YUVANI : TS I Love You Till The End

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello everyone A verry awesome scenes come in my mind so I decide to write a TS (Tow Short) on Yuvani

Soo let's start

Doctors come out forme the ICU and said-I"m Sorry Mr. Birla She is no more.

he is just quite and set on bench ..

till continued
excited or Boring share your views here wellcome for vall type comments but being honest thankyou.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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what is this...😲
you want TS and give only glumace
eagerly waiting😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinseen

what is this...😲

you want TS and give only glumace
eagerly waiting😊



haha I ' m SORRY yarr i tired to many time write it but if shows some connection problems but otherwise m also exited FOR write this TS stay tuned i"'ll update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds like an interesting story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Doctors come from ICU with a SORRY face AND said I ' m SORRY Mr. she is no more ... Shared - Areee he Kyaaa bakwas kar rahe ho aap doctor ... maa starting crying loudly - wo chali gayi , ho n.a. ho iski zimmedar main bhi hoon Maine hi use Yuvraj me sath movie Devine Jane no bola tha Apr ye sab kaise ho gay and she look at Yuvraj , she come to Yuvraj and slaps him 2 -4 times and shouted on him Maa- th tha n.a. wanna tere vote huye bhi meri suhani ke sath Asia kaise Hua ..tu kyaa kar rha tha beta bol ... Yuvraj just being quite ...tears felling down in he's eyes... flashback ... Same in the morning Suhanibwas upset about dadi she yelling at her all the times some time can toliret but Dadi also insulted her parents too but hide her pain from Maa & Yuvraj because she know as well If they get any clue tht dadi shouted on her then they both get upset too... this she shows tht she is happy but maa unse much bhi Chupta unhe pata chal jata or wo suhani ko bina btaye Yuvraj ko in sab ke bare me btati hai ...Then dono suhani ka mind in sab se htane ke liye uski favourite bacchan sir ki movie dekhne ka plan bnate hai ... but maa could not joint them because of her knees pain... so only Yuvraj and Suhani hi movie dekhne jate hai ... And after the movie ... Yuvani go back to home ...in their Car .. and talking to each-others Suhani - Kimi achi thi n.a. humane bacchan sir ki movie ... Yuvraj (with a gantel smile) - your bacchan sir not bad but no kayo the movie was awesome hai n.a. suhani ... Suhani - aakhir hai ko humare bacchan hi to achi hi honi thi unki movie ... Yuvraj becomes jealous - ohhh but movie dikhani kon laya tha ... Suhani - achaaa achaaa an Juana sadne ki zarurat hi hai waists tuned bhi aap Hume surprised hi kar diva ...the Yuvraj Birla me Seeti (whiste) bjayi wo bhi seat per chad kar... Yuvraj - hahaha even I ' m aslo shocked Suhani and they both starting laughing ... after few seconds suhani said Suhani - THANKYOU &Sorry Yuvraj Yuvraj with shocking expressions - thankyou?& thankyou but for what . Suhani - actually humane tumhari or maa ki sab baatein Sun li thi ...par hme lga agar hum kuch kahenge to maa ko bura lagega isilye chup-chap tumhare sath movie dekhne as gye ... Yuvraj - Ohh to Genius Suhani devi ko sab pebble se pata tha ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Doctors come from ICU with a SORRY face AND said I ' m SORRY Mr. she is no more ... Shared - Areee he Kyaaa bakwas kar rahe ho aap doctor ... maa starting crying loudly - wo chali gayi , ho n.a. ho iski zimmedar main bhi hoon Maine hi use Yuvraj me sath movie Devine Jane no bola tha Apr ye sab kaise ho gay and she look at Yuvraj , she come to Yuvraj and slaps him 2 -4 times and shouted on him Maa- th tha n.a. wanna tere vote huye bhi meri suhani ke sath Asia kaise Hua ..tu kyaa kar rha tha beta bol ... Yuvraj just being quite ...tears felling down in he's eyes... in he's mind meri hi Galati thi flashback ... Same in the morning Suhanibwas upset about dadi she yelling at her all the times some time can toliret but Dadi