her life would go on like this if she doesn't take another step. Take some action. She got married to someone who had insulted her. Who tried to touch her.. "I'm not going to accept my defeat. You don't know me mirza.. The biggest mistake u did was to Marry me. You'll pay for it mirza.

On the other hand mirza was celebrating his first win. He opened up a bottle of Scotch and said "Congrats mirza. You have won the first part. Now Part 2 begins. razia you have to pay for every single insult u gave to me. Now that you are my wife, I can make you do anything. I'm going to make your life a living hell!" mirza laughed evilly.

Both of them were drowned in each other's hatred. Both planning on taking revenge. Destroying each other's life. Little did they know what had destiny planned for them. The First Chapter of their lovestory had already started..

Morning came by.. razia had just gone to sleep. All night she couldn't sleep. Thinking about what to do. Soon sleep hit her and she fell asleep. It had only been an hour. The door burst open and there he was standing. "Itna Khubsoorat Dushmaan. It's going to be hard to concentrate. mirza concentrate." mirza smirked. He moved closer to the bed. He move towards razia. He slowly came closer to razia's ears. "razia. Uth jayiye. Subha hogaya." "razia.." razia smiled in her sleep. "Hayye.. Why is she so beautiful?" It really seemed like they were a couple deeply in love. "RAZIA!" He screamed her name in her ears. RAZIA woke up with a jerk! " aap ka problem kya hai?? Abhi to soi."
"RAZIA what did I tell u. I told u that I'm not going to let u live in peace. It starts from today. Jaldi ready ho jayo. Humare KUCH DOST AANE wala hai. Kapde bahar rakha hai. Get up quickly." MIRZA left the room, leaving an angry RAZIA behind. " He ruined my sleep! Ekto Raat Mei thik se soi Nahi aur aab iska Chera dekh kar Meri din kharab jayegi! Ufff!" RAZIA picked her dress and went straight to get dressed. She had to admit that MIRZA's choice in clothes was indeed good. It was a purple lehenga with black embrodary. She dressed herself up. She applied minimal makeup and wore a Diamond set. It was after all her FIRST DAY after marriage. A maid came inside the room " Ma'am.. Sir aapko bula rahe hai. sab log achuke hai." The maid took RAZIA. Her eyes fell upon MIRZA who was wearing a black sherwani. He looked like a Greek God of hotness! ONE OF MIRZA'S friend spoke up "bhabhi bhi agayi." mirza looked up at the staircase. There she was descending the Stairs. She looked like an angel sent from Heaven. The color of the dress made her skin look for radiant.

"ankhan main teri ajab si ajabi adain hai hoo
dil ko banade jo patang sansain
yeh teri woh hawain hain
ankhan main teri ajab si ajabi adain hai
dil ko banade jo patang sansain
yeh teri woh hawain hain

aai aisi raat hai joh bohut khushnaseeb hai
chahe jisay door sai dunya woh meray qareeb hai
kitna kuch kehna hai phir bhi hain dil main sawal kahi
sapnon main joh roz kaha hai woh phirse kahon yah nahin

ankhan main teri ajab si ajabi adain hai hoo..
dil ko banade jo patang sansain yeh teri woh hawain "

-OM SHANTI OM (ajab si)

