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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It very much
Sia's POV was Beautifully Written she can felt Haya's presence
Flashback was nice
Sia noticed many things
Tahir at home he blames himself for everything
Noa is a true friend
Tahir also felt Haya's presence
Let's see what happens next
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Edited by _Nikita_ - 10 years ago

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anumol

@dazzles

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Read the complete parts in one go.you make me cry.simply wonderful...loved the equation between sia and haya.and also thahir and noa.plz update part soon.amazing story.i can feel the pain of thahir.

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

tahir can feel haya
tarih back in that flat
what happened to thm
haya and tahir pyaar so pure
sia noa perfect couple
continue soon

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Now That was a great update..! I liked it.!
Tahir at his home and his love for Haya..Had tears in my eyes..😔It was actually painful to read Tahir's thoughts..I just loved the way you have shown Tahir-Haya's relation.👍🏼 *sniff*
On the other hand, I have too many questions arising in my mind which are making me very restless. Hoping in next update at least few could be answered.
I feel bad for Sia as well, coping to the loss of her bestie and facing something unexplainable..*sigh*
For Noa, I think the same as all he is the best friend and best partner for them.

Update soon..thanks for pm. Keep writing.

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kunchu

@kunchu

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Reserveeed😳

Unres.

Oh my.

You took my neend away, dear KK. Kal agar main you-know-who (uska naam kaun likhega) ke aage so gayi toh I shall blame you🤣

But khair, darta kaun hai😛

That was a beautiful piece of work re. I think I said your last piece of work was your best but I take it back.. this takes the cake. Completely.

I know you will surprise me the next time you write but for now, I shall say this was the best you've every written ... as far as I think. Starting with the part about the dreams.. I already told u how beautiful that is.. and even better was the part where Haya was beside the wind chimes. It was just too too beautifully sketched.. and of course the sketch, her thoughts.. the list will go on😳

My favourite lines were the ones you wrote about sketches.. about someone else feeeling the magic of your work.. it's so true na? I think the update had you embedded in it.

Parts of it brought tears to my eyes.. Noah is just the perfect friend. Really love his character.. and of course Sia.. the part in the kitchen was sad

So was the part about Haya's Ammi..

And the end. God, KK. The to-do list was ...it left me speeechless! Seriously.

Who would do that? Aise ladke nahi milte... mujhe ek dhoodhke do😭

Tahir stole my heart away. I think I am in love with him.. and this story. Sighhh. Their friendship is so beautiful.

Dare I say the update was too short? It was over before I knew it😭

I want more😭

Kab likhogi?

Love u for this updateee. Jaldi likhoo.. roka bhi toh kahan?

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Awsum Update Heli Di..😊 Im glad Tahir is holding up. First Tahir felt her and now Sia. 😊 Tahir-Haya's love is soo pure! ❤️ Really Men like Tahir are a rare find! 😳 Mujhe bhu laa do aisa Di! ❤️ Thanx fr pm. Continue Soonz!