Whispering Shadows part 8- page 12 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
A long update after a long time!
Wonderful update di
loved it
Tahir is planning enthusiastically for his trip, Noa-Sia will be accompanying him a few days later! Tahir's painting was beautiful! He met his parents on Noa's insistence, but still hadn't forgiven them, it's not easy! The little flashback was painful!
Haya's talk was nice, a second chance will be interesting! She's accompanying him in the trip, that's good!
Sia gave a list of do's don'ts, n gave Tahir the space he wanted. Let's see what is in stock for her, it seems very intriguing!
Tahir-Haya's flashback was beautiful! Sweet!
Tahir reached Haya's home, her parents welcomed him warmly! I love the relation shared by Haya's Ammi-Tahir, a mother son duo, just perfect! He considers himself guilty of her death!
Next part is going to be interesting!
do continu soon
thanks for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Aftr a long wait.loved it.more than that, I cried while read it.
I wish the reunion of Haya and Thahir even though knowing that it didn't happen.
But true love never dies.its become strong and mature with time.
Hatts of you too.loved it.
And I hv no words.
Edited by dazzles - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Really nice
Tahir want to fulfill her dreams
Noa sia helping him
Tahir second chance he deserves it
Tahir at haya home nice
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
If was truly Wonderful
Tahir wanna meet Haya's parents alone Sia-Noa will join him letter
Let's see how this trip will change their life
Loved Tahir-Haya's flashback moments Sooo Sweet n Beautiful
Loved the way Haya's parents welcome Tahir
Amazingly Written
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Amazing update
So heart touching
Loved it
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Dearest dearest Kunchu...

What can I say about this masterpiece of yours? It makes me cry, each and every single time I read an update it makes my heart heavy and my eyes wet.

THe emotions are so strong... they stir various sentiments deep within the heart.

It is impossible for anyone to not feel for the four, especially for the deceased Haya and her love Tahir.


Their bond, words do no justice to that! It's unexplainable and SO strong!



That voice... whose was it?




Sia and Noa... especially Sia... she's such a sweetheart 😉 She literally mommies Tahir before he goes to the journey, I am glad you showed this unique friendship between Tahir and Sia, it's almost like blood. I mean Sia can easily don the role of his sister or mother any second! Beautiful it was, her care didn't come across as an over the top mollycoddling but it just came as a concerned and worried friend/sister.

Noa and Tahir, their bond is beautiful, literally!




Brothers from another mother eh? The bromance between them is tear jerking. The concern, reading between the lines and if needed even to fight, even if that means the betterment of another person! That's true friendship! *kudos*


Sia and Haya... soul sisters 😳 The way their friendship is formed, the way they understood each other... I don't think I have to write more, you exactly understand what I mean!


Sia and Noah ☺️ Soft spot for them. The "perfect" couple with their silly fights and squabbles and doses of romance ☺️ But I LOVE IT that when it comes in times of crisis, they mature into friends and their relationship takes one step back for friendship to come on fore. THe continuous shifts in their relationship from friendship to love to understanding to compassion are (seamless transitions btw) so wonderful. Especially when Sia consoles Noa ... EPIC! *claps*


Haya and Tahir... I want to cry, sob, scream and then hug them. Truly nothing sets them apart... only and only if she hadn't died! *cry*

I am so emotional for this couple that I can't say anything.

I used to think that why... why does Tahir hate his parents SO much! But with the little excerpt from past... to think of it... I don't think even I could forgive them...

Well justified!

Love,

Armageddon (yeah just wanted to put extra tashan)

Btw... I have a teeny weeny gift coming up for you!

P.S : This is for the group


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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Wow di...
Awesome update..
Loves it...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Heyloo KK!
Lord! It feels weird to be back here.. and posting something.. it feels as though it has been forever! Anyway back to this.. I finally had some time to read😳
Beautiful and touchy chapter KK.. I swear, I had goosebumps when Tahir was painting and Haya was 'with' him... that part was so beautiful!
Ah.. Sia and Noa are seriously the most amazing friends he could ever have.. I am touched by their friendship *sniff* I am glad though, that he finally spoke to his dad and mum..
Ah I see.. so this is what happened that snatched Haya away from all of them... God.. Ok, to be honest, he shouldn't really blame himself or his parents for what happened.. it was just fate.
Anyway..
The flashback was beautiful.. especially the dargah bit U know this story touches me so deep sometimes...
And the end.. I am speechless.. I love love love his relationship with Haya's Ammi.. it was just beautiful and poignant..

Write soon KK🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Part 1 and Part 2-
Very interesting and catchy story. I loved the equation between Sia and Noah at once and then I loved all those italic part from Haya ... her pain is so much visible even after dying she is not able to go and her Tahir even after living he is not able to live anymore. Very good update. I will be seen here around more now. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Part 3 - Part 5
Loved the parts. I love Noa a lot among all he proves to be a true friend and a loyal boyfriend. I love Sia and Noa how they are helping Tahir. Heart goes out for Tahir and then flashback is beautifully written. Someone wants to help Haya but in what way? She is dead. I have a feeling that if Tahir is also dying in the end but I wish it doesn't end that way. Ok it's on you keep the good work.😊

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