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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#731

:) Chapter 6 was nice...
It kinda showed that they have started feeling good with each other's company...
So she broke up with akshay...
And last scene? Did they kiss?

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#732

Chapter 7 was awsum...
They had their first kiss...
It was nice...
She has invited him for something... Whats the occasion?

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#733

Amazing updTe
Can't believe that was just Khushi's dream lol
Now both of them will be thinking about whether they love each other or not let's see how they deal with it

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mayapvj

@mayapvj

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#734

Interesting prologue...am sure the story will be full of spice,action and things nice

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hiraah

@hiraah

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#735

hey I was just clearing my inbox when I saw your PM abut this story and I loved it! I haven't gotten a chance to read any stories at all cause I've been caught up with something. Anyways I am loving this story and I cant wait to start on it. in fact, its gonna be the first story I start reading once I can. sooo sooo sooo sorry bout the totally late reply.. and that too for the teaser!! worst timing ever.

Prepare yourself im gonna be leaving comments like I own IF to make up for my super late timing.

With love,

Hiraah

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hiraah

@hiraah

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#736

Hello, i lost all my inbox messages so i lost your story too but i have found it and read all of the first thread.

Why is there only a "like" button??? I would much rather click the "love" button. Your story was absolutely amazing! I loved it!

I found the rabba ve moments to be my favs but more than that i think i loved it when Arnav and Khushi joke with each other.. thats so ultra cute..

When arnav imitated khushi while in the car, their little joke while dancing and of course their over acting to tease each other at the last part were all very well written and actually made me laugh. (Not forgetting the part where khushi though her hone wala pathi's name is actually chote!! LOL!!)

As for the kiss.. ooh la la (blush blush) im so glad they were not interrupted like they usually were.. finally yar! Plus the kiss on the cheek.. its amazing how you filled a simple act with so much meaning, emotions and sexual tension.. you truly are a good writer.

so as you already know im in love with your story so i will be moving on to the next part (you have made me an addict!)

With love,

Hiraah

Ps: you're lucky india forums doesnt allow spamming or i would have commented after every update 😆