Nibir ff : Miracle Happens\\\\\\ (part 19 on page 117) 18/02 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanx...a lot guyz...for trusting me & supporting me...here is the next part...

HAPPY READING...


PART 2


MIRACLE HAPPENS




The groom was continuously looking at her...he was mesmerized by ethereal beauty of her...👏...but wid dat he also noticed...the fear in her eyes...which she was trying to hide from the world...the nervousness in...her face...which made her lost in her own world...

on seeing dis he went on deep thought...why she is so upset???...Is she is not happy wid dis marriage???...or the reason behind her fear and nervousness is something else???...den a thought came in his mind...may be she is going to start her new life wid him...who is totally stranger to her...dats y she is nervous...

He wanted to talk to her...to ask her Is she is alright????... but before he could speak a soft voice came in his ear and broke his trance...it was his mother's voice...Kabir kitna dekhoge use...shadi k baad to saari zindagi...tumhe use hi dekhna...now pay attention to d rituals and she giggled...

Yes it was kabir...Kabir kumar the heart rob ... who can win the heart of any girl just by looking at her wid his hazel brown eyes...his eyes has such intense magical spark that can make any girl fall for him...but wid dat he is also the world famous choreographer...who lives in dubai wid his mother ...

Both groom and bride seating beside each other...following rituals of der marriage...kabir was seriously paying attention to all d rituals...while...[B]nisha...physically...she was present...there...but mentally she was lost...she was lost somewhere...else...she was behaving like a robot who follows all d instructions of his boss
...and here his boss was pandit...absentmindly she was following all d rituals of her marriage...

Den a time came...wen both bride and groom have to hold each others right hand...she absent mindly placed her hand infront...so dat he can hold...as soon as he hold her hand...his touch in her hand...gave 100 volt shock to her...and made her to come back to reality ...while...he noticed dat...as he touches her hand her hand started shivering...which was unnoticed by everyone...

He wanted to ask her dat wat is wrong wid her?????Is she is not comfortable wid his touch????but he choose to remain silent...at dat time...becoz d rituals are going on...and if he asked such type of questions to her...dis will not only create scene...but will also provoke people around dem to gossip about her...and he dont want to make fun of her infront of everyone...as he himself confused and was not sure about her feelings...den how can he take such decisions because of his own predication...

all d rituals of der marriage were smoothly followed by dem...den a time came wen he lifted a coin wid sindoor and filled in her hair parting...as he filled...A lone tear came in her eyes...now she knew...she knew dat...d situation was out of her control...and...she cant do anything ...d only thing now she can do was dat... she have to... accept dis marriage yes she have to accept dis marriage whether she want it or not...and den she again lost in her own world...to hide the pain of her heart...

den pandit ji asked groom to tie mangalsutra...on her neck...
he came close to her to tie mangalsutra...he again noticed dat she is not comfortable wid his closenesss...and he again choose to remain silent...

After tying mangalsutra...he immediately moved back to his original position ...becoz he dont want to make her feel uncomfortable...he dont know y ...y her sadness ,her touch , her nervousness affecting him so much... d only thing he know dat he cant see her in such state...but the behaviour of her somehow made him tensed...

yes he was tensed and he was right in his place...and...how can he not be tensed...aftrall...seeing his beautifull bride in such a state could make any groom tensed...


Hey guyzzz in this part i described more abt kabir's perspective...as it is also verry important for dis story...i hope u all will understand...but in d nxt part der will be again nisha's perspective...

To know about nisha's perspective stay tuned wid dis story

Chappals tomatoes and your criticisms are most welcome as always... 😉
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
res
unres...

sorry for late..
kabir perspective - beautifully described👏 👏 👏
kabir caring
kabir loving
nisha k comfort ka kitna khayal hai ...
omg he is so cute...
sari ladkiyan aisa hi koi chahti h...

kabir k bare m uske vichaar k bare m janne k bad i m damn sure that
ha sach m bht accha wala miracle hone wala hai nisha k life m...

loved it

Edited by naina.majik - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Niha205

nimmi👏kabiraaa 😳

yup nihu dadi 🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update 👏... loved it ... but it was so small ... plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update Loved it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Awesome update luved it 👏 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maniwood

Awesome update Loved it😃

Thankyou...so much dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suhani_12

Awesome update luved it 👏 👏

thankyou...so much dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nimisyyy🤗

I love This part more❤️ bcz I love the way U described how Kabir Noticed his Wifey's every action..👏👏👏👏

Loved How Kabir understood Nisha's uncomfortness frm her choti choti antics dat were unnoticed by everyone..!!!😳 I loved the way he deided to reamin silent b4 others..😳 I loved the way he understood how his silence wl b helpful to her...😳 I loved how he care 4 His wifey who is also a stranger 4 him just like he for her.. yet he thinks abt her comfortness & happiness😳 Nishu is really lucky yaar... dat she is geeting Kabiraaa...!!!!!❤️

Superbly written Nimissy🤗 Ab tak Niyu Mamma, Buansi(Mansi) & Natz sissy inn theenom ke stories ke Kabira made me Awww...😆🤣 But today The Kabira U described here also made me Aww...☺️

I loved how Kabira after tieing Mangalsutra behaved 👏👏👏 Usne suddenly apne aur Nishu ke closeness ko hata diaa...😳 So UNDERSTANDING yaar.. dat too they r STRANGERS😉 Abhi se itna Khyayal hai toh aage kaise hogaa.. Awww...

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write more🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣


PS:

Yaar I really want sumone like dis as my partner in my life(My SIrphira) who understand me silently without words...!!! Just like Kabira understood Her Nishu here😳☺️
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update nimi
Can't wait what will happen next
Countinue soon

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