RaGa OS: Symbol of our Love

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ra(looking for Gayatri): Bhanu,Gaytari kahan hai? Kabse hum unhe dhund rahe hai?

Bh: Hukum,Ranisa raj bagichey mein hai Rajmata ke saath.

Ra: Thik hai,aap jaiye.

Ranaji runs off towards the Raj bagicha where he sees his mother and Gayatri playing with the heir of the royal family,Rajyavardhan.

Ranaji was the happiest man since his son took birth. He considered himself really lucky that Gayatri is his wife. He thinks about the past when he and Gayatri were married in certain circumstances. He blamed himself for the death of his first wife and during that time,Gayatri came in as his saviour and showered him with so much love and trust that he came out of the guilt he carried in himself for years. It was during that time,Ranaji fell in love with Gayatri and they became one. After some months,Gayatri announced that she is going to become a mother. Ranaji was so happy and out of happiness,tears trailed off from his eyes. Gayatri felt bad and assured him that nohing will happen to her and to their child. After some months,Gayatri gave birth to their son and Ranaji named him Rajyavardhan.

His came back from his thoughts when Rajmata tapped on his shoulders.

RM: Indravardhan,aap kab aaye?

Ra: Maa,hum abhi aaye hai aur apa sabko andar dhund rahe thhe ki Bhanu ne bataya aap aur Gayatri yahan hai.

RM(smiling): Koi baat nahi. Humein andar jana hai. Parso,Ramayan ka akhand paath rakhwaya hai,uski taiyaari karni hai. Aap yahan Gayatri bahu ke saath rahiye.

Ra: Ji.

Rajmata leaves.

Ranaji walks towards the gazebo where Gayatri was sitting with Rajyavardhan in her lap. Gayatri sensed that Ranaji is here. An instant smile cropped up on his milky face and turned towards to face him.

Ra(faking disappointment): Yeh kya baat hui,Gayatri? Aap humesha kaise samajh jaati hai ki hum aaye hai?

Ga: Kyunki humein pata hai.. Aapka aur humara dil ek saath jura hua hai isiliye pata chaljata hai.

Ra(with a smile): Kaisi hai aap? Aapko hum andar dhund rahe thhe,baad mein Bahnu ne bataya ki aap yahan hai.. (looking towards Rajyavardhan and picking him up in his arms) arey mera baccha.Apne Papa ko bohut miss kia aapne? Papa ne bhi aapko bohut miss kia..

Ranaji blows raspberries on his stomach which makes Raj giggle and clap his hands. Ranaji fondly pecks his forehead and hugs him. Raj also hugs him with his little hands.

Gayatri watches this scene and it brings tears in her doe-shaped eyes. She prays to her Bhagwaan to keep her family happy and always closely knitted.

Ra(turning to Gayatri): Aapne humein zindagi ki sabse anmol tohfa diya hai,Gayatri. Thank you.

Ga: Yeh sukh toh aapne hi mujhe diya hai,Ranaji. Raj ke aane se aapki khushi char gooni zyada hogayi,isse bari khushi ki baat aur kya hosakti hai mere liye. (she nears him and softly pecks his cheeks) I love you,Ranaji.

Ra(with a smile): Hum bhi aapse bohut zyada pyaar karte hai aur humesha karte rahenge,Gayatri. (turning to Raj) aur aapse bhi,Raj.

*The End*

*My first RaGa OS.. Please,do hit like button and do comment*.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Great os please keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it..very well written..😛
please do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very sweet os beautifully written thnx
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os...loved it...u make this so beautiful and simple...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice
Loved it 👏
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#7
Beautiful OS, loved it, do write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely..


glad to see you here.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

lovely..


glad to see you here.


mannu di.. Aapko bhi yahan dekhke accha laga.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A sweet little OS. Loved it.

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