also insulted her parents too but hide her pain from Maa & Yuvraj because she know as well If they get any clue tht dadi shouted on her then they both get upset too... this she shows tht she is happy but maa unse much bhi Chupta unhe pata chal jata or wo suhani ko bina btaye Yuvraj ko in sab ke bare me btati hai ...Then dono suhani ka mind in sab se htane ke liye uski favourite bacchan sir ki movie dekhne ka plan bnate hai ... but maa could not joint them because of her knees pain... so only Yuvraj and Suhani hi movie dekhne jate hai ... And after the movie ... Yuvani go back to home ...in their Car .. and talking to each-others Suhani - Kimi achi thi n.a. humane bacchan sir ki movie ... Yuvraj (with a gantel smile) - your bacchan sir not bad but no kayo the movie was awesome hai n.a. suhani ... Suhani - aakhir hai ko humare bacchan hi to achi hi honi thi unki movie ... Yuvraj becomes jealous - ohhh but movie dikhani kon laya tha ... Suhani - achaaa achaaa an Juana sadne ki zarurat hi hai waists tuned bhi aap Hume surprised hi kar diva ...the Yuvraj Birla me Seeti (whiste) bjayi wo bhi seat per chad kar... Yuvraj - hahaha even I ' m aslo shocked Suhani and they both starting laughing ... after few seconds suhani said Suhani - THANKYOU &Sorry Yuvraj Yuvraj with shocking expressions - thankyou?& thankyou but for what . Suhani - actually humane tumhari or maa ki sab baatein Sun li thi ...par hme lga agar hum kuch kahenge to maa ko bura lagega isilye chup-chap tumhare sath movie dekhne as gye ... Yuvraj - Ohh to Genius Suhani devi ko sab pebble se hi pata tha ... hmmm to mere surprise ki band hi baj gyi .. Suhani - aisa nhi hai Yuvraj Hume sirf Tina pata tha k hum tumhare sath movie dekhne jayenge he n hi maloom tha ke hum tumhare sath movie itna enjoy big kahenge (And give a sweet smile ) Yuvraj - An company iski Milo madam aapko The Yuvraj Birla ki ... Suhani - huhhh bas Zahra so tarred kar do to chad jate hai chane ke jhad par ... (with littil anger Yuvraj - Ohhh God I was kidding yarr chalo ab muskura bhi do warna maa kahengi tu suhani ko movie dikhane le gya tha ya usse fight krne ... ( started laughing) Suhani still in anger - threw hai tum isi layak ho Jab maa se data devi tab hi Sammy aayegi Yuvraj - ohhh smile n.a. smile n.a. please Suhani and he starting tickling her.. she started laughing ... haha hhhaaahahaa Yuvraj please stop it wrna hum bhi tumne tickle karenge ... the Suhani also started tickled him ... and they forget about tht they are in car and on the road ... Tab hi suddenly unki car kisi truck se takra jati hai ... ******************************** (here"s no words for explain what was situation ) it was a big accident and biggest turn inYuvani ' s life ...everything is finish ... everything silent ...only the noise of the Ambulance. ... flashback over ... Yuvraj"s last words - yes that was only my mistake ... soo How was it guys I hope You guys may like it ... THANKYOU for reading and also Mr/Miss silent readers all type comments allowed but being honest THANKYOU
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Posted: 10 years ago
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story is nice...but its too short
next one please soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Last Part ... Everyone in the Shamshanghat... and only stare at the Fire ... before sometime here was a boddy that name is Suhani but now here's only the wind and the wind taking Suhani name again and again with loud mode... Maa and Sharad just silent & crying... Maa to sharad- beta mujhe ghar le chalo mujhse ab ynha or nhi tehra jayega... she still crying.. Sharad with a sad face and tearfully eyes-ji mausi chaliye ... Maa jate waqt Yuvraj ko dekhti hai or use chalne ko kehti hai but Yuvraj lost somewhere and just silently watching the fire ... Maa again called him but he's not responding. .. Sharad to Maa- mausi hum chalte hai unhe kuch der yahi rehne dete hai ...aap dekh rhi h na kal se na wo kuch bole hai or na kisi bat ka jawab de rhey hai bhabhi ke jane se bahut bada dhakka lga hai guru ko unhe akele rehne