razia sat in one side of the room and mirza on the other. The mirza's friends went on with their non stop jokes and gossips procedures.even they had their lunch their and finally at the evening they took their leave and left for their homes. "razia aap upar jaiye. Hum thodi deer aate hai." razia was shocked. She slowly moved towards her room. No she was not going to let that man touch her. Never. She would rather die but not let him touch her. razia sat on the bed, lost in her thoughts. mirza went to the room. "razia Begum." razia came out of her thoughts after hearing mirza's voice. razia's heart started racing. What was he going to do?? No she won't let him touch her. mirza started ascending towards razia. Suddenly razia spoke out in strong voice to mirza." Paas bhi maat Ana. I will kill u. I'm warning u." It was as if razia never spoke. mirza ignored razia completely. He held her arm firmly pinned her to a wall. Their lips were inches apart. " Dont you even dare to warn me. Tumhe iss Galti k liye saza milega." mirza pressed his lips against her cheeks. razia closed her eyes. He slowly moved his lips away. The scent in her body was so beautiful. Her cheeks were so soft. "Yeh Apki saza Nahi hai razia. Yeh to Apka inaam hai. Aapne Qubool jo kiya. Yeh agar saza hota to aap Khush hoti.. Because u liked it. Don't need to be happy razia I am not going to touch u. Ill puke if I touch u." But from inside mirza really wanted to smell her hold her and feel her. mirza quickly went away from there. razia was acting like a drug to him. razia was utterly disgusted. She quickly went to the washroom and started rubbing the place where mirza kissed with water and soap. mirza on the other hand started plotting against razia.

Precap: A new entry. mirza angry.😃 plz like and comment

CHAPTER 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/razia-sultan/4445227/destiny?pn=3

Edited by cuteshravani - 10 years ago

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: cuteshravani
CHAPTER 1 : PAGE 1
CHAPTER 2: PAGE 1
CHAPTER 3: PAGE 1
CHAPTER 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/razia-sultan/4445227/destiny?pn=2

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

They both sat quietly in the dining table. Both eating their dinner in silence. Rather an awkward one. razia finished up her dinner and quietly locked herself up in the room. "Phewww!" She exclaimed. " have to live the rest of my life like this! Chalo mujhe to Bohot nend Arahi hai.." She laid down on the bed. Sleep had just fallen upon her eyes when suddenly she heard a knock. She got up
With a jerk. "Iss Samaj kaun as sakta hai?? Is it a thief?? Or is it that Fattu mirza??" She got hold of a vase and opened the door. She was about to hit The person standing behind the door. mirza got hold of razia's wrist." Now you want to kill me. razia don't worry it's me not a thief." "I know that. That's y I wanted to hit u. Chor aapse accha hai."
"U got a thing for thieves! I like it!" razia rolled her eyes. "Don't waste my time. Just tell me why are you here??"Well Ms.razia I would like to remind you that we are now officially married and i can come to your room whenever I want. In fact why are we not sharing a room?? I mean we are husband and wife. We should share a room. We will share a room. I have made up my mind. From now on you will shift yourself to my room. Don't worry razia I won't touch you. By doing this I'm going to make your life like hell.now come with me. N no ifs and buts.Lets go Ms.razia." razia spoke under her breathe "Jallad kahika!" "Aapne kuch kaha razia??" "Nahi! Chaliye!" razia moved herself to mirza's room. It was indeed very beautiful. The whole room was decorated with the color Grey and black. "Like his character he picked up the colors. Grey! Shallow" razia thought to herself. "This is my room. I don't want to see any changes here. I want the room to be neat like this. I won't share my cupboard with you. You will keep your stuff in the suitcases. You will sleep on the sofa and I will obviously sleep on the bed. Do you snore? I hate snoring. Don't disturb me when I'm sleeping. Do I make myself clear?" mirza spoke in a serious tone and with a stern face. It seemed like razia was back to her school days where her teachers were telling the rules of the school. "Ji!" mirza with a smirk "on second thoughts, you and I can share a bed. You know it will be fun!" razia was shocked "Shut up! I like the sofa better." "Your wish. Don't tell me that I didn't offer you." razia rolled her eyes and made herself comfortable on the sofa. mirza lay down on his king sized bed. The lights were turned off, razia immediately gave a squeak. mirza's eyes flew open "What happened razia?" "Why did you turn off the lights??" mirza a bit irritated "I can't sleep when the lights are on. You are in my room and you have to stay here how I like it. I like the lights off in my room. Go to sleep and don't disturb me!" razia shut her eyes tight. She was never used to the dark. But she thought to herself that she needs to get used to this as her life is dark now. Light was nowhere near her. Soon Sleep overcome her.
mirza's eyes opened in the middle of the night when he heard some noises. He switched on the lights to see who it was. He saw razia struggling in her sleep. She was sweating profusely and was repeating "I am your daughter.. Dad.. Dad.." Tear ran down her eyes. A smile appeared on mirza's face. That's right a smile. A smile which he forced to appear on his face. He was suppose to be happy right. Then why was there a part of him feeling bad for razia. mirza decided not to think about these things and go get some sleep. mirza woke up and saw razia had disappeared from the Divan. mirza went got himself ready and went downstairs. He had his usual Breakfast. He couldn't find razia. He asked one of his maids "razia kaha hai?" "Sir wo thodi der pehle bahar Gayi hai. Madam ne kaha ki wo kuch der baad aajayengi." "Ok. When she reaches home tell her that we have our reception part today. I will pick let up at 8pm. Tell her to be ready. I will send all the clothes and accessories." By saying this mirza headed towards a busy day. The entire day was really tiring for him. He decided to eat his lunch outside. He went to the restaurant Mainland China. Orderd some food for himself and ten drowned himself on his IPad. Suddenly he heard a giggle. He knew that voice. Who was it? He turned to see who it was when he saw razia sitting with two girls and a guy. The guy and razia were sitting beside each other. They were talking giggling. They seemed so close. Anger shot up! Why was razia so close with this guy? Who was he? How dare he sit so close with razia? Questions were flying around his mind when the group got up and left. mirza decided to inquire about this with razia once he reaches home. He tried to enjoy his lunch but his mind kept on moving towards razia and that guy. He finished up his lunch and went back to work. At sharp 8 o'clock mirza went to pick up razia.

