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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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+ 32

Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

yay! me first!!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
Awesome update di

loved it😃

Tahir's story was really touching! The kids of well-off families get everything other than their own parents attention n affection! Money doesn't buy everything!😒 Tahir chose to follow his dreams instead of his father's business!😃 good choice!👍🏼 Tahir thinks Haya is far away, little does he know, she was just beside him!! 😳

Tahir finally decided to go back to his home! He called Noa, both friends going to visit his home!😊

the flashback was sweet! 😳

Tahir-Haya's first meet! beautiful!! their convo was superb!👏 beautifully written! "There will always be sunshine", maybe Tahir was back to get that!😉

do continu soon😃

thanks for pm😊

Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

really very nice

haya and tahir meet

rainbow and painting scene

awesome ...

tahir past different from other

haya miss wind chem or sunshine

continue soon

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Awsum Update Di..😊 Haya-Tahir's first meet was beautiful! ❤️ Love Their moments! Tahir's Monolouge was beautifully written. 👏 Im happy wid the fact that Tahir chose to persue their dreams all thx to Noa..😊 Otherwise, Mr Ahmed Khan wasnt there to support his son nor his own mother. Thanx fr pm.. Continuee Soonz!

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

There's always a sunshine...

so true...no matter how dark the clouds get...there's always a silver lining...no matter how dark and brooding the night falls...there's always a sunshine...

loved the update...it requires guts to abandon the vast empire waiting for u, And instead follow the path of your dreams...glad that tahir chose his dreams over his father's...

continue soon heli

love
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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Kk!! 🤗

Itna chota update *sobs*

Kk mujhe aur chahiye tha *cries harder*

Oh well! Jo mila usme khush hoon 😳

That was sooo nice.. I loved their first meet and wanted to read more but the update ended.. Sighhh.

Koi na I'll wait.

Oh and I loved the part where she looks at the sketch of the mother and the baby.. The part about the sunshine was beautiful :')

Coming to the beginning.. Yeah I always am twisted lol

I see.. Tahir didn't have a happy childhood.. After all he didn't get the one thing children desire and need.. Love.

And perhaps when life did offer him that through Haya, she too was taken away. Sigh.

Unfairness of it all.

Continue soon kk.. U know how much I love this 😳

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Wow di...

Mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Do continue soon

And thanks for the pm

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Swara85

@Swara85

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

A childhood without parents' love and affection is what I wish and pray that no one should get. Its so painful and hurting when your parents involve themselves into work without even a single loving glance at you..That's all that children wish for and then starts the "longing" thing..😔
But so glad that Tahir had Noa by his side to support him and that he chose HIS DREAM over his father's.
Loved Tahir's part.👍🏼

Tahir-Haya's meet was lovely.. The rainbow caused by the windchime..Oh well thats the most beautiful thing I get to see in my room, every morning.
Trust me, that is actually a beautiful view..I love it..❤️

The part where Haya was watching the sketch and sunshine part..that was such a beautiful part and beautiful thought..Sketches..*sigh*

Oh I loved the update..👍🏼Thanks for pm.

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Sanju

@Sanjh30

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Awesome! 👏
Very well written 👏
Loved it very much,please continue soon 😃

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

it was just beautiful though Tahir's flashback was painful as it happens with money accumulating parents' children.it felt incredibly awesome when he chose to follow his dreams rather than inherit the dreams which lacked zeal and enthusiasm of one's own.the lines depicting the conversation are worth applauding.😊😊

awaiting to read the next.

thanks for the pm and do continue soon.

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Part 2
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Loved Haya-Sia's bonding
They shared such a Beautiful relationship
Loved Noa-Sia first meet
Tahir is lifeless n Haya wanted forgiveness
Amazingly Written
Thanks for the PM

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