dijiye taki woh is baat ko samjh paye or apne aap ko samjha paye, ke jinse Kuch din hi pehle apne pyaar ka izhar kiya tha aaj woh is duniya me hi nhi hai ... Maa- par sharad main use aise nhi dekh sakti, abhi hi to mere bete ka ghar basa tha or ek jhatke me sab bhikhar gya...kyun bhagwan mere bache ke sath aisa kyun kar rha hai usne kya bogada tha tera or Suhani uski kyaa galti thi in sab? Kyun cheen liya meri beti ko mujhse!!!!!... Sharad- mausi aap sahi keh rahi abhi hi to unki duniya basi thi or ek jhatke me sab kuch bikhar gya bhabhi bhi kitni kuch thi us din jaise kisi ne duniya ki sari khushiyan unke aanchal me bhar di ho!!! Flashback, ,,,, Kaise bolu? kya bolu? Roses do? Ya fir dinner par le jau? Ya fir date ?? Nhi nhi wob to over ho jayega and agar main kuch nhi bol paya tho???? Anyways ek bar practice karta hoon! !!!!! .. Mirror ke samne kade hoje practice karta hoon wih easy hoga! Yes that's much better atleast ek try to kr loon ... ''Suhani tumhe mujhse kuch kebna???'' Oppss ye kyaa tha mujhe Suhani ko prapose krna na ki hse mujhe okey ek bar fir se try krta hoon ... '''Suhani you are the most prettiest person in this world I LOVE YOU'' no no it seems to off! Ohh god oky one more time... ''' You know What Suhani I Love You''' whays was this Yuvraj Birla ho gya gya tujhe dude tu itna bhi nhi ho rha Kkk it's final chance,, '''Suhani main tumhe Bhut dino se kuch btana chahta hoo'''' wait wait why should not I try to Being bite of ronantice knees par jaun okey let's go for it Yuvraj ' Ready' ''Suhani main tumbe bhut dino se kuch btana chata hoon par kaise kahu? Kya kahu? Kuch bhi samjh nhi aa rha tha ... tumhe pata hai tumhare meri life ka yeh ek saal mujhe khoobsurat lgane lga,!!, tumhare ki har choti choti argument par mujbe smile aa jati, or pata hai Main jab tumse upset hota hoon na to wo sach-much me nhi hita hai ... mujhe to bas ek aadat ho gayi hai tumare manane ki mujhe hansane ki Or ye aadat hi ab mere jeene ki zarurat ban chuki hai,, tumhe akne aas-paas feel krke bhi main khush ho jata hoon par tum 1 minute ke liye bhi mujhse dur hoti ho to dar jata hoon, ,,, Kyaa hai ye Suhani? Kanhi pyaar to nhi? Or Agar ye Pyaar hai to? ??? I' m happy to accept it ... I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU SUHANI I LOVE YOU par kyaa tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyar karti ho jitna main tumse???? ''''Haan'''' Tabhi uske samne se awaz aati hai Yuvraj open hes eyes immediately. ... He's shocking words ...??? SUHANI...!!!!!!! Suhani- han Yuvraj yeh hum hi hai.. sorry par humne tumhari sari batein sun li or hum bhi tumse kuch kehna chahte hai ... Yuvraj haan bolo ''Suhani hugged him fastly and kiss him on he's checks. ... I LOVE YOU TO I LOVE YOU TO I LOVE YOU YUVRAJ TILL THE END OF MY LIFE!''' Hum kabse is din ka intezar kar rahe they Or aaj jaker yeh din humari zindagi me aaya hai ...Thankyou Yuvraj ...thankyou so much I love you .. Yuvraj reaplied'''Iove You To Suhani'''! And he hugged her back! !!! Flashback over Maa look at Yuvraj and suddenly she said ''chal sharad''' Yuvraj ko yanhi rukne de, , And then they both leav... Yuvraj in he's way just silently watching the fire and tears felling down from he's eyes and after few secends he fainted down and he's heartbeats is stoped a littil poison bottle in he's hand... He said loudly '''''' Suhani''''' I LOVE YOU MAIN BHI TUMHARE PAS AA RHA HOON ... The Ends... thanx for reading All typ clmments are allowed but being honest... Sad but happy to for me I hope I'm not disappointed anyone and if I could so I'm sorry to You guyzz thankyou
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice but sad
agar bura na lagy tu kia
koei happy ending story likh sakti hu
kuonk show mein bhi sadness chal rahi hai
thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinseen

nice but sad

agar bura na lagy tu kia
koei happy ending story likh sakti hu
kuonk show mein bhi sadness chal rahi hai
thanks




aweee it's just a short One so aise hi aaya mind me 😉
Edited by smriya - 10 years ago

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