Precap: mirzA and razia DANCE. JEALOUSY TRACK CONTINUES...😆

CHAPTER 7 SCROLL DOWN

Edited by cuteshravani - 10 years ago

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

chapter 7

MIRZA's eyes popped out when he saw RAZIA coming out of the house. She looked more of Goddess. Eternal beauty. She was wearing a black sari with red borders.. She had minimal makeup on and she wearing a simple diamond set. MIRZA was proud to call himself her Husband. He was proud that his wife was RAZIA. RAZIA got inside the car. MIRZA was juSt staring at her. "Aren't we getting late?? The party is about to start. Mr.MIRZA!" "You don't have to order me around Ms.RAZIA! Don't forget that I am your husband." RAZIA rolled her eyes and spoke under her breathe "So called Husband." "Ms.RAZIA from tomorrow u will be working in my office as my personal Secretary." "I won't." "Don't u dare say no to me. You know what extent I can go to make you my secretary." "Your threatening me?" " yes I am Ms.RAZIA." "Ufff!" Said RAZIA. They reached the reception center. It was a lavish place. MIRZA got of the car and opened the door for RAZIA "When did you ever learn manners?" RAZIA Mockingly said. MIRZA replied " Ms. RAZIA look I'm not interested to argue with you now.Now RAZIA listen. We have to act like a happily married couple as my family will be present there." RAZIA knodded. "Good girl" MIRZA put his hand in RAZIA's hand "lets go." With a smile. The couple entered the hall. Everyone was mesmerized by the heavenly couple. Both were wearing black, hand in hand and a cute smile plastered to their face. They looked so in love. A couple made in heaven. One of NIRZA's friend said with a mike "Good evening everyone! Welcome to my friend's reception party. As you can see the couple has already arrived. Now I would like MIRZA to introduce us to his partner and share their lovestory with us." He handed over the mike to MIRZA. MIRZA started " As you all know that this is My wife RAZIA. We got married a few days back. Let me share our lovestory with you. We both met in a business conference. Her father and I were doing a project. I saw her and I was lost in her. When I first saw her I knew that I fell in love. Slowly I got response from her as well. Then Suddenly out of the blue she proposed me! I was surprised! Then I said yes and here we are, married." RAZIA felt like killing MIRZA. She proposed to him??!!!! Liar! She would die but not propose to him. RAZIA's phone started to ring "Excuse me." RAZIA moved away from the crowd.

