AsYa OS: Crying On a Suitcase

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Sathya

@IamCrazySeven

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

awesome story 😳 but our emotionally challenged ahmed khan did it totally opposite 😆

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jaanu013

@jaanu013

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Beautiful os..it refreshed the memories..asya..one of the best scenes of QHloved asad's confession...beautifully written.

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

That was such a cute os loved it

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Mitwaaa

@Mitwaaa

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Thank you all so much for your kind words! I'm glad people liked my first ever OS. Ya'll are so sweet:)

Also, I don't know how to reply to each individual comment... sooo this thank you is for everyone who commented!

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Klondy

@Klondy

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Aww, that was totally adorbs! I'm dixi from MED by the way 😉😉😉 of PKHM!!!

So glad that you finally decided to write an OS - I hope you found the writing and the response immensely gratifying. This was great!

Loved the twin points of view and Dillu's intervention of course - brought back memories of that episode when we really thought that this is exactly how it would be but then the CVs made Asad do a take-back. So annoying that was.

I also like how you wove through their previous Mitwa moments - always so dear to me and I always wanted Asad to realize that Zoya was never a misfit! That his actions and words made him more unfit for her - good that you made him say it. Zoya deserved that and the show always let us down on that front.

Great job, and do come back to write more! Hope you find more inspiration over the summer.