A OS about passion, desire and love of sherdha.....

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I was thinking of writing something so i did...i hope u guyss will like it...i just gave it a try...pardon me for any mistake if i have done in writing...as first time i am writing something...and if u guyss feel like giving any suggestion plz do...
The party was so boaring for them utill sher and shraddha noticed eachother...
Among many guests, shraddha noticed just one. He was in a corner of the room, holding a glass of whiskey and talking, who knows what about. She did not care, she just wished that he noticed her.
His style was unique; he wore a blue jeans a white shirt, and stylish boots, rustic and modern at the same time. He had beautiful light blond spiky hair, neither short nor long. His smile illuminated his face and his eyes were as a brown almost black and deep as ocean.
Shraddha wore a dress of silk crepe, lightweight, with stylized red roses, which praised her curves; the lateral tear brought sensuality to her walk,sometimes revealing, sometimes not. On the back, a deep neckline revealed a tan from the sun and loose strands of hair from a bun half stuck and half loose. She wore red sandals, very high, with only two straps and two small diamond stone in each. A luxury! Her eyes were black and almond-shaped, and her smile was charming.

She decided to change seats and stood a little distant, but facing him. After a few minutes,still engrossed in the conversation with summer and bikas...

sher looked toward shraddha, just a glance and kept on talking. But that image of just a few seconds touched him. He looked back, and, so,yes, looked at her. Her eyes, the detail of loose hairs, her feet in beautiful sandals, her skin tanned from the sun, he heard no more of what summer and bikas was saying, he was lost in the figure of that woman.
Shraddha was staring at sher. They smiled.Summer nudged him and asked if he had heard what he was talking about. He apologized and went straight to shraddha.
She began to feel the sweat on her hands, a good feeling invaded her body, tried to disguise it, but she had no more time, her body throbbed emotions, of wanting to know, not knowing what could be, and not knowing if it could happen.
Sher stopped in front of Shraddha got a few seconds in silence, and without saying a word, stole a kiss. She gave in to the kiss, a quick kiss, a touch of lips.

He brushed a strand of hair away from her face, smiled, and invited her to dance. Their bodies moved together, involved in the magnificent song of

chup tum raho chup hum rahe khamosi ko khamosi s...baat krne do...

it was as if they were immersed one in another. Shraddha tried to ask his name, gently, sher put his finger on her lip and nodded no. He joined his face to hers and whispered into her ear that there was no need to say a word, just feel.
Sher just wanted to feel her in his arms.The attraction was immediate. They looked at each other, and delicately, they joined their foreheads; his hand slid over the neckline of her dress, their eyes met and they kissed.

A passionate kiss. The song ended, he held her by the hand, and they walked towards the exit. They went out arm in arm, full of passion and ready for living a beautiful love story or just an unforgettable love night...

Do tell me gyyss how was it...THANKU!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haaaye ☺️ It was sensually beautiful from A to Z 👏 😳 So romantic and so not me 😆 I just know how to write tragic and sorrowful stories 😆 In my stories lead characters would only begin to romance on the verge of separation 😈 🤣 Mujhe bi itna romantic kahani likhna sikho 😆
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Originally posted by: Woh.Ai.Ni

Haaaye ☺️ It was sensually beautiful from A to Z 👏 😳 So romantic and so not me 😆 I just know how to write tragic and sorrowful stories 😆 In my stories lead characters would only begin to romance on the verge of separation 😈 🤣 Mujhe bi itna romantic kahani likhna sikho 😆


first of all thnkuuu so much atleast someone commented on my OS.. i was so heart broken that no one commented on my OS is it that bad???i dont think so its good... actually!
nd u r already too good at writing so u dont need to learn it from me...dear! nd thnku again for lykng bcoz its my very first OS...i never wrote any thing before...nd it suddenly came into my mind when i was watching a movie called TAKEN...where female lead takes his frnd to a pub and return as a couple...so i just think of it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sher has spiky blond hair...? 😆 I can't imagine him like that..😆
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Originally posted by: BrenySana

Sher has spiky blond hair...? 😆I can't imagine him like that..😆


i just thought that he will look good in blond hair nd spik means not that spiky a little as he does in the first epi...nd u dont lyk the else part..??
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Originally posted by: zeba_kausar


i just thought that he will look good in blond hair nd spik means not that spiky a little as he does in the first epi...nd u dont lyk the else part..??

it's not that I don't like...its better than the boring fake love we've seen from them recently...but I'm not crazy about this story coz I want it slow...love slowly but passionately...the idea was nice though...it's really good that at least you make an effort to write on them... if you have time..then can you write about something like showing Sher's desire for her... to love her like this obsessive lover who's just crazy about her and Shradha just being this ultimate shy girl who's kinda avoiding his love... I don't want Shradha expressing her love bcoz the shy girly type suits her better...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BrenySana

it's not that I don't like...its better than the boring fake love we've seen from them recently...but I'm not crazy about this story coz I want it slow...love slowly but passionately...the idea was nice though...it's really good that at least you make an effort to write on them...if you have time..then can you write about something like showing Sher's desire for her... to love her like this obsessive lover who's just crazy about her and Shradha just being this ultimate shy girl who's kinda avoiding his love... I don't want Shradha expressing her love bcoz the shy girly type suits her better...


thnku for ur appreciation...i'll try to write something as u want...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful! 😃
Loved it ji,please write some more 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Beautiful! 😃
Loved it ji,please write some more 😃


Thnku...i'll try to write some more...

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