Ten minutes had passed by but no sign of RAZIA. MIRZA was losing his patience. Where was she?? Who called her?? What is making her take so much time?? He decided that he himself would go and check on RAZIA. He excused himself from the party. He went outside and saw RAZIA talking to someone on the phone. She said "No it's not possible. No.. No.. I can't." mirza spoke out "RAZIA." RAZIA "ill talk to u later. Bye" she hung up the call and turned to MIRZA. "Why did you hang up RAZIA?" "Duh! Because I'm done talking" she replied. MIRZA was about to say something when his friend came and said "So you guys are romancing outside?? Huh? Everyone's waiting for you. Come on. Your parents will be here any minute MIRZA." Both of them entered the hall. "MIRZA and Bhabi you Guys have to dance." RAZIA shook her head "No I can't dance." " RAZIA don't lie. Remember our first dance. You were great." MIRZA offered RAZIA a hand. SHE took it and soon the music started.

"Chaahe kuch na kehna...Bhale chup tu rehna
Mujhe hay pata... tere pyaar kaa,
Khamosh chehra...ankhon pe pehra,
Khud hai gawaah...tere pyar ka,"

MIRZA twirled RAZIA and brought her closer to him.

"Teri jhuki nazar...teri har aada..Mujhe keh rahi hay yeh
dastaan
Koi shaqsh hai jo ke in dinon..Tere zehan-o-dil pe hay
chha gaya
Teri jhuki nazar..teri har aada..Mujhe keh rahi hay yeh
dastaan"
Both were lost in each others eyes. They were dancing so gracefully. RAZIA's hair fell infront of her eyes.

"Teri zulf jab bhi bikhar jati hay..,
Aye haseen tu haseen aur ho jati hay..,
Jo kitaabon me padhte rahe aaj tak...,
Woh pari humko tujh mein nazar aati hay..,
Teri hi baahon mein, panaahon mein..Rehna mujhe hardum sada,
Teri hi yaadon mein,nigaahon mein..Rehna mujhe har dum sada,"

MIRZA removed the hair and cupped her face. Their lips were inches apart.
"Chaahe kuch na kehna...Bhale chup tu rehna..,
Mujhe hay pata tere pyaar ka..Khamosh chehra, aankhon pe
pehra,
Khud hay gawaah, tere pyaar ka..Teri jhuki nazar, teri har
aada,
Mujhe keh rahi hai ye dastaan..Koi shaqs hay jo ke in dinon,
Tere zehan-o-dil pe hay chha gaya..Teri jhuki nazar, teri
har aada,
Mujhe keh rahi hay ye dastaan.."

The song ended but both of them were still lost in each other. MIRZA's friend "Kuch toh sharam Karo! Everyone is here!" Both of them came out of their world.

Precap: RAZIA's first day in office.😕 AM I RUNNING TOO FAST??? PLZ TELL ME GUYS

CHAPTER 8: SCROLL DOWN

Edited by cuteshravani - 10 years ago

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darkwarrior200

@darkwarrior200

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

First of all my usual biggg wala hug to the great author of this story for updating sooo fast on my request. Itna fast that on the phone wala scene she wrote jalal instead of mirza hehhehee ...🤗

Im lovinggg the story so far...ek request wapas karni thi...even though mirzas angry with her pls show him getting a bit more weak in the knees for her n a little longer almost romance sessions between them. U see I love angry husbands trying their level best to stop themselves from romancing their wives haha...and this toh is mirza and razia. Already your updates on their almost passionate moments are getting me excited...thoda aur likho na...😆

and nope you are not fast dear...this speed is good enough...I like fast updates anyway. ..the wait makes me depressed and I cant thank you enough for updating sooo soon😊

And lastly...minddd blowwwing super se bhi upar updates.👏...eagerly waiting to see more jealous mirzaaa !!

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